Arhi:OS| Salvation| Expressions of Love - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
That was soo amazing
Loved it
I m soo glad ..we are getting to read your work
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Oh my god, IT WAS FANTASTIC dear.
Arnav's guilt and agony was left like own, marvellous impact of words weaved, a seer magic.
Hope to have a heart of khushi, such loving and forgiving.
What a beautiful masterpiece it was.
All together a new meaning of salvation.
Loved it, loved it.
Thank u is very small word in return to what u gave
Thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
That was really beautifully written ... his guilt is killing him ...
It's funny how connected they are ...
she could make out why he was so upset and avoiding her on this particular day ...
But her simple words " it doesn't matter " set him free from the load he has carried
for three whole years ...
Thank you Nmyra ...

Just watched the hot star episodes ... it really is great to see them both
back again ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Every line , heck every f**king word holds a gamut of emotions and expressions . I generally read fast , but here I HAD to slow down, savor every feeling, cry with ASR , laugh with Khushi,sigh with ASR, smile with Khushi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such an emotional shot.. Arnav's pain, guilt on all time high.. but happy to see his Khushi understood him like always and she like the balm once again soothed him.. his benediction. that is what he calls her.. well Arnav she is that and you need to open your arms and take all the love, care, trust she offers without any doubts as she doesn't even wants to remember the past as she is moving with you in present together with you towards a amazing future ahead.. loved this soul stirring shot a lot.. ARSHI our perfect jodi with lots of pains of past and tests have come out winner with their love and devotion for each other.. Happy to see you back with such wonderful shot. thanks. best wishes. ❤️😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
A beautifully and brilliantly written shot. Arnav's guilt was well depicted!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
This had so much soul & depth. This was Arnav Singh Raizada with all his imperfections & flaws. And, this was what I missed watching on the show. His complexities, insecurities, guilt, & his love & utter devotion to the woman who holds his heart, it is amazing. And, of course, then, there is Khushi. The only woman who is so attuned to all the ebb & flow in Arnav's emotions. I love the way she handled the situation. I love their interactions. I loved this OS. She is his salvation & I love how aptly & beautifully that has been portrayed here.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Povs their feelings with stupendous. Emotions n words..

Marvelous writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: BlueMystique

I'm here, I'm here. Hmmm...what do I say about this that I haven't told you already?

Oh, let me talk about that banner. Who could have made such an absolutely STUNNING piece of art? I mean, everyone was probably just struck by it's beauty and never even bothered to scroll down!

LOLOLOL

Seriously though, this OS was so quintessentially YOU. Rafa once told me "It doesn't really end for you until it's a happy ending, right Ridz?". I'd like to borrow that and say, it doesn't really start for you until their in at least a dash of angst. But I love love love your angsty Arnav/ASR, so no complaints there. This OS was just SO them, that it brought me back to the good old days, more than the Ek Jashn has managed to so far. His guilt, his self-recrimination...her understanding and forgiveness, this is what makes couple and you've highlighted that wonderfully in the OS.

Now update those damn FFs!



*Sends Parcel-wala Chumma's across the Atlantic*

I do have a rather nifty banner don't I - I really must say my tech skills are all the rage now-a-days. *smug-grin*

*ducks chappals*

Accha baba! THANK YOU! Just no more justify-ing lectures - and as for the rest - like I said in gmail, it doesn't feel right unless it has some angst somehow. ^_^

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Holy crap!!! This was so so SO good!!! His aversion to celebrate their anniversary makes perfect sense. Who in their right mind would want to knowing all the pain and torture this day represents to him. The pain and torture he inflicted on the love of his life. No one will understand what he goes through this day. Not even his ever understanding wife. Not fully at least. It's easy for her to say that 'it doesn't matter' but really it does.

I love the ending because to me it's open ended. Arnav's struggle didn't miraculously end by Khushi's loving and comforting gestures. No, it will be a continuous struggle that he will have to deal with for the upcoming years. But he has the perfect partner to help him through this.

I wish IPK had taken this route because it just fits. The characters you have portrayed are still Arnav and Khushi with their original traits but matured. Thanks for the PM. This was just amazing! ❤️
Edited by brishti84 - 9 years ago

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