ArHi OS: Cupid's Arrow Hits The Cloud! {Check Pg2}

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Anne

@Anne_ArHi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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mastermagician

@mastermagician

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome OS Anne!!!😃

Oh you love cupid?😳

He too loves you!

Coming to the update...It was Amazing!!!!⭐️⭐️

The way they were Lost in eachother...Aww...

The Surprising Part was that they were both Best friends and loved eachother!!!!

You described so beautifully!!!!!!

Cupid played his part well!!!😆

The Kiss was a WOW!!!❤️

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Gunjan

@..Gunjan..

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awesome it was soo sweet

and cute cupid and arnav and khushi

I couldn't guess properly till end what was their relation though in starting it said they have met before I was wondering what their relation it and WOW...they r best friends and now in love ...loved it totally !!

and the kiss 😆

lovely os

😃

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

really really nice OS...Just WOW...

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Anne

@Anne_ArHi

Explorer

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Posted: 12 years ago

Gosh! How could u guys, like this OS just like dat!

I just proof read it and It had loads of mistakes and errors.

Changes made.

I hope it is better now.

Those who have not read, Refresh before u read!

Bye.

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Anne

@Anne_ArHi

Explorer

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mastermagician
Awesome OS Anne!!!😃
Oh you love cupid?😳

He too loves you!

Coming to the update...It was Amazing!!!!⭐️⭐️
The way they were Lost in eachother...Aww...
The Surprising Part was that they were both Best friends and loved eachother!!!!
You described so beautifully!!!!!!
Cupid played his part well!!!😆
The Kiss was a WOW!!!❤️
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Thanks a lot yaar!

Your comment made my OS worth it!

Honestly, there were a lot of mistakes, it's edited now.

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

Hey...

Loved the OS...

I first didn't realize they were best friends..I actually thought that they were strangers only...But then when each other started addressing each other by their names and at last u disclosed did my doubts come to rest...

Loved how u put forward their emotions...I really wanted to read on and on...I thought we will have a next chapter...But then only i saw the title and realized that it was an OS...

Do continue writing such awesome stuffs...

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

beautiful and perfect

i am in love with cupid now👏

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Anne

@Anne_ArHi

Explorer

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 1rocks
Hey...

Loved the OS...

I first didn't realize they were best friends..I actually thought that they were strangers only...But then when each other started addressing each other by their names and at last u disclosed did my doubts come to rest...

Loved how u put forward their emotions...I really wanted to read on and on...I thought we will have a next chapter...But then only i saw the title and realized that it was an OS...

Do continue writing such awesome stuffs...

I'd left clues about them being Best Friends or atleast acquaintances, remember these lines?

It was not any ordinary cloud but the cloud that was on its way to reach the couple who were about to meet, not that they hadn't met earlier.

This line in the 1st gave away, didn't it? It was in the second line of the OS!

But that was not the case. His question came with a soft whisper which not many got to hear.

What does think line mean now? Wasn't that enough clue? Not many got to hear but then how did this stranger achieve it? She is got be someone special, right?

"Is there any problem? Acidity or something?"

This line of Arnav had to make it clear. It had become obvious now that they knew each other from before. Arnav's naughty question provided the clue again.

"Who knows better than me? Let's go."

Can there be any doubt left after this line dat Khushi asked to Arnav? How would Khushi know he disliked rain, had she not known him? Answer, Answer?

Later, I gave it away directly.

Thanks a lot dear! You comment made my OS special.

Honestly, I did not want my readers to know that they were best friend from 1st only. It coming out as surprise, was what I wanted.

You know, there is nothing more left to continue this story. Somethings should be left one's imagination.

Edited by Anne_ArHi - 12 years ago

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anne_ArHi

I'd left clues about them being Best Friends or atleast acquaintances, remember these lines?

It was not any ordinary cloud but the cloud that was on its way to reach the couple who were about to meet, not that they hadn't met earlier.

This line in the 1st gave away, didn't it? It was in the second line of the OS!

But that was not the case. His question came with a soft whisper which not many got to hear.

What does think line mean now? Wasn't that enough clue? Not many got to hear but then how did this stranger achieve it? She is got be someone special, right?

"Is there any problem? Acidity or something?"

This line of Arnav had to make it clear. It had become obvious now that they knew each other from before. Arnav's naughty question provided the clue again.

"Who knows better than me? Let's go."

Can there be any doubt left after this line dat Khushi asked to Arnav? How would Khushi know he disliked rain, had she not known him? Answer, Answer?

Later, I gave it away directly.

Thanks a lot dear! You comment made my OS special.

Honestly, I did not want my readers to know that they were best friend from 1st only. It coming out as surprise, was what I wanted.

You know, there is nothing more left to continue this story. Somethings should be left one's imagination.