SS: The Perfect ASR Proposal-Our Take-Completed - Page 8

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Oh,Thank you, Thank you for writing this...👏

This one is one of those Stories, that make me re-act like "OMG, I am going to die from happiness..*swoon* 😳" Loved it...I feel so devastated that I didn't even knew till today that someone wrote "The Proposal" in the most perfect way...That was perfect...perfect...👏

and That is what ASR would have done...na ke that Tapoori dance...God, still can't believe that really HAPPENED...and that was not one of my weird nightmares...😲

Originally posted by: serious

wow! That's an masterpiece. Was an pleasure to read through it 😊

Originally posted by: smitzy

res.

6 parts!!! are you frikkin kiddin me??? 😲

hyperventilating.. ok ok I'll read one by one and then unres this 😛

by the way AWESOME work (in advance becoz I know you guys would have given us a better proposal than the one they crapped out in reel life)

cheers!

UNRES UNRES UNRESSS DAMNIT!!

*still hyperventilating*

OMG!! thank you! Thank you thank you thank you!! a million times thank you for giving me a proposal that is WORTH of IPKKND! The proposal that I'll remember for the rest of my IPK obsessive days as THE proposal! keh diya na bas keh diya!

this was PERRRFECT!! And you guys got SALMAN KHAN!! that was so ASR-can-do-anything-he-is-a-God-damnit-esque!!

hayeee and the sealing the deal with the kiss... *swoon* 😳

wonderful wonderful job! take a bow teekhat mirchis! 👏

Originally posted by: sofiaroth

awsome!! you've done some great work here:)))

good luck ahead! keep writing:)

Originally posted by: VasantiLad

OMW - YASHI & CREW - you are a dark horse - so this is what you have been up to!!! This is truely amazing - you have captured the characters & emotions & story line really well

Hum Dil De Chuke Humare Laad Governor ko!" loved the Salman chapter - at last we had a visit from the HE man of movies - exactly what she wanted & this could be an apt title of a very funny film

Loved the concept - like the fact that the intro really says it all - virtual writers association that you have from miles apart but the love of IPK & the direction that we want the drama to go pulls us all together

Well done gals you have opitimised the harmony of the written word - lots of success for the future👏👏 Think that you have a very good career ahead of you- you will be st⭐️rs

Wow - to finish with the kiss - what next...hey!!1

Originally posted by: MrsRaizada101

AWWW!!!! I'm so emotional here! Our hotwa's proposal and their romantic kiss, awww!!!!!!! I loved it!!!! Thanks for the pm, this was beautiful! (and honestly i loved it better then the show :P)

Originally posted by: highonshows

Yashi Chuppi rustom...so this is what u've been upto...

Yashi and Crew...this is some awesome episode rewrite...6 chapters in one shot,...are u freaking kidding me????

I read the introduction and i hit like n then got a cofffe to enjoy the chapter...

i finished the first and then saw the next at the bottom and continued rightaway while forgettting to hit the like button...*i had to go back and hit like for every chapter ehehehe*

This continued till i read the last chapter and guess what...i was totally swooning...the salman number was tooo gud and just perfect.

I loved the double proposal and different styles...the remiscence and all of it...

U guys out did the CV's...it was very mesmeriing...n the writer held me captivated thruoughout the episode retake.

Love it girl...n i look fwd to reading more epi retakes when we see back epis...actually i hope we dont have to see them...but even then...there is always room for improvement haina???

Totally loved the writing ishtyle and the whole settting.

ThnQ Yashi for the PM...

Congrats Teekhi Mirchies...👏

Originally posted by: hiahmed

i think the CVs should just visit our Forum regularly. they'll have the script ready. it was that good

Originally posted by: memyselfandrshi

Big group hug gals... 🤗