ArHi SS : The Promises Ruin [Extension] Last Part Page 46 *COMPLETE*

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Russell

@russelskhushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

very nice ..the last part was to touching ..

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Reserved, Reserved, Reserved.

This is so freaking awesome, that I am running my fingers so fast across my keyboard. You have an extension of the most amazing SS I have ever read in my entire life and I love, love, love you so much for this J!

Thanks a ton to whoever who demanded this. 😳

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J, J, J!

Tell me please, why are you so awesome. You are one amazing, fantabulous, awesome, great, superb writer. Sach me, not kidding, no flattering. You write so well, that I am such a huge, big fan of your writing. I read it today, {I know I got late} after a very devastating and bad day, and your chapter makes me smile, seriously.

You are so fabulous, and the way you express all the emotions. 👏 I loved the way you emphasized that even though Khushi forgave him, she still did not. That was so cute.

Raizada certainly overdid it. People from Lucknow, and Chaatwaalas, seriously. I wish I had someone like him.

I could not ignore the fact that Aarav has started to address Khushi as Mom, and though hesitantly, Arnav Dad. The conversation between Khushi and Aarav was sweet, and really heartwarming. Something simple, but yet laden with emotions. Me being away from my mother know the importance of such small - nothing conversations with your mom.

Amazing chapter J, loved it from start to end.

Love you always,

N. :)

Edited by conundrum. - 10 years ago

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arshi_sarun

@arshi_sarun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Superrr update thanks for the pm

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Drkk

@Drkk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

this was beautiful
waiting for next part

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Happy to see that you planned to give a proper closure to the story.. loved the start.. Khushi have given her Arnavji hard time but nothing can stop her from loving her dear hubby who is ready to anything for her.. Arnav is so sweet he got Khushi's favourite chef, chaatwala and her family to make her happy.. love him..

thanks for pm 😊

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

First I wanted to thanks Cheeni for her determination to peruse you for this. I wanted to thank her at the cc thread but forgot will do it soon.

About the update. Hmm certain raizada has definitely taken some pain and moved some mountain to gain forgiveness but than he deserved every bit of it.

Now that he knows he is forgiven as well witnessed Khushi's meltdown how will he fair? Will he go back to being how Khushi thinks?

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Rimi

@Rimi_BS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

thats really great update..loved ir...

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Khushi was pretending to be angry with Arnav and Arnav was doing everything Khushi wanted.
Arnav not only brought Khushi's family at home but also the chef and chaat wala bhaiya at home, that was such a sweet gesture.
Aarav is another sweetheart, always there to make his Maa smile :)
Loved it :)