Poem|ArHi| In a fire of their own

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Posted: 12 years ago
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She was as careless as the winds, capable of giving
He was the burning flame, of a fire ignited

When they met, memories engulfed, coursing the paths
Hues were painted, strokes were re - touched, verses were recited

They tried to teach other much, laments that were laced in regret
He needed love, and forgiveness, since abandoned
She hid from the world, lost in her own ignorance, since birth

But the fates, had something else written for them
When the amber's of the past arose, taunting the today
They fell bitterly, without a cause, in the shimmer of glistening midnight's

Revenge was a seed bred through indifference
Love knocked on their door, waiting patiently
But, they never came, never, trapped in the depths of despair

Losing themselves in the haze of lies, trying to find what was never lost
Time became the constricting ally, leading to paths unknown
Misery loved them, like her own, cradling their sorrows

But the envy of the future was not for them, fading into dark abyss
They crashed and burned, in the fire of their own, fighting what was never there

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I wrote this poem, with Arnav and Khushi in mind. Hence it is only fair, that i post it here. I found this in a old folder, while i was rummaging for some notes... At first, i thought to delete it, but then i saved it. This is very old, i wrote this when the whole contract marriage thing was announced...

I hope you like it :)




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khusiarnav thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me likes it dear... 😃
Thank u for pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awesome dear.thanx for d pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Shiza, thanks for the pm. Wow, this is very beautifully written. The sea of emotions was described perfectly. 👏 This would have been indeed very apt for the contract marriage track. Great job!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was wonderfully written..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It is wonderful. Brought those lovely scenes of Arhi I will forever cherish.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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"Misery loved them, like her own."
this is my favourite line... This poem tells everything.. Iwish i could write like this, ihv so many things to say to the world.. If only I was good at writing poems... Its hard for me, to convey what i mean, in such verses.. With me its always a huge, childish mess of an essay.. Oh well, i might learn one day from the likes of you.. Or it might come to me naturally. Atleast, I hope so..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was beautiful...thoroughly, blissfully eternally beautiful...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So cute and nice. I loved it. Thanks for the PM. Sorry for delayed res. Please forgive me for all the destruction we are going through. My mind is definitly not stable nowadays. Great job.👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beatiful poem dear thx for pm i know i m late but was lil buzy with sum personal work sry sry sry

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