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Tich

@Jin.

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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks a lot.. please tell me if i should continue or not..

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Tich

@Jin.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Do continue

Thank you.. Actually the response isnt as much i expected so i had second thoughts.

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Gudakesha

Thank you.. Actually the response isnt as much i expected so i had second thoughts.

I understand may be u'll get more readers after few updates good luck

Edited by Arshi.Sugi.IPK - 11 years ago

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Tich

@Jin.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi.Sugi.IPK

I understand may be u'll get more readers after few updates good luck

ok will see for sometime, i have imagined Barun as my lead guy so i posted here. Will continue after atleast 10 likes, that should be fair.

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow!!!!

This is sooo good.

Hope you continue this!

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome start

I really love khushi character. Its very interesting to find her misandrist.

Khushi is just fidning a way to leave her family and go away from them. I think the fairytales in which she believe are those in which she is the princess and her savior too. Aftrer her father cruelest and rude behvior she can trust any man, she can't risk to be dependant on anyone. She has friends but she seems to be distant from them. Yet she fell in love. life doesn;t go as we plan for it. I hope that boycould understand her psychology and treat her with utmost care, love and loyalty.

this is a great start of a story and i am loving it.

looking forward to read the story.

update next part soon