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SwrlngElephants

@SwrlngElephants

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: -Reader-
Insight into Buaji's life, her love for Khushi and their relationship was heartwarming. Life is being brutal to Khushi, but glad at least she has a protective hand in her life that loves her unconditionally and will stand up for her. Looks like Khushi is sick and dealing with some health issue... I wonder if her sickness played a role in separating her and Arnav. Khushi was a spitfire in the past, no nonsense girl, confident, but she is a completely opposite now.

Whatever the present may be, however bad Arnav wants to hurt Khushi, how much ever hard he may try to convince himself that he hates her, his love for her has not changed even by an ounce. I think all the pleasant memories in his life are associated with her. Moments spent with her still makes him smile.

Adi is a handful...bringing the house down J

Thanks for the PM. Hope you update soon.

Thankyou for such a lovely comment :) Definitely a spitfire :D And Arnav was no less than a devil.

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SwrlngElephants

@SwrlngElephants

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Dark.Desires

Amazing story! And beautifully penned down! Continue! :D

thankyou for taking out time and reading my story aand commenting on it. 😳😳

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SwrlngElephants

@SwrlngElephants

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Whiterainbow
It's a pleasure reading your story and I am having hard time believing you to be a first time writer...you are good please give yourself some credit
Keep them coming...

Hahah I am honored having recieved such a constructive comment. thankyou.

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

awesome..it seem khushi herself opt out of arnav's life...

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-Reader-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Some revelation is out about Khushi's health and how it may have lead to her leaving Arnav giving him an impression that she betrayed him.

The little insight into Khushi's childhood and her warm relationship with her parents was heartwarming and sad too. Thinking how hard it must be for her to not have love and support of her parents. Really life has been very brutal to her with not even a single drop of hope or respite.

This is one of the rare stories where I can say I already like Shyam. He really cares for Arnav and his happiness. Whatever Khushi has I hope Shyam is able to cure her. What really scares me is how will Arnav react and do when he comes to know the truth about Khushi's health and the reason why she exited from his life. He will never forgive himself and probably hate himself more than he does Khushi. I hope he doesn't hurt Khushi more ...

Thanks for the PM :)

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SaRun.

@SaRun.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

An absolutely smashing chapter!!!

I LOVE your writing!!

Khushi has a health problem due to which shez away from Arnav , is this going to be tragic??

Im scared already!!

Btw wats ur name? Or what can i call you?

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

interesting story liked it very much

read all chapters in one go looking forward

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Richelle

@Richelle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Really awesum ff!! Khushi must have left Arnav cos she is sick...bt as
alwayz Arnav loves to vent out his anger wen things don't go his way!!
The love for each other is still der...dey just need a push to revive it again!!