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Posted: 12 years ago
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again, this is just beautiful. The simplicity that you've woven through the words is awe worthy.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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whether it was your intention or not I don't know, but I interpreted this as Khushi's POV. If yesterday you showed Arnavs joyous love through his eyes, today you showed the grace and apprehension of Khushis. There is an underlying sense of melancholy to todays piece. The piece that reflects the turbulant Ocean, Arnav. Whereas yesterdays had a sense of peace and joy throughout. Basically what I am trying to say is that in my interpretation Arnavs eyes saw Khushis unyielding zeal and colourful approach to life, and Khushi sees the complex yet loving man she married. Arnav appreciates his love (this i learnt yesterday) but he struggles to show it with the abandon Khushi perhaps craves, and this I learnt today. But that's not to say she loves her man any less, she simply holds onto every precious moment life gives her, because when everything else fades away, love and memories will always remain.
Love is complicated isn't it? And every eye will see something differently, interperate something differently, live something differently, but love, that's universal. Its complicated, its colourful, its turbulant, its heartbreaking, yet its healing if you're lucky enough to recieve true love then its nothing short of being breathtaking.
Thank you for showcasing the beauty of complex yet beautiful love through your words. Unfortunately my ramblings will never do justice to the brilliance of what you have penned.
Manreet :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love this new experimental way you are using to express emotions.
Lovely OS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: manreet_gill

whether it was your intention or not I don't know, but I interpreted this as Khushi's POV. If yesterday you showed Arnavs joyous love through his eyes, today you showed the grace and apprehension of Khushis. There is an underlying sense of melancholy to todays piece. The piece that reflects the turbulant Ocean, Arnav. Whereas yesterdays had a sense of peace and joy throughout. Basically what I am trying to say is that in my interpretation Arnavs eyes saw Khushis unyielding zeal and colourful approach to life, and Khushi sees the complex yet loving man she married. Arnav appreciates his love (this i learnt yesterday) but he struggles to show it with the abandon Khushi perhaps craves, and this I learnt today. But that's not to say she loves her man any less, she simply holds onto every precious moment life gives her, because when everything else fades away, love and memories will always remain.

Love is complicated isn't it? And every eye will see something differently, interperate something differently, live something differently, but love, that's universal. Its complicated, its colourful, its turbulant, its heartbreaking, yet its healing if you're lucky enough to recieve true love then its nothing short of being breathtaking.
Thank you for showcasing the beauty of complex yet beautiful love through your words. Unfortunately my ramblings will never do justice to the brilliance of what you have penned.
Manreet :)


You are right. I wrote it from Khushi's perspective. Many people said that these One-Shots are generalized and can be used by lovers throughout. It was their interpretation, however I tried writing it for A & K only. I am glad you caught that. :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow it was beyond beautiful...i cud imagine the depth of feelings that these words describe...its runs so deep, and so beautifully exprssd...m at loss of words...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Take a bow...that was incredible. BAS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm so spellbound that I'm running short of words.

At first, I wondered whether this was poetry in prose form or prose punctuated with poetic touches. But then I realized that this beautiful piece of writing goes beyond the regular confines of prose or poetry.

Vanilla Twilight is brilliance personified.

Arnav and Khushi just fit like yin and yang in their epic love story. Their love seems so divine and pure.

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