ARSHI OS: Consequences Of My Blinded Trust

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

A tragic OS but good one ...very well written...

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ara_000

@ara_000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

nice one..!

But deffo somethng which can break my heart 😭

u have written it beautifully 👏

loved ur way of representing it like dis..! ❤️

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Zariya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

awesome

continue plz where arnav repents and khushi move on

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Nice one...

but tell me, why do you most of the time write as a heartbroken Khushi? </3

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nagina

@jeb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

It was awesome os

pls continue

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Wow Amazing dear.

Plzzz continue. ❤️

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Wow that was a heart breaking and painful piece of writing,

So the first paragraph was from Arnav's point of view regarding heart break, so I'm assuming that is how he felt after he dumped Khushi.

I can't believe Arnav used Khushi as part of a bet that was so cruel and Khushi has been left heart broken.

Poor Khushi trusted Arnav so much and she had her heart broken, you wrote down her pain, anguish and emotions perfectly.

Please continue this and write another part, maybe from Arnav's point of view and if he did regret his actions towards Khushi.

Loved the update it was a brilliant read,

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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simran

@Laters_Baby

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

so touchy
cn we gt anthr part

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Tia Maharaj

@Honeybee27

Navigator

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

That was awesome...

You described her emotions so well and I just felt a tug in my heart somewhere and I came to the end and I was like "I want to read more!!!"

U gotta continue...u can't leave us hanging here

Please continue ❤️

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852464

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Loved the OS...

You portrayed Khushi's emotions so well...

Pls. continue it...

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