ArHi OS : The Fallen Angel Pt 2 Updtd - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Waah waah Humi...takle a bow! Not only is it entirely different but the way you depicted the scene was just too good.
It was with bated breath and cautious steps that I was proceeding further to read the next para; so full of suspense this story is.
Baaki koi read kare na kare...I'm digging this.
Bas jaldi update kiya kar!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
UNRES



awesome emotions

plzz write more ...👏
aur thoda bada likh 😆😆😆
tu itnaa paagal hai but kitnaa achcha likhti hai 🤣
Edited by Destinyhope0305 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Hi! 😊

This is so intriguing. 😃 Please continue soon. ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
Oye humi ji tushi kamaal krdita kamaal krdita dhoti faad ke rumal krdita 😆 😆 Awesome update buddy do continue nahi toh 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
hi dearwritter first me in😲

socked sa bahir aoo dear tu comment write karo gye,,

seriously its ossawm i like the concept ossawm,,, yaar ur nice writter
or kya kya chupa k rakha ya bata da mujhy,, i really want to know😉
but lovely update sooon ,,,,
thnkss for the pm,,, dear ossawm job🤗


humera pagal sweeetooo,,,😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
😲
U can write also? 😲
Dee dee ke hidden talents nikal rahe hai 😆
Great start...really loved it 😃
Abhi stalking start kareka padi 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
hayee amazing😳
Edited by robertpati - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
i think its a dream :D :D
update soon /...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Stunning_Sarun

WOW! I loved it! I don't know why you are not getting a million replies! I think it was AWESOME!

You description was just amazing <3
If you do continue (which I do insist you should) please do PM me <3



Thank you 😆, I'll surely PM you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: -B.N.K-

😲😲😲


i never read any of the ff other then krani ...

i was in the class i thought it has to be better then my lecture but dude this how u write ????

this much intense description n suspense !!!!!!

i mean with detail n all ..i dont even have word to discrib it ...humi ji tuse great ho duniya me ak hooo...🤗

cant wait for next update ... all i wish it was not here it was in my home u know what i mean...😳😳

but what the hell fallen angle n vampire thats my thing...n i dig it ...

is there anything u cant do ...😡😡

loved it cant wait for the next update 😳😳😳

i m so proud ur my frn now😎...my frn not only read fallen angle or vampire she can write it...





Somebody pinch me ! 😳
You were the last person from whom I expected a comment 🤣
So, happy that I finally Imanaged to break your silence😆
Thanks for liking it Tony, you made my day 🤗
Ab itni zyada tareef karke don't embarrass me 😳

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