Originally posted by: sohara
@ BarunDiwani
Beautiful update of episode-63
I loved your idea of the alternation. There are so many FF writers who wrote several episode's alternative in the forum.I don't know you ever read it or not. They solved so many loops in their stories, what we couldn't see in IPK. Some of the stories are far far better than IPK's original script.
Darkness has special place in this love story, shades of it are used to define the leading male character making him one of the most interesting layered male character EVER, its also made to be the biggest fear of the leading female lead character and the villain of the story embodimeis it. Its the dark aspects of this story that allow the lighter ones to be so appreciative. And in this episode the gradual shift from light to dark is splendidly handled
Things started off bright and sunny, the training of La had begun with Nani's blessing jeeez Naani, can you make it a bit more obvious, which one you prefer?
Absolutely loved these lines.
Drool corner as usual made me "dhak dhak".😉
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