ArHi SS: The Promises Ruin *COMPLETE* [Note + EXT TS PG113]

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Love.life2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Firstly all the best for your exams

Now what a fabulous start.

I was wondering what did khushi see.

thank god nothing happened.

I never liked the whole shitall track on the show.

So I am hoping Arnav wouldnt be so ignorant of Chicago's pain and khushi would be strong and throw shitall out herself instead of waiting around.

most of all put the raizada clan who was so crazy for that aarav to compare him to Arnav is reminded by khushi that she can't stay here.

Sorry I can't get over that. But this story seems different. Shitall pregnant or is she trying to trap Arnav.

Why is khushi still hiding her emotions from Arnav. Does she still feel she has to please him by not letting him on her pain and hurt.

Then how will they grow.

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: renee.bee
Firstly all the best for your exams
Now what a fabulous start.

I was wondering what did khushi see.
thank god nothing happened.

I never liked the whole shitall track on the show.

So I am hoping Arnav wouldnt be so ignorant of Chicago's pain and khushi would be strong and throw shitall out herself instead of waiting around.
most of all put the raizada clan who was so crazy for that aarav to compare him to Arnav is reminded by khushi that she can't stay here.

Sorry I can't get over that. But this story seems different. Shitall pregnant or is she trying to trap Arnav.

Why is khushi still hiding her emotions from Arnav. Does she still feel she has to please him by not letting him on her pain and hurt.
Then how will they grow.

Hey Rene,

Glad to see your comment .

Yes this story is different and nothing like the shows track.
I hope I could surprise you with the future parts. Trust me, I seriously want to finish writing this, its been months since this is abusing my mind lol. So I had to put it out.

I hope its still readable

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Oh oh that was a lovely start
Excited to read more
Will wait

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yeshyeshna

@yeshyeshna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

nice part

waiting to read next

i do not like when arnav gives sheetal importance

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anu1017

@anu1017

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Awesome prologue!!! Looking forward to reading the story!!!

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suji5

@suji5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

interesting concept..
who is the father of sheetal's child?
how can Arnav behaves like that to khushi..

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jisa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

this was really good..!!
w8ng for next..!

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Awesome start

Waiting to read more

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sweetydoll32

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Awesome start dear please update soon

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Param

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

amazing start.. there has to be some reason for Arnav giving such a advice to sheetal and hope Khushi's last view is right.. that she is over imagining things.. loved the start..

thanks for pm 😊