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Episode 074

Aap shut up ...

The Equalizer ...

Yes, ASR please shut up !!! Listen to your words ... Do kodi ki ladki ... Tum ho kayya cheeze ... Khud ko kya samajhti ho ... Aukat ... Tum jaisay log ... Jis thali mein khata hai, oos thali mein chayd nahi karntay ... Dhoka deyna or jhooth bolna toh tumharay khoon mein hai ... Paisa, Power, Naam ... Tum jaisk aukat valay log ...

You really cannot be serious ASR !!! Who is writing your dialogues ... Some knuckle dragging Neanderthal who hasn't seen light of day in a million years or some leftover evil Hindi movie zamindar types from the eighties ???

Let's examine just a few of the ugly things you just said ... Do kodi ki ladki ... Implying some one who is easily bought ... Is cheap ... Not worth the attention ... A throw away ... Not your equal ...

Tum ho kya cheeze ... Cheeze ... An inanimate object ... Not a living breathing human being who can get hurt ... And incredulous statement ... What the hell are you ... A nothing ... Not your equal ...

And finally, your favorite ... Aukat ... A word that can mean a lot of things ... What exactly do you mean when you say Aukat ??? Status ??? Position in society ... Means ... Power ... Education ... Ability to speak another language ... An Address ??? What ??? That she lives on the wrong side of the tracks ... That she has no choice but to work for a living ??? That she is not your equal ... Because she lacks these things ...

You also go on to admonish your fabulously wealthy sister not to apologise to this girl with no Aukat ... Voh aap ki naukar hai ... Aap ki di hui salary say oos ka ghar chata hai ... I see ... Lavanya also gets a salary from you ... But she is not a naukar ... Right ??? Because she really doesn't have to work ...but chooses to dabble ... And really being a naukar deserves no respect ... Again ... Not your equal ...

Does it irk you that she is not scared to speak up ... because only the size of your bank balance gives you the right to express your views ... Right ? You shout at Lavanya too ... But never about her aukat ... Lavanaya's aukat is equal to yours ... Right ??? So somewhat some equality there ...

Or are you simply furious that she made a mazzak of you sab kay samnay ...

I really do not understand this ... Because ASR, there is plenty of evidence that you really could not be like this ... You really should be the one cringing hearing your self and not the other way around ...

And please do not give me inner turmoil, angst nonsense and how she makes you feel ... Coz nothing ... nothing can justify how you just spoke to this girl ... The words you use ... What do you know of her that you speak with so much authority ??? Really nothing ...

Forget you ASR ...

This time, he had caught red handed with her hands in the cookie jar. She was in his room ... Her hands on his broken laptop ... What else can it mean ??? Based on her little shenanigans yesterday, no need to give her a chance to explain herself.

Once again she is at his feet ... This time no helping hand to pull her up ... He has been rejected twice ... Instead of offering an out stretched palm, a denial ... A slow curl of his figures to form a terrifying clenched fist ... Aab nahi bach sakati ... Aab kaboo aai hai ...

Late last night he had figured out who was behind all his mini misadventures. He had bristled in anger at her audacity, vowing to teach her a lesson ...

A good nights sleep ... Some time and distance to cool off and by morning he was ready to let it all go ... This seems to be a real pattern ... He is so ready to steps away but something happens and he is dragged right back in ... Baychara ASR ... Kya karay ?? Just can't control his temper or his nasty tongue ... Oos ki galti thodi hai...

The morning had started smoothly enough .. Only, he was a little spooked ... Checking his pockets ... His shoes ... Just being cautious ... So she had gotten away with a few silly childish pranks ... He was going to ignore her ... but can't allow her the same pleasure today ...

He had run into her at his front door on his way to work ... Eyes tightly shut ... mumbling a little prayer for him not be home ... Well ... prayer granted ... He had angled past her but had turned to see, what he knew had been coming...

Two days in a row ... He sees her feel his presence ... He sees her unsure ... still questioning her way through it ... Much as he had done days ago ... Sees her struggle ... Not completely sure what to make of it ... But before she could turn and confirm his presence ... He had walked away.

Back in his room ... He had spewed venom ... Paisa ... Kimat ... Aukat ... Mera kamra ... Meri cheezay ... She had entered his kamra ... Touched his things ... How dare she ... She had intruded into his life ... His home ... His heart ...

At least give her a chance to explain ... She is scared ... Does he not see her eyes ... The nervous wringing of her kameez ... Her leaning back ... But yet she had found the courage to stand up to him ... Aap shut up ...

