arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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hema

@Itsflora

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Posted: 10 years ago

#661

nice update Di..its strange how both of them understand each other's sufferings without saying a word... but beautiful still...
is there going to be any trouble cause of the baby ??the way khushi had the dream,does it indicate something bad??

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#662

loved it Indi!
I would like to say that it's writers like you who keep the magic of ipkknd alive in our hearts.

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anera

@anera

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Posted: 10 years ago

#663

sorry for late comment
acutally i promis my self would be more active on IF bcz of exams
but could not stop to comment on this story
really enjoy ur chapter
so the end is coming to this beautiful ff

really love it --so khushi is goign to start her own shop of mitta krela😛
love it

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#664

Originally posted by: IronButterfly
What a perfect story to read on the 2nd anniversary.
Always a delight reading your work.

thrills me when you enjoy a chapter. way back when i started, you said things to me that made sense, heloed me write what i wanted to. thanks for that. see you, ironbutterfly.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#665

Originally posted by: aarwen
I am going to miss this certain languid feel of without you Indi di..
so the girls played with their dolls and one of them married a shaitan when she grew up..
I can always picture your story's ASR.. crisply dressed, smart, focused, intelligent, wickedly irresistible, tender.. your words paint an actual person before my eyes..

Once they are back in shantivan OP is going to be happy.. but hopeful Arnavji and us get chances to remain indulgent in those bure khayal..
lovely phrase "bundle of madness"

By the way in my writing class our teacher spoke about reinforcement as a powerful tool in story telling.. and though I thought for most other 'rules' that writing can't really have 'rules'.. reinforcement I see everywhere in movies, books that I like.. when you brought in a bus again.. it all came spiraling back. your first FF.. and maybe my first Arshi FF that I took seriously too.. thank you..

oh rhea,

you feel him because he does exist. thought and emotion make him and they have a dimension which we may not be able to measure but can we really deny?

thank you so much. i value your comments always... we both try to express stories forming and gadding abouut i us. joyful yet tough this thing we want to do.

bure khayals came and said they have to be protected first before they'd return to sudden door open death in rm land, england was where they flourised. endangered species they. so i promised, anyone persecuting them or trying to kill, poach, steal, walk in on them will be prosecuted. theek hai? gah now my mind is going crazy imagining what that might lead to.

that thing you say about reinforcement, so interesting... actually i think the powerful stories all have that, explicitly or otherwise. ipk always looped back and layered. i guess that was back of my mind... but if i think of that coma of his, no way she will not break into cold sweat time to time... and the bus just came into the chapter... i did an "okay, come on, who wants to come here" to all my little themes and thoughts... boy in blue rushed off from mother... and then the bus from nowhere...

storytelling is such an art... hope i learn it as i go along. it's not just good language or neat plot or something from the outside, it pulsates in the heart of a thought and i must find all i can to express it.

best comment... "a certain languid feel".

says to me, specific... with character.. not just a story to come to when you want to see khushi being dragged into asr's arms...

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#666

Originally posted by: jazz.kaur
brilliant update...
khushi is still scared from inside after arnav's accident...
nice to see khushi jealous n the way she talk about NK to make arnav jealous...

thank you, jazz.kaur...

i think khushi will always carry traces of that accident in her, it will touch her thinking on many things... and oh boy, she really doesn't like chudails checking out her arnav ji. 😆

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#667

Originally posted by: eishe10
Wonderful update😉

thank you, eishe... good to see you.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#668

Originally posted by: lalpeeli
wonderful update

hi lalpeeli,

you liked? wonderful. thanks.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#669

Originally posted by: mayurisb80
Indi...sweet and beautiful update as always...

mayuri,
great to see you... thanks so much.

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indi52

@indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#670

Originally posted by: Archu61
A lovely update ,can feel khushie inner fears of losing Asr ,you shown the dream sequence very well ,and they finally on their way back ,

hi archu, so happy you enjoyed the chapter... fears and fikar and need and desire, khushi has so much for her arnav ji... love is a living breathing thing i guess, shaping you, your emotions... they are going back home... though khushi has made a home hear too... see you soon.