For ONCE tell us your story Gul Khan.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mis Gul Khan, on a scale of one through ten, how
dumb do you think we are? You think you can change tracks on a whim and no one
would notice? Perhaps we won't if they were done with a semblance of class.
Alas IPK is mother of all mess ups.


Poor set design, costumes, sloppy dialogues and the
like -all point to one thing - haste. It doesn't take a genius to figure it
out.


When you set the mood of an audience and then change
tracks it becomes blaringly obvious.


For instance.


The forced marriage.


It started off brilliantly, the hate, the passion - everything was there. You wanted us to hate ASR and we did. You wanted to cry
with Khushi and we did. What I assumed was that this was finally going to bring
the change in Khushi -we will get a dignified and mature woman who will stand
up for herself because she was pushed too far.


<font color="#ff0000">BUT WAIT</font>


Petition -We want innocent Khushi because she's the
epitome of all things butterflies and rainbows.


And wala you change tracks (the shift from
hat/passion to comedy was so obvious.) and give us an OTT Khushi and the viewers
are left feeling you lost sight of your own character.


Arnav's redemption


You've stated multiple times that this was going to
be a major part of your story telling. And it was finally happening, the little
gestures the 'I trust you' and 'the I will stand by you'. Hat I felt was that Arnav's redemption was
going to be a continual process with little gestures and acts which hold a lot
of meaning.


<font color="#ff0000">BUT WAIT.</font>


Petition- We want Arnav to say sorry for existing.


And bamn you give us a half baked apology scene. I
mean half baked in the kindest way possible. Honestly what the hell was that? One
line of apology and redemption done. It was poorly written and poorly directed.


So yes you love changing your mind according to what
you think your audience wants. But everything up till now has backfired.


So
for once, for the love of ASR, tell your damn story at your own pace, at your discretion.


This arc , the Aarav being Arnav's son, has SO much potential.
From the number of times you've said the word 'ZABARDAST TWIST' I assume this
has been your plan all along. So stick to the damn plan and give a mature story
line where Khushi isn't a cry-baby and Arnav isn't a brainless jerk.


Over and out


Rockerchic.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Brilliant post!!!n i agree with u...dnt remind me abt REDEMPTION.!!! 🤢 ...i agree with u...pls show what u want to...but dnt kill the essense of story n characters!!!!for a change this time pls show ...us khushi s true feelings n her thoughts n all if POSSIBLE!!!
RC...to be very frank i dont thing this baby mamma track is well planned!!!it has the potential...if they use in RIGHT way!!!rest we can wait n watch!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi RC. Great post!👍🏼 I agree with you! They have always changed tracks due to audience demand but it always the backfired on them! The audience are also equally at fault here because of petitioning at every whim without letting the creators tell the story their own way. All this demands ruin the creative flow of the creatives and as a result they come up with half-baked plots with no flow to please the audience. I think the remarriage also happened due to audience demand; they wanted Arhi together and not seperated. I think the makers were definately heading for a separation when you look at all the symbolisms before remarriage. Also the way Arnav reacted after the past revelation and the way he spoke to Khushi after it were all pointing towards separation. So I think they changed script due to audience demand and hence remmarriage happened. But to me it didn't make any sense to me how Arnav would forget about the past so easily. I was rooting for a separation. It would have had more intensity and it would have made more sense. This time, I urge them to ignore the audience demand just this one time and tell their story. I also politely ask people to stop with all your demands and just wait and watch how this track unfolds. I feel if people keep making all these petitions you are ultimately going to get ignored one day as a result of the frustrations of the IPK writers and creatives.
Edited by Soni22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys,

I never believed that Arnav had not experienced sex when he met Khushi. I don't find it wrong either.

But --

When a kid outside marriage is involved, there is no way a perfect solution can be found without hurting at least one/more persons involved.

Very easy to say, "let khushi stand by Arnav and together they will come triumphant..." something like Arshi still together and part of Arnav's life along with Sheetal.

What if the kid wants his mama and papa together?
What if sheetal wants Arnav with her, as she has borne the society's questions alone so far? After all it is also Arnav's responsibility...

You see, there is no solution possible ... Typical Hindi moie will take a turn - where sheetal will turn a real vamp and gets killed in the end ,
or she will suffer from some terminal disease... etc. etc...



Either way, it will butcher Arnav's character, who had seen some tragedy 5 years back , was driven out of his house and had to rebuild his life , but he just involved with his class-mate.