Finally !!! Someone with the courage to say what needed to be said a long time ago ... So what if it sounded like a scalded kittens mew ... So what if she had respectfully said Aap ... It just that she's had enough ... Enough of his chauvinism ... Enough of his wild accusations ... Enough of his petty downright ugly vocabulary ... She can't tolerate his unfair baseless words ... Means exactly what she said ... Shut up !!!

It means that in spite of not having Paisa, Power, Naam, she is his equal ... She has her pride, her self respect ... A belief in herself ... Her own value ... Not based on the superficial things he is measuring her against ... She will not stand by demurely and let him accuse her unjustly ...

If he is going to accuse of things she has not done ... Punish her for something she hasn't done then she might as well do it and be blamed rightly ... Before she can damage his laptop any further ... He grabs her by her wrist ...

The same wrist he had held on to at Ber Sarai ... Staking his claim ... Not letting her go ... Not letting her fall. The same wrist he had jerked her close to him ... at their first meeting ... His forceful hold marking her now as it marked her then ... His mouth spews a hateful speech but his eyes and body speak a different language ... She is learning to read the unspoken desire that radiates from him in tsunami like long, sustained, deep waves ... What does he want from her ??? Hi Di interrupts ... Shocked to see them locked in an such private battle ... She presses Khushi to explain ...

Khushi truthfully answers Apnay Bhai say poochyiay ... Humnay inki basha samajh nahi aati ... How can she understand it ... When he himself does not know that the words he is saying and what his heart, his eyes and his body are flashing are poles apart ...

Heedlessly, he pushes further ... Issay toh iss ki kimat bhi nahi pata hogi ... She snaps back, Insaan say ziada toh hogi nahi ...

Khushi ... Insaan sey ziada hai iss tootay laptop ki kimat ... Remember he had said Do kodi ... Iss laptop ki kimat sacch mein tum say ziada hai ...

ASR ... You are raising hell about a miserable broken laptop ... What about the heart you are breaking ... What about the spirit you are determined to break ... What about the kimat of that ??? You seem to know the price of everything ... But not the value ...

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Episode 74

The game is so on.All the players are in action with their action plans to move forward.In this triangular Love the Queen is in the middle of the King and the Slithery Rook,Shyam.One is trying to make her go through humiliations by others to get her for himself and the other is ready to humiliate her by himself to make her away from him.


Shyam the Slithery rook decides the necklace for Anjali for the day and then hides it from her so he can move on with the next step of this plan.The BG music intensifies the senario.He steals the necklace for his next move.

After reaching GH ,He places the necklace in Khushi's bag by asking her "Jal" water .This Lawyer is a pure liar "Apka Shantivan mein aana hamare liye khatre se khali nahin[Its dangerous for me to have you in RM]Today his expression was a pure proof he always like that either his way or no way.I don't think he ever was good or nice period...


He calls Anjali to show extra creamy love to her as he is on mission today to make sure Khushi couldn't be able to go to RM again..


He always rehearse his failure moments and today was the first one.He is a pure con artist . Seriously

He said while having her picture in his hand,"hum apke saath hain na Khushiji" [I am with you Khushiji] as he is holding Khushi...Yuck!

"Khuda ki maar ho tujh pe"...you make me sick with your seditious acts...Khushi and with you keep dreaming she will be taken away from you from right under your nose and you won't be able to do anything.

PONDERING POINT:Everytime when he does or act upon his plan his BLUE BRACELET is always visible.Evil blue...

King and Queen Round 3

GH.New day arises and Khushi is late to work.Its 9:00 o'clock and she is late.

Symbolism:#9 To sum up the meaning of number 9: action, war, conflict and endings. 9, would seem to be an unhappy, unlucky number; but you must look at 9 as part of the whole. Sometimes, new beginnings cannot happen without endings. Sometimes, peace cannot occur without conflict, etc. So, think of 9 in your life as a time when things are about to change, and they surely are about to change.

CONNECTION:The upcoming fight and tea throwing and sorry is going to change everything in between Arnav and Khushi and even in between La and Khushi.

The convo in between her and Payal was interesting and she found out about Akash sir and his car problems but couldn't connect the dots why here in this prem nagar.Payal's anxiousness was worth watching to see her premi viewing mirror Akashiji.😆

Symbolism & Connections:Two pickle jars.Before Apart and now together.


Before all these relations were apart but the treasuring each others emotions and giving respect was there.All Raizadans and Guptas were apart but now they are kind a together and soon Shyam is going o bring Khushi's parents over here too.There is a connection in between all of them which is growing bigger each day and they are coming close.

