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desisweetheart9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Thanks for the PM. Loved the OS. Every part of their journey .

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Mints23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Ohhh my... what a beautiful OS!! The 'first times' always remain special for a couple. The way you have shown a gradual growth in Arnav and Khushi's relationship is just so real and natural. They bond growing stronger, their friendship getting thicker and them falling in love eventually. The easy flow of this story is a treat to read and I just loved the instances in their lives that led to so many of firsts... Each moment making them realize, what they mean to each other and how much they mean to the other. ❤️

Thank you Pooji, for sharing this wonderful piece of writing... and thank you Cheeni (That's what Pooji calls you)... for penning it down!!! 😳

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

You were awarded OS of the week!🥳 Congrats Cheesy meri! 👏 ⭐️You are going great guns! 🤗And this was a mind blowing OS indeed. I remember commenting that I was feeling like getting married again!😉 😃

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amaypranay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

This was fabulous...such an amazing story...

Congrats.

I loved the Barun Sobti part...tooo cute!...

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sivatharshini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Fantastic OS !! very very beautifully written love it

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Saraa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

It was so simple but sweet OS. I loved how they bonded over different situations. I quite liked your take on IPKKND :D

Btw A Happy Married Life To your friend, Astha!

It was really nice of you , Komal to write such a beautiful OS for a friend! :)

Stay Blessed Always,

Saraa :)

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Katelyn

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

This is a beautiful OS!! 👏 I love the chronology of all their firsts! It felt as if we were part of their lives!

Congrats to your friend, Astha, for a happy married life and congrats to you for winning OS of the week!

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88sandy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

wow such an awesum n cute n suprb one...
lovd it vrym much...evry bit of it was so loveble...
n all their frst were amazingly dscribd...be it their 1st kiss 1st jealousy 1st anger 1st cnfession 1st love making every thing was awesum...thanx fr such a loveble update

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SHREYA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

I have no words o describe this os...u expressed the marriage bond in such a nice way...even though I don't believe in arranged marriage still I really liked this os...well done...and I must mention that ur aastha di is so lucky to have u

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..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#120

Two people bound together in a sacred knot of marriage, their journey from being strangers to soulmates..was potrayed in such a beautiful manner:)
ArShi's journey was really pure and beautiful..
Loved the entire story.
Loved every bits of it..<3