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tanvia

@tanvia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

it was awesome...so pretty and beautfiul..maz aa gaya

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

This has to be the most adorable thing I've ever read...
beautiful!

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Well, that was wonderful.. Right from the misunderstanding(If I may call it so😆) to his apology and hawww he kept the vrat for her.. DDLJ makes me go weak in my knees as well..

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SaJanLuv14

@SaJanLuv14

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Rae, just like SRK is the king of romance you are one of the best romance writers here on IF 😳

I just love how you turn the most "painful" spoilers and situations into one of the most romantic scenes I would love to see on that show

Sheetal coming in between Khushi's first karva chauth isn't something I want to happen at all, I want to avoid it at all costs if possible but reading this, if it were to happen and if things did take this route, I would have enjoyed this scene, minus Arnav breaking Sheetal's vrat (yes I really really don't want that scene to happen at all) 😆

loved the OS, romantic, beautiful and SOOO cute esp at the end, I just LOVE the litte humor u put here and there in ur OSes

ps. you almost scared me with ur title I thought this was definitely going to end sad😭 so happy with the ending u wrote 😃

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

It was beautiful Rae!

It made me cry first and made me smile through tears at the end!

Loved it!

Your writing is like a breeze.

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shai95

@shai95

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

that was really cute !!! Could totally realte to khushi's inner turmoils and insecurities !!!! Arnav's realization that he needs to open up and express his feelings towards khushi , and give her all the love and due attention she deserves , was absolutely amazing . Very well portrayed !!!!
Arnav too fasted for her ... Hayeee !!!! Wink wink ;) ... ASR goes traditional !!!
Just loved when he said aap and khushiji together , i just love it when men overcome by emotions or even sarcastically address women with such respect !!!!!
Jaan , jaan - seriously ab jaan le logi kya ??? Endearment ??? And ASR uhmm uhmm . Drool worthy
keep writing

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Preeti

@Preeti.xo

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

That was really good I really enjoyed reading it and glad that Arnav realised his mistake tho I wudnt want him breaking sheetals fast in the show

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

I'll be back in the evening Rae to edit this.

*edited-

I first had the sad wanting-to-drill-a-hole-in-Raizada's=head tears and then the happy-happy tears. This was one of your most well-written works, ever. Period.

I love how the scene started of with Khushi finally reaching her breaking point, as all the pent up emotions, anger, hurt, all flowed out with her tears. I can't explain in exact words, but whilst reading ever line, I was feeling for her, with her.

But somehow, I knew the jerk of her husband would turn up nonetheless. And yes, what Arnav said to her, made her understand it so beautifully, about her being his life, the intensity was there, the innocence, the incredulity of his keeping a fast, everything.

Beautiful, very!

Edited by mistyrains - 12 years ago

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

A new OS, that too this beautiful...

Rae, you are brilliant...

This is what my soul needed..

Khushi leaving Arnav, him coming to Buaji;s place and wooing her...

Calling her 'Jaan'...awww

And Arnav fasting for Khushi..

Filmy, it might be, but I got what I wanted..And I want to you thank you for that...

A hug...

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Slap him khushi..will you? And yes Arnav you deserve a tight slap from her. Pagal kahin ke!

And you Rae bohot maza aata hai humein torture karke nahin? :P Please I don't want to see Arnav breaking sheetal's fast, I'll break my T.V. screen :/

But this was beautifully written, so adorable yet emotional.

I was so mad at Arnav, khushi should have slapped him. Pehle toh he spends a good time with Sheetal & Aarav & now breaks her fast, Unbelievable!

Khushi's reaction was so apt & realistic. Can we see something like this on the show? CV's are you listening?

The way he manaofied her was so cute. But I still wanted khushi to be angry & throw him away, I'm such a sadist :P It was cute! And he kept a fast for her? Hayye!

As soon as you mentioned DDLJ, I knew this would be a dedication to SRK. Happy Birthday SRK!

Did I mention I loved all the endearments? ;)

P.S.-I know I said I have stopped reading but I'm suffering from insomnia :( Slept for 5 hours in the past 3 days, kuch toh karne ka padi na :P