How is that a feedback? Those are some great ideas. In your post, you have stated, " Please post your story ideas here - and we mean "story ideas and tracks,"so we are giving you ideas. It's job of your creatives to convert these ideas into script keeping in mind the original character sketch of your characters!
But I'll add a little more to that.
If I am not wrong, you guys had a track similar to idea #1 for PayAsh. The problem was not in the track, but the execution. If you guys execute it in a nice way then viewers would enjoy it too. For example, this time Khushi can get training from someone. And that someone could be Lavanya. It would be nice to see Lavanya and Chamkili bonding again. Also, you can bring her back for NK, but not as a vamp . However, in order for this track to work, Khushi needs to be shown possessive (in a sensible way, not OTT). Then she needs to stand up and fight for what is hers (most likely with Sheetal for Arnav). And then she goes out to learn about ASR's world and bumps into La, who will help her become Mrs. Raizada.
Also, if you guys don't want to use that track, and bring back the intensity, show separation. A separation of remorse and regret, not hatred. Since Arnav is being insensitive and ignorant to her feelings regarding sheetal/ aarav issue, show Khushi getting hurt because of Arnav's actions and leaving Arnav because she thinks that she is not the fit enough to belong in his world. Make Arnav suffer for once, make him regret his actions. Change him back to ASR (for everyone except Khushi). Make Khushi's character a bit more mature. Bring back La as her best friend and a support for Khushi in an unknown place. Show ASR trying to woo her back with La being the cupid (by wooing, I mean making up to her sweetly not forcing her back in his lives. She is not a kid, so allow her to make decisions about her life).
Alternative after separation: Now, that we are back to separation, use the ideas you have planned for QH in IPKKND. That show is new, so the tracks must be new and not similar to IPKKND, right?
Hopefully, this is considered as a "story idea" not a "feedback" in your dictionary.
I also have few suggestions/questions:
1. You guys pay creative heads to write for your shows. If they aren't able to perform their job, and are out of ideas, isn't it best to replace them with new creative writers? I'm sure there are many fresh graduates and other creative writers (not in this industry) who are looking for such opportunity, and this would be a perfect chance for them. A win-win situation. The reason why I am saying this is because, I have read quite a few wonderful ffs on I-F. These writers have truly understood and developed your characters and story way better than what you guys are showing currently. If even little bit of their work is being used, I'm sure our show will be back. And, if you post this as a job opportunity, not only you would get a positive response from fans, but also, it would be a free promotion coverage for the show. Another win-win situation.
1. Why are you starting another show just like IPKKND when you know that after a year you guys won't be capable of continuing the story with new ideas?
2. Gautam Hagde is also writing for Madhubala. I haven't seen that show, but according to what I have heard/read, I know that it fits the same genre as IPKKND. I'm sure he has some ideas for that story that he can use them in here.
3. Are you guys really out of ideas, or is it that you guys just don't care anymore about IPKKND because of your new baby?
4. Since fans are begging you to not end the show, when you really want to, are you taking revenge by showing these shitty tracks (till we beg you to end the show)?
5. If you guys don't feel like continuing this show, and SP is making you to continue, then can't you sell the show to another production house?
I look forward to hearing from you!
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Arjun
