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Stapleton

@Stapleton

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

nice os.

thanks 4 d pm

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

...his fingers whispering against the soft cotton wrapped around her body...How beautifully written is this line. You are a natural with words, but I shall presume you know that by now.

I was smiling whilst he talked about sarees and kissed her fingers and then he vanished, and I was startled. And Khushi's whisper, her actions just left me numb. Your writing has an inane ability to make people emote. I feel a little worn out right now.

Thank you for the dedication Aashifa, means a lot. And thank you for being there, always.

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Youuu! Surprised to see me?😆 I haven't commented on your writing in so long =/ But here I is😃

I'm gonna comment as I read along k? I haven't done that in years. Literally😳🤣

First of all, I love the title. It reminds me of a line from one of my fav songs (the end's beginning well that's part of the line😆 Shattered <3)

She...glued her fingers to her neck?🤣 Man that's awesome🤣 And fuchsia? I love it already🤣 And turns out i need to read your FF to get an idea of what this was about so this is going to be the shortest comment I've ever left for you (posting "reserved" doesn't count😆) buttt that said, I loved the way it was written and whatnot =) I is gonna go read that FF of yours but since you're saying it was "scary and dark" I'm having doubts🤔 I like happy endings you see so if it has a happy ending then I'll read it pakka😃 But then again, I do love your writing so I might just end up reading it anyway🤔 PM me and tell me if it's a happy ending or not🤣 But then you said the end is no where in sight so that means you're continuing the FF still yes? In that case, will it have a happy ending? Man I sound like such a confused soul don't I?😆 I blame the lack of food😆 Anywho, I go before I annoy you further😆 Toodles😃

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

tht was simply brilliant one

loved it awesome

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

intense that was so sad and heartbreaking thanks for the pm awesome well written

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

awesome os

thanks for the pm

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sunshine23

@sunshine23

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Hey aashifa! this was a really good one shot! I missed your writing.
I hope your doing okay, and please do write some more soon :)

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

This is a painful(?) ending.

I don't know if that's the right term to use, but I just...you know, I've always thought about the question "Is it better to have loved and lost or to never have loved at all?"

I think I am a coward, I would choose the latter. Just because, having something and having it snatched away from you, is much more painful than yearning for it but never really knowing the magnitude of love you lost.

Just my 2-cents! Sorry for the late reply! :')

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

I dont know what to say Aashi !

The beginning was so wonderful , it almost made me believe, that maybe in the end, like all stories, they are meant to be ! But the way you brought not only Khushi but me out of that dreamland ! Gosh, I dont know if it should happen, but then I did feel the pang !

And is this how you plan to end VR ? Seriously ?
I was better not knowing the end ! Will you continue it here on when the time comes, cause that's what your title suggests ! And I sincerely hope you do !

But this OS, was lyrical and beautiful ! Loved it a lot !

*hugs*
Love ya n Miss you !

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

So...what was this?

It started off with me smiling and cooing and then suddenly it ended so abruptly and on such an angsty note? Why?

And I am glad you didnt end VH this way...I want a happy end to that story and you have taken it another way but a pertinent and heartbreaking way but if VH is to have an ending, different from the direction it has taken, then I wouldnt have accepted this one.

Because although it is written so beautiful, it turns out to be a dream and for me VH wasnt a dream, either for Khushi or for Arnav because it gave them a second chance at loving each other and led to 'Eid ki Mehendi', at least in my head... :)

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