FF: iss pyaar ko kya naam doon (updated part 2)

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Character description:

Khushi: A sweet innocent girl. Age 19. She is in collage learning to be an architect. She is chirpy, dreamy and loves all kind of food. Just perfect example of how life should be

Arnav aka ASR: Strong businessman. Age: 27. Strong/arrogant and man of few words. Loves his Di and business. Unfortunate events in his past made him this way. Perfect example how life should not be.

Payal: Khushi's elder sister. Age 22. Just graduated from collage and started a job. She is calm/ mature and loves Khushi. She is responsible and cares for her family

Akash: Arnav's younger cousin Age 25 .. Helps Arnav in his business. He is shy but still brave. He is a simple down to earth guy. Complete oppisite of ASR

Anjali: Arnav's Di. Sweet and kind lady. Age 32. She loves Arnav and Akash both a lot. She is happily married to a lawyer and believes in religion and god.

Shyaam: Anjali's husband. Age 35 . He is married to Anjali mostly because of her money. He is lawyer but doesn't like to work hard. Sweet talker.

NK: Arnav's cousin. Age 21. He lives abroad and visiting Arnav's family this summer. Just finished graduation school and thinking about moving back to India.

More characters as we go along the story. I know the characters are exactly like they are today in IPKKND but just want to flavor them with my story. Let me know if you like it and please like and comment if you want me to continue.



Part 1:

"Khushi ab uth bhi jao. I am getting late. I have a important meeting today in about an hour. Please khushi" Payal shouted one more time as she was brushing her long beautiful hair.
Khushi just turned one more time
"Sone do na jiji." she was just about to dream about her faboulous dance in Collage gathering and she was just about to recieve a trophy for her awesome performance.
"KHUSHI. I am warning you. I am not dropping you if you don't get up now. " Payal held her hair and made a beautiful ponytail. She was looking fresh like daisy in her yellow
salwar suit with white dupappta. She was wearing long jhumake and black bindi. She was almost ready. She grabbed her purse and one more time tried to wake khushi up.
Khushi opened her beautiful eyes. She smiled
"Are waa jiji aap pe ye color bahot suit ho raha hai. Lekin itani jaldi taiyyar hoke kaha jaa rahi ho?" Khushi got up on bed.
"Jaldi? Khushi ki bacchi look at the clock. " Payal got out of room in hurry.
"oh my god it's almost 9. I have auditions at 9:30 in my collage. Jiji aapne uthaya kyu nahi.." She got up as fast as she could and ran towards bathroom.
She took just 10 minutes to get ready. She was wearing a long pink skirt and white top. her wavy hair on her back.. she just brushed them and wore a light pink lipstick.
She put on her white bracelate and grabbed her bag.
"Jiji breakfast kar rahi ho. Chalo."
"are titaliya thoda aramse.. ye paratha to khake jao" buvaji tried to stop khushi
"Nahi buvaji audition me late nahi ho sakate and Jiji aapko meeting nahi hai?" Khsuhi stuffed paratha in her mouth and she ran out.
"Khushi bhi na" payal smiled and took remaining paratha and stuffed in her mouth too.
"Payal abhi tum bhi" Garima tried to slow down her. But payal was out of the room already.
"hay re nandkishore. Garima samajh me naahi ata. ye ladakiya jaldi kahe nahi uthati. Roj ka naatak hai ye" Buvaji was puzzeled and Garima smiled..

Payal drove her scooty as fast as she could. "Khushi utar jao" Khushi was remebering her song in her mind
"KHUSHI" and she startled. "Oh College. ha jiji aap bhi jao jaldi. aapki meeting hai na"
"Haa khushi lekin dhyaan se.. " Payal shouted as she saw khushi was about to be bumped on a cow who was standing in middle of road calmly.
"oops" khushi saved herself. and walked back. and waved her hand towards jiji.
"Gomataji.. hame audition me select hone ka ashirwad dijiye." khushi joined her hands as if she was praying and she smiled. Suddenly a big sound of horn honking and someone shouted.
"Hey!!! Get out of the way" someone shouted. Khsuhi looked up and realized she was in middle of road. and big truck was coming towards her. She was so startled and wasn't sure now
where to run. She just stood there watching the truck with her eyes widened and mouth open.
Suddenly a strong arm grabbed her and almost pulled herself out of the truck's way. Khushi closed her eyes tightly. she was still holding on to that arm which was still holding her waist.
Her hair strands were on her forehead. Her soft pink lips. were muttering something. her long lashes covered her eyes. He was still looking at her. trying to understand what she was saying.

