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raoashwini21

@raoashwini21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Great os yaar... Too gud.. 👏

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

This was brilliant!

There are some decisions you make in life, that change your entire universe, and Arnav made a choice like that, the whole family did, when they pushed Khushi away. The thing that hurts the most when people die, is that you didn't say all you wanted to say to them. I saw that here.

But there's a little hope, he has Arshi. And he can live with that.

You should definitely continue writing!😊

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

sad os 😭 well written

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Amanda Lim

@Amanda.Lim

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Awesome..

You have that talent in you..

Don't stop writing... :D

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Anon

@infiresmayn

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

This was really, really good. 👏

It was heartbreaking, yet at the same time, I understand why it was necessary for this loss to happen, because in reality, you don't get all that you want. Sometimes it's too late and then all you're left with is regret.

I also loved how you gave a little perspective of everyone in there and especially Akash's - you made him a silent yet strong support for Payal, but at the same time, you showed his childlike vulnerability when he talked about never being able to experience the happiness/joy that Khushi brought with her wherever she went. 😭

I'd say Arnav deserves it, but I can't ... I know he did wrong by her, but it's so upsetting to see him so broken down and regretful.

But he's got Arshi now, and hopefully he'll use this as an opportunity to make up for all the hurt he caused Khushi.

This was brilliant and yes, you should most definitely write more! :D

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srujie

@srujie

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

thank you all for the comments! :)

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Reader_Hobby

@Reader_Hobby

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Hey!

A very sad ending ... 😭 ... but beautifully written.

Woah ... a little emotional after reading this. How must you be feeling after writing this ...

It true. You do not realise what you have until its gone.

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723461

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

F**k! This is brilliant.

My God...so much pain...

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samaz95

@samaz95

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

I was trying to find this OS since a few days-so glad I found it:D

It was a beautiful os,touched my heart!

You write really well hope to read more of you in the future 👏

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Ver y very beautiful!!!!!!!!!!

it was sad but briliant...khushii is just as she should be...

loved nk though!!!!!!! he's a great guy!!!!!! inspite of his goofy exterior he's a man f steel!!!!!!!!

u depicted the pain guilt anguish f every character beautifully!!!!!

ps: continue writing!!!!!!!

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