my first ff - HO HI GAYA PYAR ch4 updated

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Ho Hi Gaya PyarThis is my first FF and so i would love if you all take out time to read and comment on it as your comments will encourage me and motivate me . i know i am quite bad at writing but this idea was in my mind from a long time and since my holidays started i decided to write it .HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT
This is going to be a sweet, cute and romantic ff with lots
fun and madness. So in short it is a light hearted fan fiction.
Character Sketch
ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA
(24 years)
A fun loving , charming , carefree and flirty guy .He loves
playing pranks . Has many girlfriends. He dates a new girl every now and then. He does not believe in commitments
and always wonder how someone can spend their entire life with a person. He
cares about his family the most specially his big bro. He is a bit stubborn and
hot tempered especially when it came to his family he could do anything . Works
for a gaming software company in London .
KHUSHI KUMARI GUPTA
(22 years)
She is an ambitious wedding planner and owns a marriage and
event management company. Stays with her family in Delhi . she belongs to a
middle class family and has the responsibility of her family . She is a strong
independent lady in front of the world but is a child at heart .
AKASH SINGH RAIZADA
(26 years)
He is arnav's big brother and elder son of the raizada's who
currently is responsible for their family business ' AR DESIGNS . He is in love
with payal sharm . He always believed in true love and marriges unlike his
little brother .
PAYAL SHARMA
(24 years)
She is Akash's girlfriend . She was his personal assistant
and had a crush on him. Soon she realised it was love and akash also confessed
that he was in love with payal at the first sight . She belongs to a middle
class family .She is sweet and bubbly in nature .
LAVANYA KASHYAP
(22 years)
She is khushi's assistant . She is modern but yet traditional
and sweet. She loves shopping and her favourite colour is pink .
ANJALI JHA (32years)
Widow of shyam manohar jha and elder sister of Arnav . She is
currently to shaken with her husband's death (1 year ago) and is trying to be happy and move in life .
TANYA JHA
Anjali and
shyam's daughter (4 year's old)
RAGHAV AND
ANYA SINGH RAIZADA
Akash,
Anjali and Arnav's parents . They are very traditional .
SHASHI AND
GARIMA GUPTA
Khushi's parents
ANAND AND
JHANVI SHARMA
Payal's parents
MANORAMA
AND MANAV KISHORE
Arnav, akash and anjali's mama and mami who stay with them at the raizada mansion and have a
son nikhil Kishore (nk) who is currently staying in Sydney due to work .

so how was it please comment and like

INDEX :
CHAPTER 1 : the start -
CHAPTER 2 : the arrival - scroll down
CHAPTER 3 : PG 2
CHAPTER 4 : PG 3

Chapter 1

The Start

In Delhi

"OMG!! Payal I can't believe you are getting married and that too to the Mr. akash singh raizada you know na he is raghav singh raizada's elder son and the owner of AR designs oh how silly am I to ask you this question after all you are his would be wife and you know what that means I am his would be sister- in- law yani adhi khar wale"

Knushi shouted in the phone jumping from her chair in excitement making payal move the mobile away from her ear and smile at khushi's antics . khushi was in her office working on some bridal dress designs when her phone rang and without seeing who is calling she picked it and was surprised hearing payal's voice from the other end . she knew that payal was in love with her boss infact the first person to know this was khushi and since now a days payal was busy spending time with her boss and drooling over him during work hours so khushi least expected a call from payal at this hour of day but what happened next was even more surprising . payal told her that akash has told his and her family about them and the family has decided to do their engagement as soon as possible . Hearing this khushi was filled with excitement and joy .

After khushi calmed down a little payal spoke "yay a ms.adhi ghar wale now calm down I wanted to tell you that only you are going to plan my wedding so you are appointed as the wedding planner of mr.akash singh raizada and payal sharma"

"ok but I won't take the fee after all its my best friend's wedding" she replies as she knew payal would ask her to take

" no khushi you will have to take your fee" payal tried to convince her

"NO means NO I know you are saying this to improve my financial problems but I can manage that but I will not bear if my elder di will pay me to plan her wedding"

"ok" replied a disappointed payal

Khushi understood that she is disappointed and so tries to cheer her up "oye don't get upset now ha aur waise bhi I will take lots of money (neik) from my jeju when he will bring the barat" she said enthusiastically

Khushi and payal were childhood best friends. Actually for khushi payal was like her elder sister as she was two years elder to her and since khushi never had any sibling, she calls her Di . Payal and khushi's parents were best friends and so were they . They shar each and every single thing with each other and spend hours gossiping .