"hey devi maiyya" she was just muttering some words..
Suddenly she felt that arm pushed her back and she opened her eyes. There was this handsome man standing looking at her furiously. His jet black hair and brown eyes. with frown on his face.
He almost hissed "Can't you see where you are going?"
"hmm?" Khsuhi was still in trance.
"Are you blind?" he was still furious.
"na nahi" Khushi said as she was realziing the situation. There were papers all over that side of road. and a guy was trying to gather them in a hurry
"you.. because of you I lost all my important papers" he bursted out in anger.
"hamari bajahse?" khushi was still confused.
"Leave it.. Damn it. Aman did you find everything?"
"ji sir. almost all papers. but this one is wet.
"That's fine" and he snatched those papers out of Aman's hand and went inside car. before slamming door he hissed again "let's go"
"hamari bajah se?" khushi asked same question now to Aman.
"vo aap truck ke niche.. sir nahi hote to. us bich me sab papers" Aman tried to tell her the situation as he was still tryjng to get couple papers out of that puddle in the road.
"oh" now khushi realized what exactly happened.
"thanks" she muttered..
"sir ko kahiye." Amamn successfully managed to get all papers as he opened the other side. door.
Khushi knocked on the window. as that window rolled down.. those eyes which were still fumed with anger..
"What the"
"na nahi .. bas thanks kahena tha"
"it's alright" he snapped "Let's go Aman we are getting late.." He rolled up the window without even looking at her.
"Samjata kya hai apane aapko. hmm ghamndi raisjada.. " Khushi spoke loduly as she saw the car drove fastly.
"oh my god I am late" she started running towards her collage gate.


"How was your day Khushi" Shashi asked at dining table as usual.
"thik tha babuji. ek stupid person mila tha raste me. "He almsot made me loose my auditions. but I made it. I am going to dance on mere hatho me song" Khushi took one more bite
of roti. "Jiji kya badhiya bana hai sambar. wow. spicy. yumm"
"Khushi aramse kaho. aur ye kya bat kar raho. kaun mila tha raste me tumhe?"
"are jiji ek akhadu insan. usne mujhe truck ke niche ate bachaya aur khud ko salman khan samajh ne laga. " khushi now was on her third roti.
"hay re nand kishor. truck ke niche? khuch laga to nahi?" buvaji was sure that khushi ke sath kuch bhi ho sakata hai.
"Khushi tum thik to ho?" Garmia and shashi were now worried
"Ham bilkul thik hai. buvaji vo jalebi pass karo" khushi was lost in her dinner as usual.
"ye to galat bat hai khushi. tumhe usko thanks kahena chahiye. kyu babuji?" Payal was as usual being rational.
"Bilkul thik. kaun tha vo khushi?"
"Hame kya malum." Khushi shrugged her shoulders. "Ham sone jaa rahe hai jiji kal firse jaldi uthana hai. practise jo karni hai"




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Tintin.

Lovely Start 🤗


Thanks :)
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Part 2:

"Khushi" payal's voice was little shaky when khushi picked up the phone
"Kya huva jiji? sabkuch thik hai na?"
"Khushi wo ham vo file bhool gaye ghar. aaj naye boss aa rahe hai. I heard vo bahot gussevale hai. agar file nahi to vo. aur ham ghar bhi nahi aa sakate. khushi tum aao vo file leke please?
Payal pleaded.
"ha ha jiji kyu nahi? kaunsi file leke ana hai?" khushi took one more bite from apple she had in her hand. She has been eating it for last 15 minutes. It was her favourate time pass
to read a mystory book and eat apple slowly ..
"khushi pahele vo apple niche rakho. aur suno. vo pile rang ki file. Hamare kamare me hi hai. jaha ham sote hai udharhi"
jiji ko kaise pata chala.. khushi was surprised that her jiji knew what she was doing.. but yeah it was not importnat at that time
"ha ha jiji ham leke ate hai"
"jaldi ana khushi. " payal said it one more time when she hung up the phone. She was confused wheater she did right thing by telling khushi or not. She knew jaha khhushi waha trouble.
"he bhagavan hamari raksha karna" she closed her eyes and moved back