Same with ARSHI they were apart but treasure each other every moment while being apart but now they are together in some sense and they are treasuring each and every moment of their life even in their hate and love tag gameJust a brilliant thought behind all of this.

RM.Arnav,"Mere jane ke baad mere kamre mein koun aata hai iss par nazar rakho" [keep an eye who comes in my room after I leave ]Jay Prakash got his orders after checking his shoes.Yesterdays events are still fresh as mango juice and still singing as Jalabi bai in his mind and he wants to be even with her.His acrimony and antagonism has reached to its hike.

DM has different plan for them today.After saying good bye to house ladies,the moment he opens the door ,the one face he wants to teach a lesson is praying for not seeing his LaadGovernor's face.It breaks his heart as she is still adamant not to see him but Closed eyes of bewitching and charming beauty, tempting lips saying prayers with innocence and seductiveness melted him to the core as his eye expressions tells the whole different story and he leaves upon her wishes to DM.His sensual essence awakes the awareness of his presence in her as he stops to see the reaction of it as he knows her awareness about him .She knows he is there .Piano tone in the BG adds the delicacy in this scenario.Then she gets upset and turns around baffling about whole situation which was not in her control .They both are mirror image of each other and know exactly what are they doing or feeling without knowing why and that's the cause of the bafflement and the agitation among them.

Khushi wants La to remember all the beans names.Uhhh... La and her attitude is intolerable and inadmissible.What a naive girl...can't differentiate in between Ma's Dal or Pa's Dal and thinking all the time Arnav Dal😆


Symbolism":Khushi said three Dal's names and in the kitchen all jars are arranged as 2,3 and 5 combo even in colors too

#2-Two is the number of discord and conflict, but also of balance and marriage.It also represents love and lust in man and woman.2 is considered as a femine number.

#3-Number three expresses all aspects of creation, including birth life and death, past, present and future, and mind body and soul and man, woman and child. 3 is considered as a masculine number.The symbolism of three is also linked with the triangle.It is also associated with victory.

#5-As the sum of two, a feminine number and three a masculine number, the sum of the first even and odd numbers. (2 + 3) is 5.

5 represents action and motion like a trip and Some of the best journey's are taken in the mind and spirit.


CONNECTION: 2 means love and lust in between ARSHI as two mangoes yesterday.3 is the triangle in between ARSHI and Slither [Shyam]...it also will bring up past ,present and future in between these three and along with others as Shyam's revelation of his deeds in front of Khushi and then Arnav and then Arnav and Khushi's with each other and so on and the victory will be in Khushi's hand first in case of Shyam and later in Arshi's hand.5 is action button as ASR and Khushi's actions with each other and along with Slither and everyone else including Babuji...

Khushi"Hum itna dubak kar kyun chal rahe hain"[Why am I wakling so silently] ..."Woh Laad Governor tou yahan hai nahin ...ub kiss ka dar hai.."[Laad governor is not here then why fear]"Uss Laad governor ko usli ghussa tub ayega jab ..."[Laad Governor will be angry when...]She couldn't finish her sentence and Laad Governor was there .His growling and drilling eyes with closed fist was enough to tell her his state of mind.ASR,"you have enough talent to surprise me over and over...and each time you degrade yourself in my eyes."Khushi stands up and stares at him with mixed emotions.

ASR,"tum ho kia chees aur khud ko samajhti kia ho... Mein nain suna tha keh tum jaise loag jis thali mein khatain hain uss mein chaid nahin karte...Tumhain kia laga kissi ko pata nahin chalai ga....[What the hell you think of yourself ?I heard about ppl like you they always remain loyal to their owners]

Khushi stammers, "hum nain yeh..."[I did not do this]couldn't finish her sentence and he barks..

"Shut up"..."mein abhi baat kar raha hoon aur mei baat koi kat taa nahi hai" [I am still talking and no one interrupts me...] Bingo! This is bothering you since she did not let you explain your side on resignation day or in the store room and this all is cooking up in this Lava chamber to just erupt.


He advances up her, "you changed my phone ringtone, filled my shoes with juice and made me laughter in front of all."She says sorry by her eyes but he is no mood today...