She was very happy for payal as she got a good life partener , a person who loved her the most and whom she loves the most. Khushi had met akash few times and at first sight only she could tell he was a gentleman and payal could have not got a better partner .

Deep down in her heart she always wished to get a person like akash who loved her , cared for her and could do anything for her .

In London

"Arnav the boss has asked to hand him the designs of the new game within two day you know na the latest project one so please complete them as soon as possible Mr. head designer you know about boss anger he even said that if you don't give them in two days you are fired" said viraj as soon as he entered arnav's cabin.

He was arnav's best friend and colleague . He knew arnav and his habbits very well . Arnav was best a designing games no wonder he is the head designer of one of the best gaming software company of London. The problem was his over confidence and attitude.

"chill viru I'll do it no need to worry you know I am the best" he said proudly

"yay a I know it" he replied and rolled his eyes . he knew that one day he will have to pay a heavy price due to his attitude.

Arnav's phone rang and he saw it was akash who was calling him, he picked the call

"Hi what's up bhai" he said casually

"arnav I want to tell you that I proposed payal and she said yes . I also talked to our families and they happily agreed so the engagement will soon be fixed the date is not decided yet but since I want my little bro to be present on all the occasions I want you to come to india as soon as possible and listen I don't want to hear any excuses about work you are coming that's it ." he said I one go .

Arnav was now experiencing the same feeling like khushi and was boosted with excitement

"I am going to give my leave note bhai love you" he said hurriedly jumped out from his chair and rushed to his boss's cabin with viraj follong behind.

One side arnav was happy that his brother is getting married and on the other side viraj was wondering why arnav wants to take a leave

Arnav went inside the cabin while viraj stayed outside near the door trying to listen the conversation

Boss ' "arnav did you start working on the new designs?" he questioned

Arnav ' "not now boss I want to take a leave for one month" he said one month as he knew that indian weddings have lots of rituals and takes a lot of time and also he wanted to spend some time with his family

"WHAT how can you take a leave arnav and that too for one month you know that you are the head of the new project which starts this weak and you want to take a leave ?" his boss asked in disbelief and anger

"I don't give damn to that project I wan't a leave now or else I am giving my resignation" he replied stubbornly

His boss was also angry so he said " fine you don't need to come to the office from tomorrow"

"good for me" he said and went out of the cabin were viraj was waiting for him

When he came out the first thing he saw was viraj's shocked expression and immediately understood what was coming next so simple said "bhai is getting married so I am leaving for India as soon as possible"

PRECAP : arnav reaches india and comes to know that khushi is the wedding planner

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nice work

update soon

it seems that arnav & khushi knows each other
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thanks !!!!
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Originally posted by: chandananagesh


nice work

update soon

it seems that arnav & khushi knows each other

thanks !!! i am happy that you liked my work and i'll try to update soon 😊
sorry but they don't know each other as i want them to know each other hope you'll not lose intrest in the story after knowing this
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great start 😊 would love to see how the story progresses...
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Originally posted by: divyav

great start would love to see how the story progresses...

thanks !!!!
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Chapter 2

The arrival

Same day evening -

The flight landed at the IGA (Indira Gandhi airport) terminal 3 and soon arnav was at the exit. As expected his bhai was waiting for him so he went near akash.

The family didn't new about arnav's vist as it was a surprise for the family. They were told that he will directly come on the engagemt day.

When they met they hugged each other and had a few brother's talk like how are you and how's work and arnav also teased akash for his love life .

They soon reached raizada mansion and the door was opened by Anjali.

Currently they were standing at the door of raizada mansion looking at their big sister whose face showed expression of surprise filled with happiness.

Surprise to see arnav in india infront of her eyes after one year and happiness of meeting the smallest sibling after a long time. The last time arnav had visited india when anjali's husband died .

"OH MY GOD!! Chotey you here in delhi what a pleasant surprise" she almost screamed and she hugged her brother with a joy .

"I so badly missed you par tum yaha kisley tum to sagai (engagement) ke din ane wale the na ?" she questioned after breaking the hug .

Hearing anjali's OMG and loud noise everybody came near the entrance and were also surprised to see arnav .

