Too late to apologize? - ArHi OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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REMOVED because of plagiarizers.

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/3271033/ff-plagiarized-edited-again




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Posted: 12 years ago
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First - Yayyy!!!


Awww this was so so sweet Rae, I cannot believe this wrote itself, and you had nothing to do with it, LOL :P

Really, It is beautiful, her gussa, his manana, her questions, and his apology, all of it so so sweet, It was adorable when he said he fasted, and that he became filmy because of her, and she was all baffled, and she asked about Shahrukhji LOL...this was by far funniest, when she compared her own liking to Salmanji...LOL this is just so funny!

Loved it Rae, for the simple beauty of their love, to the cute and innocent bond they share, to the lovely adorable funny antics of Khushi, everything was just Awww <3

I loved it, and see I updated :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i want khushi to lash out...take the charge...stand up for herself..
i dont want her to look pathetic in front of a poised , super cool ex...
hell ...how much i wish this happens in the serial..
if only the cvs had an ounce of sense and creativity that you have, ipk would never have lost its charm..and i would never have stopped watching the show..
amazing shot hon...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Perfect...would love to see this...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AND this is how I'd like the Karwa Chauth to be in the show...If only the CVs bring in some drama, some passion instead of this nonsensical comedy :/
Loved your OS :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just amazing!

wish something like this happened in the show.

i especially loved the ending👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome awesome os... Can u believe it Rae that u people r coming up with such beautiful stories abt karwa chauth and cvs cant give us any of this... I wish that the cvs read this story of yours and incorporate it in the story bcz its got everything... Romance, emotions, sensitivity and some beautiful moments between Arnav and Khushi.

The way Khushi left him and then waited for him to stop her was so sweet and then he came after her and said sorry and then he told her in simple words her importance in his life... Him keeping a fast for him and then both opened each others fast was just plain beautiful... U could actually the love between them.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: farheen75

Awesome awesome os... Can u believe it Rae that u people r coming up with such beautiful stories abt karwa chauth and cvs cant give us any of this... I wish that the cvs read this story of yours and incorporate it in the story bcz its got everything... Romance, emotions, sensitivity and some beautiful moments between Arnav and Khushi.

The way Khushi left him and then waited for him to stop her was so sweet and then he came after her and said sorry and then he told her in simple words her importance in his life... Him keeping a fast for him and then both opened each others fast was just plain beautiful... U could actually the love between them.



Thank You! :)

But please read the note to the CVs at the end of the story. They may NOT use this story in reference to their open letter to the audience of IPKKND. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was BEAUTIFUL...thats how I want to happen if god forbids arnie breaks sheetal's fast in the show too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I simply loved this OS! So soulful, romantic, innocent...if the CV's can portray even half of this in the actual show, all the ipkknd fans will forgive all of their previous blunders! It was truly mind blowing!

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