Smitar's: Marrying Khushi#1 Part 9(1,2) Pg 125 (4/11)Link to#2 on Pg 1

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#851

Superb updates 😃 Buaji no need to tell Arnav to keep an eye on Khushi he always do tht 😃

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: .sobtian.

Happy Diwali Smita ji and Rashmi ji!!! 🤗 May the festival of lights be the harbinger of joy and prosperity, today and always! 😊

Going to the update..I loved it! Great, as always!
I love the way their relationship is progressing, now that Nani and Mami know too. Anjali can't keep a secret 😆 but in a way, it's good to involve the elders beforehand.
NK is going to mess up things. He's going slip saying 'Khushiji!' one day. He shouldn't have been told the name of the girl Nannav has fallen in love with 😆

And Akash has also found his soulmate. Payaliya's marriage is coming up 😛 then the road is clear for ASR.

Loved Mittu, the local Romeo 😆 Poor Khushi must have been scandalized. All her deepest 'secrets' are out in the open because of Mittu.

Loved it! :)

Thanks for the email Rashmi! Hope your trip out of town was nice 😳
Welcome back :)

Thank you.

Wish you a happy Deepavali too.

My trip out of town was quite fruitful dear but would not call it nice as it was amidst cyclonic rainfall.

Rashmi.

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ameena671

@ameena671

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Posted: 11 years ago

#853

wow wonderful update loved it.

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#854

Amazing updates.. Khushi is full crazy.. 😆 And Arnav is so smitten.. ☺️ Haii.. He went to the sangeet too.. And Aakash and NK coming for help.. Supa sweet...

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#855

The bros came to assist their poor bhai ya. Why do I get the feeling that this is the beginning of a comedy of errors? Now without knowing it, Akash is already helping his bhai by falling for jiji. I wonder what Kushi's reaction will be like if he asks her parents for her hand in marriage, will she still think her parents have found her a suitable boy? Or will she refuse? I like mithu. All her secrets are gonna come our with that bird around.

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#856

Both parts were very nice. Arnav is not able to spend a day without seeing Khushi. Good thing is Akash and NK are here. And most likely Akash has fallen for Payal already, love at first sight for both brothers :-). Mittu is very cute. Waiting for next update already ...

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#857

Welcome back, a big thank you to the other writer that uploaded the updates in your absence.

The updates were Awesome and brilliant, absolutely loved both parts.

Arnav is so crazy he actually went to Khushi's house after Aman gave him a brilliant idea,

So glad NK and Akash have joined Arnav to help him woo Khushi,

Loved the song Khushi and Payal danced too, a brilliant choice.

Awww bless Akash has already fallen for Payal,

Wow loved the moment where Arnav and Khushi were in the changing room it was amazing.

The parrot was superb, praising Arnav with the words Khushi had used for him, lol.

The updates were written so beautifully from start to finish,

Loved the updates they were a brilliant read,

Thanks for the PM,

Eagerly waiting for the next part xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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IPKlover

@IPKlover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#858

Hahahahahaaa!!!!! The last line cracked me up!!! I am in love with Mittu!!!! 😆

Khushi is one of her kind...the most lovable character ever in any series ❤️

Hope ASR moves fast and gets his girl...can't wait to see the blushing Khushi and the devil lover 😳