Divinity of thy Arms (chapter 4 updated) 19/9 page 38

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Sydell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Its really a superb prologue and its so promising .

I am sure gonna read it

Thanks for the pm yaar

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Kavyasarun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Intriguing prologue.
waiting for the update.
Thanks for the PM.

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Reenasungeelee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

sound interesting go for it

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Nice prologue
Will wait for u to start the story

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christi002

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Interesting one... loved the prologue❤️... please continue dear, would love to read more of it.
Thanks for the pm 😉Waiting <3

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raniluvsasr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Awesome. Beautifully written. Amazingly good. Update soon. Very intense

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Interesting prologue wardah...I really loved your thoughts in the note.

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Hello Wardha,

This is your real name? Its really beautiful, do let me know the meaning, okay?

So, coming back to the Prologue, I think this is going to be everything I have never read, or what? I am a Hindu and I believe in all religions. I go to church, I celebrate Eid, Ramzan, technicaly I have lost my religion long back lolz.

This is super good and intriguing. Prologue is not giving away much of any details about the plot and thats what makes the whole difference.

I love love love your writing style. Its fresh and warm. And there is a realisticapproach. I wish you get many more readers and please do continue with this. All the best. 🤗

Love

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Maham Iqbal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

congratulation on new story dear

well honestly i cant wait to read more

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I salute you dear that is one different topic that you have selected. If everyone on this earth starts thinking like you then there will be no terrorism and not a single prejudiced soul left on this earth.

I myself believe this that we are all human beings and love is the universal religion. Love is God. I can't contain my happiness by thinking that you have the same beliefs about religion as i have. Love you for that.

I too think that no one should slander the other's religion if we are born in Christianity, Hinduism or Islam it's because of a reason. We shouldn't be forced to do something which we don't want.

It will sure be the best piece of reading that i have come across in my time, because no one had ever tried to write about divinity or something versatile. Belief and faith is not about murdering or torturing an innocent soul. Bad and good exist in every human being and evil has no religion whatsoever.

Now coming towards the prologue. It tells about Arnav a man who has taken so much pain that he has lost his belief in humanity and divinity. This time i think comes in almost everyone's life where the person starts thinking that if God loves them then how could he let that happen to them. they see the world burning, tortured souls writhing in agony and think that is there any God?

Arnav is sure a tortured soul who is going through a bad phase for so long that he has lost himself, he is being chased by the demons.

And Khushi is the person who has touched divinity, her belief has strengthened in God through hardships but she still believe her to be not perfect to reach the heights of religion where a person could touch divinity.

I look forward to see how those two souls come together! 😃