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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

wow...Beautiful OS...
khushi fell inlove with her patient who was in coma for more than 1 year. .. and arnav heard everything when he was in coma... such a beautiful love story. ..
loved it 😃

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

That was so romantically cute

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Loved the os beautifully done so adorable glad he heard everything and that he came back but he should have at least talked to her loved the proposal awesome thanks for the pm.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

First of all why are you apologising for writing a one shot, you are an amazing writer and the more stories we get too read from you the better.

Now since you did a stupid thing by apologising and holding your ears, you will have write another one shot lol.

The one shot was absolutely amazing and simply superb,

Written exceptionally well and a fantastic read from start to finish,

Awww love the fact Khushi use to talk to Arnav about everything whilst he was in a coma,

It's such a shame he left her and she was so heart broken and upset,

However I'm glad he came back and Khushi was right in making him grovel and not forgiving him to quickly.

Awww the terrace part was so beautiful, the proposal and the confessions simply amazing.

Thanks for the PM,

Thanks for the recommendations xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

This was a very very sweet OS! I enjoyed the read a lot :)

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Now a days i don't read, i was just checking the forum since i was not able to put a since in to words, but i ended up opening your OS, the tittle is really lovely, i said okay it's just an OS read it.

But it's more then a mare OS, you put the plot of an entire story in one OS, hats off to you.

I loved it, it's different and unique, i don't remember myself reading something like this, Khushi falling in love with an Arnav who is in coma.

I was sure that he remember her, i though he was just checking her and then hug in the garden prouved i was right, yeah he remember her. But then he left and i was like "What the f*** are you doing Raizada".

I can keep tabs on mine

^^ this simple sentece, took my heart.

At the end just want to say, fabulous story, marbelous concept and brilliantly written.

Edited by Preet.Kc - 11 years ago

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..SunnYaara..

@..SunnYaara..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

HATS OFF U cheeni...kya likha hai yaar amazing...mujhe laga main kahin khogayi hoon god...keep writing yaara...love u love u soo much cheens❤️🤗

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chaitali

@chaitali12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

lovely os..
khushi waited for more than a year for arnav. .
sweet n cute story. .

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Adigallia Rodriguez

@AdiGallia

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Komal👏

I just loved this one .❤️

She loved him the way he was and that thing made him fall for her and then he surprised her that he knows everything.

She couldn't move on and he was keeping his eye on her moves , that is so ASR😳

His threat of suicide was cheesy but he got her in her embrace😉

I am saving it to read over and over .Such a cute OS⭐️

Thnx for the PM and for everything😊

Edited by AdiGallia - 11 years ago

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Nidhi Nevatia

@NidhiNev

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Wow ! Khushi falls head over heels with her patient who happens to be in coma !?!

Damn, he doesnt remember her after coming out of coma ! Poor Khushi *sobs buckets full of tears*

khushi heart broken cant forget Arnav and starts rejecting all the marriage proposals which come for her! Payal is such a good friend.

Arnav back, ... You called me ! :) ... for a check up... :( ...

If you can wait and reject proposals for six months then i can keep my tabs on you !

Terrace suicide drama.. Classic ! ... Marry me or i'll jump from here ... !!! ( suicide...suicide... Basanti se shaadi ... ).. Lol.. Sholay yaad aa gaya !

Yes !!! Arnav Remembers Everything, Every Word, Khushi had spoken when he was in coma !

So they lived happily ever after !

Brilliant OS !!!...

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