"oh ho di stop this drama mere sapse pyare bare bhai ki shadi tae hog aye mai kase nahi ata ab mai andar aa jao ya pore din yahi khare rehna parega"(my most loving brother is getting married and how can this happen that I will not come now can I come in or I will have to stay out for the whole Day)

Anjali leaves the way and the two come in . as soon as arnav enters Tanya comes and hugs him.

Tanya – "I missed you so much mama" she breaks the hug and asks "mamu did you brought what I asked you to bring when you came last time?"

Arnav smiles , kneels down and gives Tanya a hi five and then answers her question – "hey my Barbie doll how can you think that your sweet mamu will forget your demand I have brought your doll house and many other gifts for you"

Tanya - "wow mamu thank you" and she gives a soft peck on her mamu's cheek. She was very happy to get such a lovely mamu . Arnav was her favourite mama .Although he visited rarely but whenever he visited he brought many gifts for her , played with her and he was the one who had helped her recover from her father's death , took care of her when all the family member specially her mom were dealing from the pain of death of her father. He made her smile and made her eat food when she refused to eat. He was like her best friend.

They family watched this scene in awe and then Anjali spoke "ok tanu for now leave your mamu you can continue your talks later and at tomorrow he will play your favourite game with you also but now let him take rest come all let's sit in the living room and talk"

Living room –

"so chotey akash told us that you are directly coming on the engagement day how come you came so early the engagement is not yet fixed also?" nani asked first

"ha chotey hum bhi yahi pocha rahe the" Anjali said

Arnav was going to answer but akash spoke "it was a surprise di I wanted arnav to be in each and every ritual for my wedding so I asked him to come as soon as possible"

"and see I am here" arnav spoke

"hello hi bye bye what a nicewa surprisewa" mami said

"par chotey thmahara to ek naya project than a to tumhe choti kaise mile?" (chotey you had a new project then how did you get a leave?) Anjali asked

"di..woh I left my job" arnav said knowing of how they will react

"WHAT" all said in shocked by the new piece of information. Even akash was shocked he knew that arnav was coming but didn't knew that he left his job.

Akash -"arnav you left your job just to come here ?"

Arnav – "oh come on bhai I wanted to come here so I came and waise bhi hamare pas paiso ke kami tohrina hai jo mere kaam chorne se kuch ho jaiga main yeh kaam isliye karta tha kuki mujhe kaam pasand tha ab mujhe mere family ke sath time spend karna hai" he tried to cheer them up

"ok now Tanya let mee give you your gift" he leaves his seat and goes to his bag .

He gives tanya's gifts and then other gifts for the family and then again sits in his seat

Arnav - "bhai let me tell you I am going to personally look after all the preparations"

Akash – "sure"

Arnav – "have you guys decided any wedding planner ?"

Anjali – "chotey actally payal's best friend khushi is a wedding planner and payal wants her wedding company to do all the preparations"

Arnav – "I hope the company is good"

Akash – "don't worry arnav payal said that she is best at her work"

Arnav – "ha ha bhai aap to yahi kahenge afterall she is you would be sister in law" he teased

All laughed while akash just smiled

Soon they had diiner and all slept

Precap – arnav and khushi meet buddy me for PM's
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loved the update

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nice story .. waiting for the next part now :)
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thanks to all !!!
Chapter 3
They meet


At night
Arnav's room -
Arnav tried to sleep but could not , he was feeling that something was going to change in
his life , something big was going to happen and it was surely a thing that
never happened before in his life.

He was tossing on his bed until his thoughts went to
his brother and his would be bhabhi . he never believed in marriges but
was happy for his brother. He could clearly see how happy akash was with this marriage.
He had a different glow and happiness. Nowadays he had started smiling more
often. Not that he did not smile before but surely something was different.

He had never met payal but was sure that she must be good person. Akash always used to
talk about her to him and always ended but being teased by his little bro. he
wondered that did love really exist. Can anybody go crazy for somebody like
akash was for payal and can two people spend their life together happily. He had
seen many couples spending their whole lifetime together. His mom and dad were a
good example even after 35 years of marriage they were still together happy in
their small sweet fights but even after seeing so many happy ever after couples
he didn't knew why he could not believe in love maybe one day he would . Little
did he knew that that one day is coming very soon.