One more point is -- just because something can happen, we don't want it to be the part of story. Do we? It is possible that Arnav meets with an accident, and becomes invalid for life ... total paralysis in lower body ... Now their love is tested and Khushi will take care of Arnav , will take care of his business ... etc.. etc.. Possible . But do we want such story? No. What we have is a beautiful , unique love story , let it remain that way ... we don't want to explore the complex equations of human life where sometimes no one is wrong , yet the circumstances are so wrong , that they may not be corrected and then there is celebration of maturity in emotions, taking things as they are and compromise the things thinking that real life is different than reel life ... We don't want those serious stuff here, even if the world is against them , even if there is MU or fighting going on , we want them to over come those and their perfect bliss always !

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yes..agrred. With an illegitimate child, thingss get complicated.
How can khushi ever let injustice be done to a innocent child?
How can arnav accept the child without accepting its mother ?
Does a child not need both its parents ??
How cam khushi who hereslef is an orphan and never got her parent's love and saath let same happen to the boy.
And arnav also himself was deprived of his parent's love in his formative years..
Everything wud be so complicated ...
Besides arnav migh have had sevearl affairs but he is not a person who wud deceive anyone.
If the girl beacme a mother of his child , wheer was she for all these years when arnav was still unmarried ?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jusah

Hey guys,

I never believed that Arnav had not experienced sex when he met Khushi. I don't find it wrong either.

But --

When
a kid outside marriage is involved, there is no way a perfect solution
can be found without hurting at least one/more persons involved.


Very easy to say, "let khushi stand by Arnav and together they will
come triumphant..." something like Arshi still together and part of
Arnav's life along with Sheetal.

What if the kid wants his mama and papa together?
What
if sheetal wants Arnav with her, as she has borne the society's
questions alone so far? After all it is also Arnav's responsibility...

You
see, there is no solution possible ... Typical Hindi moie will take a
turn - where sheetal will turn a real vamp and gets killed in the end ,
or she will suffer from some terminal disease... etc. etc...



Either
way, it will butcher Arnav's character, who had seen some tragedy 5
years back , was driven out of his house and had to rebuild his life ,
but he just involved with his class-mate.


One more point
is -- just because something can happen, we don't want it to be the part
of story. Do we? It is possible that Arnav meets with an accident,
and becomes invalid for life ... total paralysis in lower body ...
Now their love is tested and Khushi will take care of Arnav , will take
care of his business ... etc.. etc.. Possible . But do we want such
story? No. What we have is a beautiful , unique love story , let it
remain that way ... we don't want to explore the complex equations of
human life where sometimes no one is wrong , yet the circumstances are
so wrong , that they may not be corrected and then there is celebration
of maturity in emotions, taking things as they are and compromise the
things thinking that real life is different than reel life ... We don't
want those serious stuff here, even if the world is against them ,
even if there is MU or fighting going on , we want them to over come
those and their <font size="3">perfect bliss</font> always !




No use talking about this any more.

Our dear spoiler person has already told us this is a hoax.

Yipiee.

Why do I even bother with all this?

Sigh
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So for once, for the love of ASR, tell your damn story at your own pace, at your discretion.

RC are u sure you don't want to take back your words..are u sure love for ASR still exists..I thought the love had moved from Star to Zee..
Ms. G is in another universe now, with a new vision and a new dream.."Do you accept it"..Thumbs up..
Edited by crazyabtbarun - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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You just wrote an Open Letter to Gul Khan 😆

All the best

This is for bookmarking, but i assure you my participation later in the evening.

I have to go out with my amma babuji now..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you RC!
Exactly whats the point...
The CVs are never allowed to tell their story
why was there even a spoiler given...
Even though i personally dont believe Aarav is Arnav's son
i was eagerly waiting to see this track play out
but this CVs do not trust their own story!
and we are left fuming!!
no wonder so many people quit after the comedy track after hate marriage



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Posted: 12 years ago
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RC Brilliant post my dear.
Kookie thinks that now Gul is least bothered with the show.
Boss Lady has already abandoned the old baby for the new one.
She promised us a "beautiful track " to unfold after the forced phucked up marriage .
Did any one see that beautiful track unfold or have I been living in some LaLa land and watching some other show?
Boss lady is herself vacillating between a phangirl and a basher these days and her new interview just killed it.
I do not accept it.
BAS.
Screw acceptance.


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