os - too late to apologize (part 2 updated )

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He reached shantivan after so long that he didn't even knew the time . everyone was there and were all sad except for shayam and dadi . He didn't speak a word but went to his room and broke down to his knees

Then he was later joined by Anjali . " chotey '." .. "why di '. Why did it have to be khushi's mother ..why ??..di I can't live without her di ..she's my life .. I want her in my life .but 'but .. but .. how .. '. "

His words kept cracking here and there ..and anjali understood it all ..

"chotey mummy and daddy are gone ..they are not gonna come back howmuch ever we try to bring them but khushi has become your khushi .. there's nothing coming between your love . not even our past .we cant change the past .but we can change out future .. she changed u ..she taught u of love and she deserves your love .Forget the past and start living the future .mummy will be so proud . and im sure garima ji didn't do anything on purpose .she's also a human .only god doesn't do wrong things .Lets go chotey she needs you more than anyone else right now ..its your marriage ..god is testing your love to her don't fail it or else u'll loose her forever .." .. "but di what about the others in the family they will hate her " .. "no chotey I discussed this matter with them ..they all accepted it ..and there was nothing to discuss she was already a bahu in this house nothing will change it ..lets go ..

"what about garima ji ?" .."chotey only humans can forgive another human ..god will punish them if they had done a wrong thing ..dont loose khushi by hurting her family "

Everything settled though mami started her rant ..and dadi's frown and creepwa's creepy look

They got ready to bring khushi back home ..to her home ..

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"khushi 'khushi ..open the door" 'payal yelled while banging at the door .. "just leave me alone .." cried a little voice from inside ."please khushi ..just come out ..you don't have to cry alone ..we're here for u .." '"I said ..idont need anyone ..just leave me ALONE ..dont u understand me ?" this time her voice was rough ..unlike their normal khushi ..it had hatred all over ..

Suddenly there was a bang on the door ..babuji opened the door while wiping away her tears .. "haire nandakishore what else do you want from us ?" .. madhumati ji ..we came here to complete their shaadi forgetting everything that happened in the past ,please ..let us in ..we need to see khushi .. " replied nani .


umm i really came up with something silly like this after todays epi ..i'll update the rest later ..

please share your views and encourage me cuz im not dat much familiar with os writing 😊


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"khushi wont come out of the room .." payal told to akash ..

"Let me talk to her " arnav went to the door ..knocked on it . "khushi ..open the door its me arnav ..please .." . "I have nothing left to do with u ..just go away ..i don't wanna see your face ever again just leave ." "don't talk like that khushi I love u please …um begging you please come out .please .. I know I should have …….. " he wasn't able to finish his sentence .she yanked opened the door and stepped out .Her eyes were red of crying but they were not the same .thay were different ..that liveliness was gone .

"what part of my words didn't u understand Mr Arnav Singh Raizada didn't u understand ? huh ? I told u to get out ..and I mean it .i don't wanna see your face ever again ..i don't wanna see you even at my funeral . I shouldhave known not to trust u ..EVER !! …why do I have to be the sacrificial lamb of your life and ruin my own? Huh? So u can just leave like that at the mandap alone with no one to feel how I feel ..huh ? and the humiliation ? is that what u wanted ? huh ? give me answers …why are u being silent ? and I never expected you to be here ..why did u come here ? to show my family of your power and money ?" .. "khushi…." Arnav couldn't believe what he's hearing right now ..and from his khushi .

"khushi ji ..please calm down .." anjali said ..

"don't you dare to step in to this mrs Jha ..u have nothing to do in this .this is between me and mr Raizada .and do u even know of your brother's cheap acts …no… I don't think so ..he forced me in to marrying him for jst six months because of you ..so you're the basic reason that im here in this position..do u think that I would be willing to give in to that marriage because of his money ? no I only did it for my sister payal.. he told me that he wont let the marriage go on if I don't marry him …and I would have atleast been happy if u gave up on that creep who kept lusting all over me ..but still u wanted him back …did any of u knew how hard it was to live with the same creep who kept lusting all over for u? huh no ? so mrs Jha u keep yourself away from this "

Everyone was shell shoked to here this ..specially akash and payal.

"and back to u mr Raizada … I thought that u have changed after all of it and see ….how stupid I was ..but not anymore ..now I see the world clearly …its crystal clear that this is the life.you find people and u let go of them .simple like that and you know what I should have learnt it like looong time back …but me being khushi to everyone lost track of time to realize the life .. ohhh silly me …"

"khushi please just let me explain …" arnav tried to speak but was interrupted

"ohh nooo not yet ..im not done talking yet …today u'll listen to me ." babuji tried to stop her but she didn't stop talking for she was letting out all the pain inside her .

"I was sooo stupid to trust the man who made me sleep weeks outside .and made me break all my marals by making me pretend to be that saas bahu of the family while not even married properly .i should have thought twice before accepting the marriage becuz ishud have remembered that since the first day we've met u have done nothing but humiliate me infront of the society . and even today you did the same .. UNBELEVABLE…. But not anymore … no ones ever gonna play with me like u did ever again not even u mr Raizada ..cuz we're done ..just like your dadi said this marriage is officially over .plus on the bright side I don't have to take care of your nani ,dadi ,di , hp , op laxmi and all the ppl around you. you better take your family home and take good care of them but im not coming back . specially take care of your dearest sister from him ..and teach about the worldly things that's you know so it'll give her more brains rather than just keeping her thali with her all the time "

Everyone had their mouths open with everyword she said ..its hit them to their hearts like a dagger made out out millions of pins ..

He felt as if she killed him with her own hands ..but he knew that the sole reason for her change is him that his khushi was destroyed by himself ..his kushi is gone ..and he knew that it was too late for an apologize for he had broken every inch of her heart

But every dark cloud has a silver lining …and he knew that he would do anything to bring her back …bring back khushi and back to him ..



😊tell me whether i shud continue or not 😊

Edited by Arshiangel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey that's a nice one but wht about part 2
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Do Continue Soon 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It Would be good if Naniji speaks to Arnav instead of anjali... Anjali never thinks so much...it will definitely take time for her to come out of the trauma...but Naniji understands the situation...so Hopefully!!!!! :)




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Remya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yeah continue soon dear me in a good mood to read hope u woill continue nowitself
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good one...Please do continue...Please PM when you update
Edited by bhadraprasad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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please continue
want to read what the others are feeling after all this is said
update soon
good one khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Do continue. Let's see how he plans to win her back
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You Should Continue 😳

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