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Posted: 11 years ago
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os : the dotted line...




He was cold , too cold to be a human
She was shattered beyond repair , but for him she was the sinister being who had cast upon her shadow onto the happy bubble of his sister.
HE would fight , fight till this creature is again locked in the very depth of hell it had emerged from .
He would fight for his sister , for her happiness , for her child , for his family and most of all for himself , no one plays with Arnav Singh Raizada like this and gets away with it .
She was evil and he won't let this step into the life of him and his sister .
They had already suffered enough to last for one life time .
He would do whatever it takes to crumble her into pieces beyond recognition .
In fact he had already planned her life after their Six Month contract would get over .
He was waiting , waiting patiently to unleash his last weapon ...
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He had waited Six months to see how she dos that , sell herself for money .
That was exactly what he had done to her ,made a deal , oh! the bestdeal of his deal of his life and not for himself but for her .
He was a businessman and had taken care that payments had to be done in cash
She was a juicy piece of flesh and he sold her to the hungriest hound he could find .NO! he wouldn't touch her ,he was a respectable human after all , he won't dirty his hands.
She didn't know what she had signed herself for , he wanted to keep an element of surprise .
He promised himself never to see her after she signed the dotted line .
How could he ?
She had the face of the woman of his dreams .
The creature of love he secretly desired for ,even though he knew it was an illusion which could never be reality .
That was all he had to survive , all he had to breath for , all had to fight for .
He was living by a dream ,he won't let any thing happen to that dream .
Just a dream , that was all it was .
This was the only good thing that life gave him besides his sister .
And now he had to deal with the leach that had planted himself in his house ,
he had to deal with
Shyam Manohar Jha .
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For the first time after ages he saw a ray of hope .
This little girl would help his di to recuperate from the heavy losses she had suffered recently .
Shyam Manohar Jha was in custody under the charges of attempt of murder of his heavily pregnant wife ,Anjali Jha .
Khushi had been sold to a pimp from the dingy lanes of Mumbai .
She was known as Paro , a beautiful thing to sleep with , yes he had been informed about that , when they had called to inform him about her hysterectomy ,
" She's in demand , we can't take charges " , the pimp had explained .
"Don't you dare contact me ever again , specially when it is about her !" he thundered at the person at the other end of the line , and slammed the phone ,that was all he had heard of her .
The family knew that Khushi was involved in an accident on her way to Lucknow and her body is yet to be recovered .
He had only one last thing to do before he could give into hid grief ,
help the man who fathered this cursed daughter to his feet , he was a good man after all .
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"You must find her son! , Shyam is after her , save her before he reaches her , he even tried to me for her . Save her son , save her ."
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He now had the woman from his dreams in his arms .
He would , apologize to her , fill her world with all the happiness a man can possibly imagine .
She would be Khushi Singh Raizada again, he would give her the wedding she always dreamt of .
It had cost him an arm and a leg to buy her back but it never mattered to him.
Past never mattered to him , it was his mistake and he would make up for that ,
if only she would listen to him
"kushi..."
"I'm Paro sir "
He had signed the dotted line again .



PS: This is my first attempt with ARHI writing . I know it's stupid but had to write something ,call it the pms effect . Sorry for any errors if there , it has been phone typed
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh god oh god...the last line 😭 goosebumps errupted on my skin...omgg he has destroyed her...vl u b continuing it?
very sad..start

well written..made me sad...pooor khushi 😭
Edited by bewakoofLadki - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg!! What arnav has done is unpardonable! Even if what he thought about her his true, that is no explanation to this hideous crime. He needs to suffer. Period.

Well written!!
Edited by arshi_sravy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you killed me
it's paro sir
well he deserve this
but was her fault in all this didn't she has a pain that will last more than a life
but it was good
you should writ a 2nd shot from khushi's side
I'm sire it will break our heart
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Posted: 11 years ago
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what did he do
he sealed her fate
and his with it
how could he do this to her
well too late he has lost her completely now
serves him right
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Posted: 11 years ago
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simply fabulous
loved it
thats terrific.
do continue to write such awesome stuff
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bewakoofLadki

oh god oh god...the last line 😭 goosebumps errupted on my skin...omgg he has destroyed her...vl u b continuing it?
very sad..start

well written..made me sad...pooor khushi 😭

I hadn't intended to , but will try for or sure . Thanks for appreciations it has a great value to me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshi_sravy

Omg!! What arnav has done is unpardonable! Even if what he thought about her his true, that is no explanation to this hideous crime. He needs to suffer. Period.

Well written!!

Thankyou😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: imanech

you killed me

it's paro sir
well he deserve this
but was her fault in all this didn't she has a pain that will last more than a life
but it was good
you should writ a 2nd shot from khushi's side
I'm sire it will break our heart

will try for sure maybe tonight but have no idea when I shall be able to post 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply fabulous
loved it
thats terrific.
do continue to write such awesome stuff

Thankyou your comments are actually forcing me to pen down Khushi's perceptive

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