arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: wiwy
That was such a fantastic mix of IPK romantic scenes and Manmohan Desai type bollywood masala dhishum dhishum movie! Best of both worlds! And the best of the angry young man ! Thanks In di!🤗

romance, aksun, dialogwa, mojheek, dhishum dhishum, oh how the hindi phillum in us beckons us to reveal our filmi soul. i was too weak to walk away. shyam ki dhulai being etched in my thoughts by arshi... this just had to be. my only question was, was it satisfying enough, or do we need another round? still pondering. feel like giving him one more mukka.

ipk scenes walk in and keep telling me it would be wise of me to include them... mind of their own i say.

glad ya liked. i am exhausted after that update.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Preety_Nebula
Hey Indi Di...😊

Remember me...nah...since my ID had changed no one remembered me...You don't even PM me only Arshi Di does...

I am not going to lie , i missed a lot of chapters but this update is a killer...a bombastic post ...love it.muahhh for that

I will be back when I will finish other updates .

goofy, my drama queen, 😳

who can forget you... i just didn't want to disturb you in your current state of bliss. delighted to see you. thank you for liking this chapter. do read and ii will barrage you with pms here on. teehee. 🤗

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: salooni
outstanding😆

thanks, soni...🤗

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

priyanka, 😳

thank you.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: indi52

thanks, soni...🤗

di return gift if will be

only that hug

or ove you

then also it will okay

you no need to be formal with me😆

i am too your little baby type

okay so relax

i liked it very much and waiting for next 😉😳

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anonyasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Great update. Glad the snake is captured. Looking forward to the story continuing in Sheesh Mahal.

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Horizon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Congratulations on the second thread writerji! 👏

Yes it has all the asr ism and khushiism all over pervading... Like it always does in the world of ARSHI you weave magically!

Just caught up with all the chapters I lagged. Loved the intermix of emotions, pace and story.. Great going.

My absolute fav, the arrival of baby Arnav and Anjali's absolute love for that moment! Those soft feet and tiny hands.. Take us back to some fond memories of our own.. And made this man even more endearing as if I knew him even longer! And how Ratna Malik was utterly elated to see the bonding between her two children. Felt so real and touching.

Absolutely loving how you layer past with present and their coming around beautifully!

Contended at the dhulayi of shyamji. But what a vicious snake he is... He is spooing venom again about that night... We all so dearly wanted to see that BG. I know we have some thing exciting in store.

Loving ASR in this action pack mode after laying motionless for while. Looking forward to a fab ride.

Congrats again Indi on a well deserved grand success of this absolutely beautiful story.

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IssK.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Hello there! Just updated my Comments on Page One. Truly fabulous writing this!!!!

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: anonyasr
Great update. Glad the snake is captured. Looking forward to the story continuing in Sheesh Mahal.

thanks so much, anonyasr,

that snake needs to be tortured for seven lives 😆. yes, looks like we will reach sheeshmahal one of these days. so glad you are enjoying.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Horizon
Congratulations on the second thread writerji! 👏
Yes it has all the asr ism and khushiism all over pervading... Like it always does in the world of ARSHI you weave magically!

Just caught up with all the chapters I lagged. Loved the intermix of emotions, pace and story.. Great going.
My absolute fav, the arrival of baby Arnav and Anjali's absolute love for that moment! Those soft feet and tiny hands.. Take us back to some fond memories of our own.. And made this man even more endearing as if I knew him even longer! And how Ratna Malik was utterly elated to see the bonding between her two children. Felt so real and touching.
Absolutely loving how you layer past with present and their coming around beautifully!
Contended at the dhulayi of shyamji. But what a vicious snake he is... He is spooing venom again about that night... We all so dearly wanted to see that BG. I know we have some thing exciting in store.

Loving ASR in this action pack mode after laying motionless for while. Looking forward to a fab ride.

Congrats again Indi on a well deserved grand success of this absolutely beautiful story.

thank you, horizon,

glad to hear you are liking it... that it's all gelling... a picture coming through. the poor man lay supine for 10 chapters i think... he just couldn't take it any more... demanded i get him action drama and a swing at snake. i thought i'd spend some time on how he looked going berserk in the rain, then realised that would become a book by itself 🤣

i am so happy you like the arrival of broother scene... my mother's name was ratna, may be the moment i hear it, memories leap out. something terribly connected in this bro sis pair, i thought it's beginning must have been memorable in its own way.

horizon, thanks for always enjoying what i write and being so full of praise. it is very encouraging... good to see you, sir. 🤗