OS: Pain Part 2 UPDATED (Page 6) - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago

"the moment I fell in love with you was the best feeling in the world, and you know what made it all better, is that I had the honour of you loving me back."

awesome os beautifully done very emotional and heartbreaking but the ending was so perfect done loved how he realized she was insecure ans sheetal presence was making her feel this way awesome update thanks for the pm

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Desiree Benoit

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Posted: 12 years ago

Glad for the happy ending. At least, at the end, your Arnav felt remorseful for the hurt he caused her.

Thanks for the PM.😃

Please keep me as your buddy and PM your stuff, if you can. Thanks.

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Angel13

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Posted: 12 years ago

very painful and emotional update

loved it

thanks for pm

loved the way you portrayed the emotions

very well written

great job

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mayabegum

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Posted: 12 years ago

that was intense and heart touching, if they show something similar to this in the show it will be really good. This was written very well, well done👍🏼

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x.Heena.x

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Posted: 12 years ago

i liked the first part...not the second tho...i didnt think he had anything to be sorry about!

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farfar319

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Posted: 12 years ago

I've been reading some OS about current storylines and I keep thinking "I wish the story unfolds like this"

I hope this where the current story is really leading to -- the revelation of all of Khushi's insecurities that are hidden deep down, etc etc.

Great work :)

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jen_x

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Posted: 12 years ago

aww i had tears when they were at the dinner table. but now im happy that they understand each other now :D

thanks u

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dharsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

awsm update :D loved it :) thanx for the pm ?

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice to see that their relationship is on the road to mending, after they've revealed their inner fears and feelings to each other

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adithyan

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Posted: 12 years ago

loved it...my eyes r teary...

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