"How dare you to touch my laptop...don't you dare lie"

ASR,"tumhari aukat mein achee tarah se janta hoon ...aur tum jaisi do kori ki larki aur kare gi bhi kia"[I know the girl like you with low status can't do better]

Khushi gulps down all the insults and humiliations but then it was more than enough when he says,"Khabi khabi tou mujhe aisa lagta hai keh dhoka daina aur jhoot bolna tumhare khoon mein hai"[Sometimes I feel deceiving and lying is in your blood]

Pause here:Bravo! ..How and when did she deceive you ASR when she looked at you in the store room and after understanding your feelings she denied and deceived you and herself.AND you think she lied to you for leaving to Lukhnow and jumped in your closet.That's what destroying your peace of mind...hmmm

Arnav,"Tum jaisi aukat wale kiss baat par itna akarte ho"[how come a person of such a low status feels so proud and for what]...This was the last nail he can nail today.

Pause here:She is out of reach that's why she is bugging you right..

Khushi,"aagar humain apni aukat par eik kitab likhna pari tou hum apke paas zaroor ayeige...laikin iss waqat humain yeh sab nahin sunna"[If I have to write a book on my status the I will come to you but right now I am not in a mood for hearing all of this]

Arnav huffs up,"you should think this before coming in my room ,before touching my things..]

Pause here:I don't think that this broken laptop is you talking about.You are asking her why did she enter in your armor shell ,in your brain and heart without your permission but is that her fault?

Khushi infuriatedly, "ok then What are you going to do..you will make another contract,threat me with one lakh rupees, or throw me out of here..as ASR can't be wrong or no one can call him wrong..."wohooo...that's what cooking at this side of the chamber.I hope you got the taste of your own image in her Akhroo...Now you have to put your Howard brain at work to find out why is she taking all that crap from you...She knows she has an affect on you and you care about that and same is with her but neither one of you know why is this happening.

After hearing all his astonishing reaction is enough to tell the state of his mind.

Arnav outrages and storms up by stepping up to her,"Shut up"..Khushi holds on to her respect this time by clutching her Dupatta,"aap Shut Up".."you may like to blame ppl but I don't like to take blame ..

He wasn't expecting that...

Pause here:She never wanted to enter your territory Akhroo and if you are blaming then she is not taking it as you can't have her forcefully or by any means.You are wrong with her since the day one and she's been telling you by standing in front of you, you destroy her image in Lukhnow,her family went through hell ...you made her life miserable in office and nearly put her in life and death situation.she is in no mood of your nonsense.

Khushi,"but if you are blaming me then let me make it true."She moves forward to break the lap top completely but he grabs her hand firmly and furiously as she did not grab his hand yesterday so today he is holding it forcefully to show her he can do that .She tries to release but his glaring gazes on her face and gripping grasp on her wrist are impossible to free upon as I said before "He wants her at any terms period whether Khushi says yes or No" and that's what he did exactly when he forcefully married her.

"Anjali comes in and breaks the spell of this anguish moment but his gazes are still on her as he is watching and searching the reaction of his true expression for her rather it was in anger.

Anjali asks the reason of all of this and Khushi,"Ask your brother as I don't understand his language"..He is not happy with this answer. [and in his mind ok so u wanna play more.]

He answers ,"Di this girl who you hired and pay salary was trying breaking things in my room"Khushi looked at him astonishingly at this response and he glares back

Pause here:Indiretcly he is conveying her she is obliged to him as she is servant to his sister who is paying her through him.

Arnav,"Look at this laptop Di,"I am sure she does not know the real price of this..."Khushi,"eik insaan se ziyada tou ho gi nayei"[It can't be more than a human being]


Arnav roars at her .."Enough" and she jerks back with immense hurt and he receives that pain too by acknowledging his outrage as his expression changes immediately.He knows it right away but again this is the only way he can keep her out of his shattered shell.


Anjali tells him its not Khushi's fault ,its mine as she broke it accidentally.His remorse and regret was written all over but "ASR is never wrong"Anjali seeks forgiveness from Khushi when he barges in again to hurt her more"Di aap ko isse sorry bolne ki koi zaroorat nahin .[Di u don't have to say sorry to her].She is your servant and her home runs on your salary"

Khushi's pain can be felt in his eyes as their eyes speak volume today but he is adamant to throw her out of his life as if he can't have her then she better stay off of him.

He can't bear her tears so he walks off the room and then stopped , turned to deliver the message that he does not care [koi farak nahin parta] Sad Raba Ve mingles in but he turns back firmly with this and walked away.She receives the message with hurtful and teary eyes...


Two lovers who are burning in this fire of icy Love ,one wants materialistic relation to satisfy his urge and desires and other wants to burn in it with denial but still wants to remain intact for eternity as this is his right and no one can have it.The Queen is burning in it silently with denial too but her heart beats for the second one and the first one is not even close to it and she will go through hell emotionally and will get humiliated because of Slithery actions of this second Slithery and filthy Lover.

