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Posted: 11 years ago
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Durghatna se der bhali..
So a late RES 😛

Unreswa 😎

Know what Cheeni?

Some people write..!

Some people write good..!

But you write exceptionally good!!!!

Seriously girl!!!

From where do you get such brilliant ideas and thoughts??

Meko to kabhi nahi aate..!

Have you got some secret chest of awesome plots??

Well..!!!!

You're a creative writer..!

That is all I know!! ⭐️

This was once again one the most beautiful Oss I have read so far..!!!

My OS skills just too poor to be even talked.!!!

Now now, I was supposed to discuss your OS here instead of rambling about my own..!

So kaha thi mai??

Yes on your creativity. 😃

You are one among the most talented writers of IF...!!!!!

The description of this whole OS was so wonderfully done that it was like watching it right before your eyes.

Love it like anything.!!

Khushi's ramblings and Arnav's silence was so touching.

And then he awakened physically, only to dishearten Khushi.

Khushi's wait was another beauty of the OS.

She did love him truly..

Then Arnav's return..!

The confession..! all took me to a dreamland and I loved being there..!!!!

A lovely, beautiful, romantic ride..!!

And why kaan pakad se sorry for writing this??

After reading this, I would pull your ears if you don't keep writing such lovely pieces..!!!

Maybe one OS per month or anything which suits you..!!

But keep them coming..!!!

They are always a treat to read.

Thanks a lot for the Link..!!! 😳 ❤️


Edited by Pearl_Oyster - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
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I'm back 😉😆
Who said your story torture us 😡..i don't think so ..in fact I'm in love with every of your stories..😳
Again a amazing title ...but title read karka i was thinking all gutterly...😆😳
But this was so different...i was speechless.. And then i knew only komal di can think something like this👏👏👏 ..but people say rubbish things😡...
Khushi character was beautiful...😃
She was attached to him in a shortbspan.. And did not even knew when she had fall for him
She use to share everything...when she knew none about him 😆
The experience doctors have given up their hope...but still she believed he would get up one day ...😳👏
Her belief had made him come back...😃
Payal's words made her heart sink ...😭
She did not gave a thought to him having a family ...
He finally got up..for her ..for her belief's...😃
But he never heard her talks ...😲😭
She was so disappointed😕
He kissed her ...😳
That means he too feels for her ..yipee...😃🥳
What the.. He is leaving ..without saying anything.. How can he😡😭
Khushi is giving excuses for marriage ..she is still in love with him...😆😳
But he might have moved on ..payal was right ..😭
He came back...for CHECK UP ...seriously...😲😡 Can't he get she loves him😡
Aww... He saw her crying .. .😳
Man he kept check on her ...😲👏
He said she was his love ...😳
Amazing👏
He do remember everything...😆😳😉
Yeah right ..she talks so much ..how can one remember..😆 😉
She said him to leave 😭
What the he gave a threat of suicide...😲
Seriously he has hurt he head some where 😆
Finally ..she got her love 😳
Thanks for pm🤗
Awesome one👏
Will be waiting for you to torture us..because we love your torture... ...😆😉

Edited by bs1224 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
beautiful os
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Aww it was very sweet. Loved it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
God, it was writtten so beautifully.
I loved it to the core.
I loved the way Khushi waited for Arnav for such a long time.
Even the show has ended all of these awesome works always makes us smile remembering about them.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
~Dene k badle kuch lena wo toh ek karobar hai~
~Jo dey kar bhi kuch na mangy wohi Sacha Pyar hai~
Fabulous OS...she truly loved him..and thank god he reciprocates her feeling...
lovely os dear...loved it...nicely written..❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
OMG this was absolutely awesome !!!!!
thank god he remembered everyting i was feeling so bad for khushi

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cheeni that was such a cute OS!!! Loved it😊 he wanted to become something and get married to her that was so nice!!!!
Edited by anu1017 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
awesome...!!!
this was so different...n so beautiful...!!
w8ng for next...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Simply beautiful.
Thank you for the pm .
Take care.

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