ArHi OS- Over The Time.

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PSharada

@PSharada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Loved reading this cute OS. And I loved how you spanned their love life from their childhood but looks like you got bitten by 4Lions creative bug and the story ran its course right after they got married. Not fair, not fair at all. Extend it a little until at least they had a child. Regarding the title anything would be fine and I loved this 'Over the time' title too. The other title which comes to my mind is "Hamesha'.

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JumpyUmbrella

@JumpyUmbrella

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

You like writing things stretched out on a lengthy period dating to the start till the end, right? It was similar in Way Back To Love, and, I happen to like it, given the fact that sad endings are not my cups of coffee! :P

You started it really well, it kicked off with a shack of reminisces of how I was some 7 years back. The little Khushi depicted was a flashback of my childhood! Piggytails-uggh I hated that, when my parents used to dart about forcing me to get my hair tied high up in piggytails! The joy of getting yourself new stationery products, the Natraj pencils, dustfree erasers and all!

It was a walk back to the memory lane.

The grumpy Arnav, in all its glory, is always a treat to read, be it a mini one! 😆

Summarizing it, it was sweet as paani puri, spicy as jalebi and... worth it!