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ipoona

Taliyan 👏

Love the concept of your about Zamindarana ...Muahhh for that

I read that part like a maniac and I am doing this from my phone.Sorry can't quote on phone..


Arnav is not angry with her for breaking his Lappy ,its ASR shell at the cracking point and he is the one wh said to his Di...Agar aisi koi Ladki aa bhi gaye tou main uss se door hi rahoonga. ...yeah right he is and that's why you were going after this low aukat gal to see if she is fine after getting muddy all around.Yes she is cracking is shell by standing infront of him and La has no guts to do it...

How can he let her go as you mentioned during bhair serai she snatched her hand away almost and today he saw her feeling him and this twice in two days.
He is feeling these strong desires which instead of making him feel romantic, he is roaring with Low Aukat status speech.That's all he knows , nothing else and one day on the bridge when he will say that to her I know bohat mushkil hai aisho araam ko chorna ...she will be the one will be ready to move on and he will be doing all sorts of things to bring her back...Tumhain paa keh rahoonga iss contract se phele...


Ipoona I just loved it so much that couldn't jump during my work to answer..

Thank you.😊
Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

Loved them guys... 🤗


Thnx nishu you know how much I love you for your sweet comments.😊
Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago
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Ipoona, thats just plain brilliant! 👏👏 How do you do it? You speak each and every of his inner word so aptly! Some of the BEST inferences of ASR i am reading in your posts! Great job my friend!
Yes, he didn't have an excuse today for the kind of caustic tongue he used..no angst, no inner turmoil.. would justify what all he said to her today! Kudos to this girl for standing up and telling him exactly what he should do.."aap shut up"!! 👏👏 The very reason we loved this girl! You are right what the hell was the dialogue writers thinking today for all those typical feudal remarks of the bygone era he made.. but know what.. they hit the bull's eye with that "AAP shut up"!!
Anjali has this habit of intruding in their most private moments..:).. such intense battle clearly in favor of one today!
Agree with Arshi, this one is an exhilarating read!👏Keep writing and rocking my friend!
Edited by Horizon - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Horizon

Ipoona, thats just plain brilliant! 👏👏 How do you do it? You speak each and every of his inner word so aptly! Some of the BEST inferences of ASR i am reading in your posts! Great job my friend!

Yes, he didn't have an excuse today for the kind of caustic tongue he used..no angst, no inner turmoil.. would justify what all he said to her today! Kudos to this girl for standing up and telling him exactly what he should do.."aap shut up"!! 👏👏 The very reason we loved this girl! You are right what the hell was the dialogue writers thinking today for all those typical feudal remarks of the bygone era he made.. but know what.. they hit the bull's eye with that "AAP shut up"!!
Anjali has this habit of intruding in their most private moments..:).. such intense battle clearly in favor of one today!
Agree with Arshi, this one is an exhilarating read!👏Keep writing and rocking my friend!

Horizon ... I am truly honored ... And humbled ... The story is such that it is easy to re-tell ... And the way it was told ... The way it was acted ... The way all of us lost our hearts ... I just ramble ... And hope it makes sense ... I am not fishing here ... But I truly believe that my posts are mere ... Pretty words ... Of how I see things ... Not analytical ...but Love you for being such a sweetheart and encouraging me ...
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Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

Ipoona


Taliyan 👏

Love the concept of your about Zamindarana ...Muahhh for that

I read that part like a maniac and I am doing this from my phone.Sorry can't quote on phone..


Arnav is not angry with her for breaking his Lappy ,its ASR shell at the cracking point and he is the one wh said to his Di...Agar aisi koi Ladki aa bhi gaye tou main uss se door hi rahoonga. ...yeah right he is and that's why you were going after this low aukat gal to see if she is fine after getting muddy all around.Yes she is cracking is shell by standing infront of him and La has no guts to do it...

How can he let her go as you mentioned during bhair serai she snatched her hand away almost and today he saw her feeling him and this twice in two days.
He is feeling these strong desires which instead of making him feel romantic, he is roaring with Low Aukat status speech.That's all he knows , nothing else and one day on the bridge when he will say that to her I know bohat mushkil hai aisho araam ko chorna ...she will be the one will be ready to move on and he will be doing all sorts of things to bring her back...Tumhain paa keh rahoonga iss contract se phele...


Ipoona I just loved it so much that couldn't jump during my work to answer..

Thank you.😊

ArshiH ... Sorry couldn't respond earlier ... Just came back from work ... Thank you for taking the time ... Instill have a lot of catching up to do ... By the way loved 75 ... Will go there after dinner ... Thanks always ...

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