OS: Save the last dance for me - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Tht was short bt vry sweet... wth a nice feel to it.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
This brought such a smile to my face - sweet and lovely. I'm a Buble fan and this song is great - for all of its cheesiness, you can't help but smile and move along to the beat and the words. Nicely done!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved that - you did a brilliant job with this - well done- loved the little touches but more as it was from Arnav's POV - & all those small signs that he makes - well done again - you should write in this vain but a series - you have a really nice style

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very cute OS. Reminded me of the good old days of IPK, although such a scene would have been only wished for even then.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww this was ADOOORABLE! 😃

NK, I could just ... *doing a Kajol-style cheek pull followed by a CHADDO!* 😆


And Nannav, mere bhaaai *that knowing finger wagging NK used to indulge in oh-so-long ago* 😆 we all know there can only be space in Khushi's life for one "selfish" man! 😉


Seriously though, made me slightly wistful - wish the CV's could dish out such scenes! ... Or any scenes ... 😆


Loved it, and thanks for the PM! ⭐️


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aah V! On a roll today aren't you? I truly enjoyed reading the one-shot. You should do it more often..i mean the cheesy pathogens should strike more frequently..haha..a jealous Arnav is always a treat to watch and read of. And with that kind of setting, all rainy and romantic, it's got a very good feel to it.

I loved it ! I did😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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absolutely loved this OS

the last part was so adorable
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hiii...Awesome os...Loved it...beautifully written...loved ArHi...loved da jealous arnav...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
This reminds me a bit of mujhse dosti karoge..

Hayee I Love a Jealous arnav, I can so imagine this scene, I want a rain dance!! Love that he didn't shout at her, but got disappointed when the smile wasn't for him..

Love, love love it!! Thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for the PM

so sweet

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