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yoga123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Beautiful start...thanks for the PM

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Rida

@love-hurts

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Awesome!!!

Itna fab tha!!!

Kya bataoon!

Love the rooms yaar!

Btw have i missed Arshi's room pic?

It was awesome n the way u described their emotions... everyones.. Arnav, Khushi, Riva n Ryan... it was so cute...

I hope Akhilesh is fine. N whts wrong with Khushi?? Hope its nothing serious...

Overall it was a mind blowing update! ''

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sk2405

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

And you're back!! I doubt if there could have been a better Diwali gift.

Khushi's pining, even Arnav's for that matter, clearly shows how accustomed they have become to having each other close. It's as if apart from air, the presence of the other has become equally vital for their living. Their separation, although brief, as compared to the last time, was handled much more positively by them this time around or probably they were too preoccupied in looking out for Akhilesh and the kids that they managed quite well, except until the last phone call offcourse.

Riva and Ryan's apprehensions are totally justifiable and the way they have sought answers from each other so far shows the deep bond they share. Their hesitancy towards Arnav, them wanting to acknowledge his influence in their lives, them slowly opening up to Arnav and then finally acquiescing to his proposal of going with him was so natural. Their actions and their words never seemed forced. Riva and Ryan's reactions on seeing their rooms were very positive and if we were to go by them, they are sure to warm up to the crazily loving people around them very soon.

Is that their passion ruling their senses? If it is, I wonder how their house has managed to survive such an explosing chemistry. Like Khushi mentioned, they will probably have to learn to reign in their harmones since they have kids around them but I wonder if that will be the case or will the kids end up being like Akhilesh and their friends who are well versed with their deep rooted love and passion.

With the kids coming home, their lives are sure to take a huge turn but the fact that they have each other forever will definitely make things easier and manageable.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊

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Uttara.D.Jaiswar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

awesum updt.! :) the scene where khushi calls arnavs name and he did hear her from soo far was really heart touching.! it kinda reminded me abt d scene where arnav was kidnapped in the show.! updt was written fabulously do updt soon dear.. :) tc.!

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aemanarshi

@aemanarshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Wonderful, awesome and amazing update. MISSED THIS FF LYK HELLL!!!
Good that finally ur whole concentration will be on this only.
To start with the arshi longing for each other was so emotional and heart melting.
2nd part where rian and riva are excepting the changes and trying to understand arnav was so beautifully written. Their fears and insecurities for excepting a new family and leaving their lonely world where no one care s if they live or die. And the building bind between the brothers was beautiful. The overwhelming feelings of the kids after receiving so much love and care.
And last part the arrival of the new entries in their home was superb. I was waiting for their arrival from a such a long tym.
All in all awesome update looking for the next update. Update sooonnn and make the next update looong.

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suji5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

awesome update
Riva and Ryan came to India to live with Arnav and khushi
waiting for their journey

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pinkly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

Chaverah, that was superb first chapter. I loved it. You have beautifully written the kids feelings, apprehension at meeting their new brother, shifting to a new country. Later realizing that they will be taken care of... They will be fine.

Khushi and arnav... What can I say. Just seeing them happy makes me happy. They were insatiable:-)

I loved the kids rooms. So nice. Planned to perfection. Very cute kids. I liked their pictures very much.

I am already waiting for next chapter. Do make it long like this one. Very nicely written and I enjoyed reading each and every line.

Happy Diwali to you too.

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angeldream14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Amazing

Part A

it was like they can hear each others unsaid words

they way he called her when she just whispered his name was wishing something n next moment its fulfilled

she defied him n eat ice cream to comfort herself

but the way he scolded her it was like a father who wld keep u in line when u r into any mischief

its like they both are fulfilling the wish of every relation a child wish to have without knowing it

love can be healer if u let it to enter as that's the most difficult part rest is easy

Part B

so they decided to give him a chance

when u r hurt by the 1st relation thats meant to protect u its hard to trust anyone

the kids r too bruised n who will understand them better than Arnav n khushi

i feel in a way Arnav is luck he was not in the shadow of the man who was his biological father as its better to not have some relation that make u feel y were u born

if he had been with that man n seen n felt that contempt every moment he wld have never been able to gather himself back

Riva n Ryan will be fine as the man who had felt pain too deeply will move heaven n earth to protect them

Riva is so right there is nothing as step its either ur heart believe them to be urs or not

Heart is that holds the key to every relation n if it says someone is urs n they make u feel same way u know they are family, u don't need blood to tell u that

when u have been all but neglected all ur life its hard to let anyone else take care of u n make u feel special as the 1st thing ur mind wld do is warn u whether they have a motive or its an illusion n u will be in the same dark pit again

Part C-

Family is the one that accept u for who u r n never judge u

kids will be fine as who wld know the value of relationship other than those who had been scared by it

Arnav n khushi will heal them n in the process hell themselves to as fear is still lurking to pull them down

sometimes to many bad things make u believe that its all u deserve but when good things knock u feel if they r real or just a trick to hurt u further

the room of the kids were amazing n in a way to assure them that from now on they have a home, a family and people that they can call theirs n count on

Arnav n khushi's passion is like they want to make each other realize that the bliss they live is true there life will always will be this beautiful.

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

This was awesome , a perfect start to the new journey. As u said earlier, this 2nd innings is a family thing with arnav & khushi at it's centre as sutradhaar bt the story is about everyone n not just them. I lied the idea of 2nd innings , bt it shaping up like this , now I am loving it. 😊

Brilliant job done here 👏

Thanks for d pm...