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Do I have any other choice than to reserve a spot and read the two chapters and come back? :P
Unreserved-
The second Chapter did reply to some of my queries and elucidated my doubts. Hey, I'm Aries too and never knew that yellow was to be my lucky color- I hate yellow!🤢
Poor Payal! Her plans have been utterly spoiled by NK. Yeah; she could have escaped, that would have been a scene!😆
Arnav is really a poor confused soul and I sincerely pity him. He just came to attend Khushi's marriage and ended up being tagged as Khushi's child's father.
If you wouldn't have included that dilemma that Khushi was facing to agree or not to NK's words, I would have objected, a big time- I liked it how she felt that somehow her mother would be in pain and to put all this to a halt. Albeit in her place, I'd have clearly refused, but love makes you do weird things.
So, Arnav harbors some feelings for Khushi, is it?
Trust is a great thing, which Arnav has in Khushi, and I liked it.
However I felt that the proposal was sort of unnecessary. According to me, it didn't fit in the way it should have been. What did you want to convey by the proposal? I didn't actually get it.
Trust is a great thing, which Arnav has in Khushi, and I liked it.
However I felt that the proposal was sort of unnecessary. According to me, it didn't fit in the way it should have been. What did you want to convey by the proposal? I didn't actually get it.
Ah! The mail. What's in the mail? Evil you, to end the flashback at such a time. The mail is the root of Khushi backing off from the marriage; what can it contain?
And Arnav was not supportive of Khushi's run-away plan, so how did he end up fleeing with her? Am I missing something here? Is the mail the root of all these incidents? Does it contain something about Aman? I'm sure the answer lies in the story itself and I'll dig it out, before you reveal it, in the course of time!😉😆
As much as I loved NK-Payal bond, I adored a frustrated and scared Arnav. I was actually visualising him, all panicked when nani forbade them from entering, and, Khushi is simply crazy! Future plans, huh?😆
I wonder how Anjali's reaction will be? I think, she'll have the key to this mess now.
P.S Arnav and Akash are still brothers in this ff right, and Payal is Akash's wife, right? NK-Payal would make a great pair in this fiction, but, alas, she's taken by Akash!
Also, I like the story. It's crazy and funny- makes me smile, each time I read it though, I admit, some parts of it are irrational and, I think you must improvise on that!
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