"naye boss itane bhi daravane nahi hai" she startled by that voice. there he was standing with a little smile on his face. He was tall and had glasses that made him look inteligent.
He was looking at her with the smile on his face. He had gentle tone in his voice.
"ji?" payal stattered.
"ji. yakin maniye itane bhi daravane nahi hai, jitana aap samajhati hai" payal felt little better by looking at his face. his smile got wider now.
"aapko kaise pata? kya aap pahele mile hai unse?"
"ha pahele bhi mila hu"
"fir?" payal was curious to know what exactly her new boss sounded like.
"ha gussevale hai lekin admires people who work hard. aur jahatak maine suna hai aap bahot hardworking hai?" He smiled once again at her.
Payal smiled.
"oh I am just junior person here. aapko pata hai? yaha pe boss ke bhai bhi kam karte hai. maine kabhi dekha nahi unko. lekin suna hai vo bhi bahot sakt hai"
"accha?" he sounded like was enjoying now.
"btw hamara naam payal hai" payal suddenly realized that she didn't even introduced herself to this guy.
"oh hi payal and I am Akash" and he held his hand out for handshake. payal smiled and gave her hand in his hand
"Nice to meet you Akash"
"same here"
suddenly they both heard people going back to work and talking about boss
"I think boss is here" Akash said
"yeah.. aap kaha baithate hai akashji?" payal asked.
"oh I sit way to the other side" Akash said "see arround some time"
Payal reached to her cube. "haa see you arround akashji"

"kaunsa floor.. pata nahi jiji kaunse floor pe kam karti hai" khushi was panicking because it took her half an hour for her to reach there. and now in 20 floor building she wasn't sure
where her jiji sits. "aur phone bhi to nahi utha rahi"
She reached elevator where bunch of people were already gathered. Khsuhi squized herself to make a way
"Excuse me please. excuse me" and she came in front of elevator. When elevator arrived before any one realizes she was already in
And there he was. Standing next to her.
"Are aap? aap bhi yaha kam karte hai?" khushi looked at him and suddnely recognized him
Arnav looked at her with again angry look "ohh god not her again" he thinked to himself.
"accha tabhi aap itana jaldi me the. Now I understand" khushi said it in chirpy voice like a kid who just solved a puzzle which he was trying to solve for last 2 hours.
"Excuse me?" Arnav wasn't sure what she was talking about.
"uss din. aapko yaad hai apane mujhe bachaya tha? and us din you were scared and was in hurry"
"Mai aur scared?" Arnav was still trying to understand what she was talking about
"I know I know yaha ka boss akhadu daravana hai. tabhi to jiji was scared. ye dekhiye ye file vo bhul ke aayi thi. and she was so scared on the phone. and us din aap bhi itani
jaldi me the. Now I know why. aap bhi us akhadu ke liye kam karte hai. hai na?" Khushi was talking nonstop.
Everyone in elevator was looking at them in shock.
Arnav raised his eyebrow and was not sure how to react to this nonsense.
"chaliye ham to yai utarenge. jiji shayad isi floor pe hai. Hamara naam khushi hai aaur aap?" and she looked at him again
He was looking at her as if she just said a joke. She wants me to introduce myself. what a joke. He didn't smile and completely ignored her.
"hmm.. jaisa boss vaise employees. laad governer kahi ka" khushi shurgged her shoulders and went inside.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good one, story line sounds nice. The characters are well portrayed as the original one specially Kushi. Please pm me when u will update next part. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: A_R_S

Good one, story line sounds nice. The characters are well portrayed as the original one specially Kushi. Please pm me when u will update next part. 😊

Thank you. yep I will pm you :)
But I will wait for sometime. If I don't get responses, I won't update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shwetapt

Thank you. yep I will pm you :)
But I will wait for sometime. If I don't get responses, I won't update.



Yeah that I can understand. What about ur friends from ur buddy list? Did they read FF?

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