ArHi Drabble: New Horizon (Removed)

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Fantastic one
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Baby, do you know what I love most about this story? Yes, its the beach. Thats my favorite thing to do, sunrise or sunset it does not matter to me. Gladly, I am born in a city with many beaches. Amen.

And those pictures you clicked omg picture perfect. Its really beautiful, but serioulsy you woke up so early to get that picture? Now, thats really something lol. I know how much you love your bed and all. 😆

Okay enough of my one sided rant. I love love loved this story. It made me sad in the start with ASR's mother's death but you made up with the first meet in the end.

I just want to imagine that Arnav's mother always knew about Khushi and she wanted them both to meet and start out with their love story. No, you cant deny that. Its happening, okay!!! Its definitely happening. Since this a drabble, I am not sure if you can come up with a second part for the drabble, lol

But, do try to write one. Plish?

Happy birthday, its your birthday month yay.

And about the words I said to you when I read your OS for the first time. I was being really really really genuine, its the truth. You are far better than me as a writer, I was not even kidding back then, I am still sticking to that statement of mine. You are BETTER. Admit it!! Hmph!

Anyways I loved this story, but, you know what, I love you more. My CC beti lol.

Love

Only yours,

JJ!! 🤗

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

What the!!! Cheeni, you doubt yourself as a reader!!! 😲

Gods must be crazy to give you such ideas. 🤔

Cheeni, hum to aapke writing pe fida hain!!!

Such a nice drabble/OS.

Damn, I lived in that area for few months and never saw the sunrise sitting on the sands of Pacific ocean.

Loved the start of a beautiful story. Loved how you liberated Arnav's heart and soul from the mundane routine life and loved how finally the ocean met his happiness.

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Chandana

@chandana.s

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Fabulous ... simple,clear and memorizing

Loved it

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ragvir92

@ragvir92

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Wow That was an amazing drabble yaar

You had described he originality so beautifully

Life indeed teach us great lesson bu a the cos of something very precious

And glad ha Arnav found his Khushi

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awroneema

@awroneema

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

it should be continued..drabble ncomz ff! what say...luvd it..

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Soumi

@Madhukori

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

a really heart touching one👍🏼
n happy b'day 😊

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: canapoem
What the!!! Cheeni, you doubt yourself as a reader!!! 😲
Gods must be crazy to give you such ideas. 🤔

Cheeni, hum to aapke writing pe fida hain!!!

Such a nice drabble/OS.
Damn, I lived in that area for few months and never saw the sunrise sitting on the sands of Pacific ocean.

Loved the start of a beautiful story. Loved how you liberated Arnav's heart and soul from the mundane routine life and loved how finally the ocean met his happiness.

I am a little low in self confidence but amazing people like you, JJ keep me going 🤗

@Red: It is okay Di, come here again and this time we will go together, what say?

I have been there thrice but I have seen sunrise just once, it was my friend's birthday and she loves beaches. It was so amazing!!

Thank you so much Di!

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Thank you everyone for lovely words I will reply to every comment, in a day or two! Thanks :)

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

This was lovely... There was something so serene about watching the sunrise together...

The picture is beautiful... I love taking pictures of the sunrise and sunset... it never ceases to fascinate me.

The ending line was awesome! He had found a new horizon where Arnav met Khushi, where Ocean merged with Happiness.

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