OS: When Shyam manhandled Khushi

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melonie

@melonie

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Beautiful OS. Sigh

I would have loved something like in the show. I was smiling thorough out the chapter.

Who would fall asleep after reading this sweet update. If anything who ever felt sleepy would be wide awake at the end :)

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

loved it.

love the jealous and caring arnav. always!

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Geeta

@Geeta.R

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Absolutely loved this...

Hated the fact that kamina shyam hurt our poor khushi but arnav was to the rescue and helped relieve the pain... That moment was so pure and sincere that it left me speechless... You wrote that part beautifully

Thank you xx

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OmNaMaSteOm

@OmNaMaSteOm

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

I like the ending alot. But Shyam should have been revealed na ?

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

This was such a lovely OS and on my favourite track <3 A very well written story :)

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Ani

@DesiiiiGirllll

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Very well written i was totally into it😳

Well i wnt a part 2 to this[:$

Luv it❤️

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falakanand

@falakanand

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Read it in one go
It was amazinggg
Loved the os
Plz pm me ur work
I would love to read

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kiran1992

@kiran1992

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Wow...
Very nice yaar...
I loved it...
I wish something like this was shown in d show...
Good job dear... 👏

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

This was amazing.
Lovely turn of events...
😊

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

IPKKND, the serial, was unable to fulfill many of our wishes. But you lovely writers, through your wonderful writings, made them come true.

Heart warming handling of the situation!