arshi ff: without you... #3, chapters 28 - epilogue **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: vartekaa
Nice update

thanks so much, vertekaa, glad you enjoyed.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: segad
a statue of a goat really? i think lakshmiji would need to chew on a photo of that!
nice exploration of emotions and feelings here

segad,

i am rofling. maybe i should get khushi to take a shot and feed it to lakshmi ji...

thanks for enjoying the chapter.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: kshubhangi
Its always said to think before you act. Arnav's misbehaviour with khushi is still haunting him and will be there for the rest of his life. Beautiful arshi moments. Last part is a big twist.

hi kshubhangi,

you are right. he did act in the throes of an uncontrollable complex emotion... without thinking... the man of dimaag just lost it when he saw the woman he loved in another's arm, that too his sister's husband. this will bother him from time to time, always, even though she has forgiven him... even when he knows and she knows exactly how much they love each other.

thanks for liking the asr khushi moments...sometimes i feel they have so much resonance because we know things were not always this smooth... it's like spring after winter in a way for me. all the seasons of love maybe are here...

let's see where that twist leads us... see you soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#594

Originally posted by: arhiforme
Amazing

thanks, arhiforme, glad you liked the chapter.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#595

Originally posted by: rati123
Hmmm.. interesting ! So is Anjali's baby alive ??

hi rati,

i am still not sure if it is indeed anjali's baby...but a rumour is going round... honestly, i am still thinking about it... hope you enjoyed, se you soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: 1chilly
Went through a gamut of emotion in this chapter.
There was emotion when Arnav thought of the past.
Then comedy when Khushi pulled his hair in sleep.😆
And then the thrill when there is a chance that Anjali's baby might have been saved.
Arnav is indeed lucky to have found Khushi.
She is selfless in her love and care for him.
And she has brought the so needed touch of ordinary with her.
Fpdoing simple things like a ride in a bus, will do him good.
Waiting now for the next chapter.

1chilly,

hi and thanks so much. glad to read about that range of feelings, yay... thrill when you heard about the baby... i am happy and happy. the thought came out of nowhere as these thoughts often do. i could almost see doc verma frowning deeply when he heard the rumour, then checking a little... and calling asr before going ahead into a thorough check... and i could see asr's face go still.

built the thing around that... no idea where we are headed... but yeah, pictures forming.

see you soon and really appreciate that lovely comment.

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indi52

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Posted: 10 years ago

#597

Originally posted by: ranogill
awesome ...loved it and love khushi more

thanks, ranogill,

khushi... she is so happy, isn't she... i love her with this sense of comfort and with her arnav ji, all by themselves. i still sometime can't believe that i don't see her eery weeknight on tv getting up to some madness or sweetness.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#598

Fantastic update

OMG there are chances that Anjali rajkumari is still Alive. I hope it will be true and if she is alive then Arnav could easily find her soon without any trouble. I can't believe shyam could even think to drag his flesh, his child, in his revenge game.

It was surprising that it was Dr. Verma who decided to investigate Anjali miscarriage. That is such a valuable act. Even thinking about Anjali and her child is enough to win everyone heart. I am loving his character.

Lolz the tycondo queen was planning to teach goons some lesson in her dreams, arnav was her knight in shining armour, her savior. 🤣

Cutting ASR hairs is here too😆. well i think Arnav purposey don't wish to cut down his hairs because i think he loves the soothing effect whenever someone run fingers in his hairs, especially if someone is khushi.

cant wait to read next chapter.

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hema

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Posted: 10 years ago

#599

Urggg ..they are leaving London?? Again back to the hangama of SHANTIVAN!!! I wonder who named that house.. 😆

Loved the way u described khushi's innocence according to asr!

Also loved the rakhi part!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#600

hey indii...quite after along tyme...update...but dair aaye durust aayee😉...coming to post amazinggg onedxs!!!!!!!!!!!😳😳😳😳😳 leaving london finally...ab shantivan ki shanti bhang hone wali hai...superbbb update muahhh👏👏👏👏👏👏