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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nat 🤗 for this beautiful banner!!

This is dedicated to my crazy but wonderful friends Nat, Nayu, Shrey, Zana and my lil sis Faiza... I love you girls, itna 🤗 🤗


My First attempt at writing, fingers crossed it's not too cringe worth 😳

here goes...

Rang

Rang, kehte hai hamare bare mein kahaniya bathathi hai, rang jo har sare emotions dekhata hai; love, fear, happiness, hope

For me, nothing, it showed nothing... utter darkness - like staring into the depths of night. An endless hole that you could fall into but never come out of, gloomy days and grey thoughts were all I had...

That was my life, until...

She came, as a light, cheerful, instantly filling my life with colours of the rainbow. Being with her I felt and experience all those beautiful colours...

Her presence always managed to comfort my nerves, bring peace and serenity; healing all wounds with a touch of Green.. her touch.

With her, it was always laughter and happiness sealed with a promise of better times...tied in Yellow with a bright smile...

Side by side, everyday was fun, spontaneous and I, no longer felt the need to self-pity or ponder on the unwillingness to forgive them... it was a new dawn, fresh like a newly peeled Orange...

Her touch, her hand entangled with mine, so natural, so calming, easily lost in a sea of memories, of memories to come, uninterrupted, surrounded by nature, all blue...

...And today the kiss. It was magic, the way her lips connected with mine. It was right, and somehow, among all of the dizziness and the clinging to her like a life line, something inside me changed, never to be reversed. This new feeling could be dwelled upon later, because, for now, I was content to feel her breath come and go with mine and hear my heart beat just a little faster... enclosed by red sparks of love. my favourite colour.

That is now my new life, filled with colours, with my Khushi, my Wife...

She taught me that somethings are made to just experience...



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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMMMGGG I CANNOT BELIEVE IM FIRST!!!
YAYAYAYAYAYY IM FIRSTTT!!!



IM SOOO HAPPPY I FEEL LIKE JUMPING AND SCREAMING,



OKAY, enough of my excitement! 🤣

OMGGG MY SISTAAAH WROTE HER FIRST OS!!!



HERES A BON-CRUSHING HUG FROM MEEE!! 🤗



Coming to the OS now, (im sure you're like, FINALLY 🤣 )

it was sooo beauuuttiiifffuuul! ❤️ ❤️

the way you expressed colours, the way you gave them a whole new meaning, it was just so beautiful!

RED, GREY, YELLOW, GREEN, ORANGE, BLUE! you just made them even more beautiful, RIMA! 🤗

the way arnav is expressing his love for khushi through colours, awww!!!!


IT WAS JUST SO CUTTE!


from the starting to the end rima, i was so engrossed in it! i was like this girl is GENIUS! YOU SO HAVE TO WRITE MOREEE, RIMA!
LOVEEE YOUUU! ❤️

The way you expressed feelings, senses, it was sooo beautiful!

RIMA YOU WANTED TO WRITE AN OS, OR RATHER WE WANTED YOU TO WRITE ONE AND I'D SAY,


❤️ ❤️


okay, SO i managed to get the first placeee! now, im really scared of Tash!!!!


SHE'S GOING TO KILL MEEE!! 😭


TASSHHH, I LOOOVVVEEE YOUUU! DONT KILL ME !! ❤️


In the end, your wonderful OS has left me like this, Rima!


ITS SOOO PYARRAAA! ❤️






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Edited by Fan_ipkknd1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES

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I HATE YOU FUJJY 😡 My poor fingers are paining refreshing all these times, and you snatched the first place!! Life is so unfair 😭 Help me get over this!!! Please!! Feel like shouting "NAHINN"
Rima, Sidhart mera hai 😛
Okay let's get serious now. Rima, this was such a beautiful OS!! And I am actually feeling emotional that it is your first baby OS? I still remember the first time I wrote my OS and how you had encouraged me!!!
How come you got this awesome idea of penning a story on Arnav and Khushi based on colours?😲
THIS IS FREAKING AWESOME!! ❤️
Grey, the colour of gloominess, Arnav's shadowy past and dull life. A black world until sunshine filled his world!! Aww so magical!!
Indeed, Khushi brought a whole panoply of colours into his world!!
Green...the colour of peace
Yellow...the colour of smile
Orange...the colour of spontaneity and freshness
Beautiful imagery with blue as well ...the ocean of memories
AND FINALLY RED ☺️ The colour of love, of passion...Arnav's favourite colour
THIS HAS TO BE ONE OF THE MOST CREATIVE OS EVER!!
Loved it to bits Rima!! And I am so glad that you posted it for us 🤗
My nagging paid!! Yay me!!🤣 And now you gotta keep writing!!😈
I love you big for dedicating it to us 🤗❤️
Rima, Sidhart mera hai!!🤣
BAS!!
Edited by tash10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dammit Faiza and Tashu beat me !! 😡😆 Moody internet at the last min !! 🥱

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OH MY GOD ! It was beautiful Rima ! 😲 You write so well and I dont just mean this ! Loved how you connected the various colours and then blended the story beautifully along with it ! Loved you indicated his feelings with each colour ! It was wonderful and so unique ! I loved it so so much Rima. Loved the quote which you started with in the beginning ! It is so apt for the story and just Beautiful ! Marvelously written sweetie👏👏

Beep* for the dedication sweetie 🤗❤️

Congratulations on Your Debut OS sweetheart 🤗




Edited by -sweetgal19- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tash10

RES

I HATE YOU FUJJY 😡 My poor fingers are paining refreshing all these times, and you snatched the first place!! Life is so unfair 😭


*gulps*

i think tash will kill me tonight, Rima!!

IM SORRY ! THE FIRST SPOT ON RIMA'S FIRST OS WAS JUST TOOO TEMPTING! 🤣


Edited by Fan_ipkknd1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fan_ipkknd1


*gulps*

i think tash will kill me tonight, Rima!!

IM SORRY ! THE FIRST SPOT ON RIMA'S FIRST OS WAS JUST TOOO TEMPTING! 🤣


Beware Fujjy!! Your scrapbook will be raided 😈
I still cannot believe I am not first on Rima's post!!😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res for shrey...


RIMA I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU FINALLY WROTE AND TRUST ME U WERE ABSOLUTELY AWESOME ... 🤗
Now we will not leave u and will be after u for more os's 😉

This was beautiful .. 😳 the way u described significance of each colour in Arnav's life was PERFECT
Darling not only the OS but the banner was equally amazing 🤗

Thanks a lot for writing .. U have to continue writing 😳
LOVE U 😃
Edited by Riima_Azraa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tash10

Beware Fujjy!! Your scrapbook will be raided 😈
I still cannot believe I am not first on Rima's post!!😭


😆

Nat, there's always a next time 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tash10

Beware Fujjy!! Your scrapbook will be raided 😈
I still cannot believe I am not first on Rima's post!!😭


I was waiting for the deadly threat!!

Im so happy im the first! Okay sorry not helping i know! 🤣 but believe me, this is how it feels when anyone beats me at your threads too! 🤣

I LOVEEE YOUUU
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fan_ipkknd1


I was waiting for the deadly threat!!

Im so happy im the first! Okay sorry not helping i know! 🤣 but believe me, this is how it feels when anyone beats me at your threads too! 🤣

I LOVEEE YOUUU

You rubbing salt on my wounds😭 PURE EVILNESS!!!
I love you not!!!

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