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vijayalaxmib

@vijayalaxmib

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Beautiful and awesome os.. loved it ... thanks for pm...

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Sweety012345

@Sweety012345

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

A beautifully written os

Loved it

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navjot7

@navjot7

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

beautiful os
thnx for pm
i am waiting for update of arshi ff truth about forever

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Firstly , I love ur writing...not only the theme but ur language is very good...I wish I could write like u...brilliant work...

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Hey thanks for the pm. Loved the update. Wonderful enjoyed every bit of it. Lovely. Amazingly good. Superb. Every person deserves second chance and so did our khushi.

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

lovely OS

both having a hard past

loved how Arnav never gave up once he saw her

he had to have her

n in end both lived happy ever after

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Fabulous story.

You touched a sensitive issue of the society, when in widows were untouchable and kept separately.

But glad that now time has Changed and they could marry again.

Brilliant update. Loved it.

Thanks for pm.

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

I loathe the term Abhagan, and it's tossed about so carelessly in our society. Each one of us has our own destiny. Others around you are merely there to help you and accompany you for a while as you travel your destined path. So if one believes there is a higher power, how can you also say another human caused something to happen to you.

You can see how Khushi's rational mind has been subverted by years of accusations. The note she wrote was so heart wrenching. Pain bleeding out of every word. Her utter desolation achingly apparent. And then when you wrote of her feeling those caramel eyes on her ... and later asking "What is love?" ... just desperately sad to read.

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Evan

@-evan-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Nice piece of writing I must say. Really liked the concept. I understand it's just a OS, yet the way ArHi met and their reaction to each other seems little rushed. I feel a FF or at least a SS would do justice to this storyline. The concept itself is really nice and I think you could turn it into a nice FF, where you could include more about Arnav's struggles, Khushi's hardships and thus their first meeting & relation would grow on a more relateable grounds.