Soon he dozed off to sleep


Khushi's
room -
After a
long and tiring day in
office and long talks with payal, khushi sat down on her chair and opened the
dairy kept on her desk. She took a pen from her pen stand and started writing
her thought in her dairy.
This was a part of her daily routine. From her
childhood days only she had the habit of writing her thoughts and day to day
happenings in her dairy
Khushi's
dairy -
Dear dairy,
'Aaj payal ka phone aya tha usne bataya ke uske shadi tai hog
aye hai. Soon the engement will happen aur sabse achi bat yeh hai ki payal ki
shadi ki planner mai hu haina ache bat. You know main apne best friend ke liye
aaj bahot khush ho. Akash is a very good person and has a very loving family. Although
I never met his family but I have heard a lot about them from payal.
You know dairy I always wished to get a loving person, a
person who loved me and was and will be always mine but atet (past) me jo kuch
bhi hua uske bad pyar se dar sa lagta hai. Aaj tak jisse bhi pyar kiya ha ichor
ke chala gaya hai. Aab to lagne laga hai ki pyar na hi mile to accha hai.
Par, I am very very happy for my best friend. she could have
never got a better elder sister and she deserves all the happiness in the world'
Bye :-)

While writing her dairy her heart was filled with mixed emotions, she was happy for her best
friend but at the same time the thoughts of her past made her sad.
After writing
her dairy she also went to sleep
Next day -

As said by anjali arnav played with Tanya while khushi was
working in her office she was very busy as in the evening she had to visit the
raizada mansion along with payal and lavanya (khushi's assistant good friend).
She was very busy so she asked lavanya and payal to go first and told she will reach
after finishing her work.
In the evening -
payal and lavanya reached the home and hari prakash opened the door and let them in.
he had told them that nani and Anjali were in the living room so they went
there.
payal was in an anarkali suit while lavanya was dressed in white top and jeans
Arnav at that time was with Tanya playing a game in his room while akash was in the
office
anjali and nani saw them coming and misunderstood lavanya
as khushi and said -
"payal aur
khushiji agaye aap tone"
Lanvanya understood
that they misunderstood her as khushi so cleared their misunderstanding - " no
actually I am lavanya khushi's assistant and friend"
Anjali - "oh
sorry, hello lavanya I am Anjali akash's elder sister"
They all greeted each other and sat on the sofa, hari prakash brought tea and snacks and
they started their talks

"are khushi nahi aye ?" she questioned when she realised khushi was not with them
"Anjali di she is busy with some important work so she will come in sometime" payal replied
her question
They chatt for some time when arnav came down to the living room.
Arnav was surprised to see the girl before his eyes after around six long years she was in
front of his eyes. He could never forget her face.
Lavanya was also shocked to see him after so long she stood up from
her seat and stared at him.
They both looking at each other happy to finally meet after so long while Anjali,nani and
payal watched them in confusion until lavanya spoke - "arnav"
Arnav - "lavanya"
Anjali - "are
chotey tum lavanyaji ko jante ho?" she questioned
Arnav turned
to his di and replied her question "di yeah lavanya hi toh candy hai aapko yad
hai mere bachpan (childhood) ki best friend jo mere sath school me thi" he
turned to lavanya and asked " hey candy how come you here after so long mere
yad aa rahe thi kya?"
Lavanya "what
no arnie I am khushi's assistant and payal's friend and I am here to help
khushi for planning payal and akash's wedding"
"ok sweetie
nice to meet you and .." before he could say further his phone rang so he moved
towards the other side to attend the call while the ladies continued their
talks .
He was standing near the door and talking on the phone to viraj.
The bell rang and om prakash opened the door. Khushi entered dressed in black leggings
and white kurti, her hair were tied at the back in the form of a pony tail.
She was walking towards the living room when she slipped due to the water that was spilt
by hari prakash a few minutes ago. She closed her eyes tightly anticipating a
fall which never happened as two strong arms encircled her tiny waist preventing
her from falling.
Arnav was talking on his phone facing his back to the door he heard the sound of
footsteps accompanied with sound of the ghungro of an anklet (payal). He turned
and found that a girl was falling and so went to help her. He encircled the
girl's waist to prevent her from falling .

Viraj on the other side when could no longer hear arnav answering hung up the call.
After few seconds Khushi opened her eyes .They both stared in each other's eyes . Arnav
was smiling while khushi with a lost expression.
They both
were lost in each other's eyes


i know it's a bit short and i didn't write the precap but that is because a little is surprise and well i am not to sure about it .
PLS BUDDY ME FOR PM'S ❤️
:-D
gunj 😊


sorry for spelling mistakes 😆


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