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Swetha

@ipkkndfanforeva

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: smitzy
Heylo darling 🤗

It was a bliss helping you out, really.. I'm a big fan of the tragedy genre in FF (forget about people who say don't kill characters off, no offense to them, I know they adore the characters 😊).. If you can pull off tragedy well, you can pull off anything!

I absolutely LOVE the ending 😊 I'm so glad to see you put up your first work. It can be tricky; I've seen loads of FF writers here who are experienced but can't wring two sentences right. But this, this was beautiful.. the concept, the emotions, the flow of the story: brilliant.

And I'm so glad that I got that song right 😆 like minds think alike eh?

all in all a very good job! 👏I hope you get all the encouragement from the forum vaasis too! And you blitz into the arena of FF with more stories soon.

cheers dear!!

Thank youuu for suchh a wonderful comment!!🤗

It was Brilliant!? *screams in joy*😃

Yea...love the song!!

Thanks a lot yaar!!
Ur a great friend! Thanks for ur encouragement too!😃

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Rita

@rjhaveri

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Beautiful. I had tears streaming down my eyes.

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@Fazila~

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

its good but i wish u had kept her alive...😭

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PCdublin

@PCdublin

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

beautiful and poignant!!!! but tooo sad!

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Arina Raizada

@..Raizada..

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

That was really beautiful!

I could feel what Armav felt, practically! And that's a sign of an amazing writer 😊

I hate to see Khushi dead, but have killed her off many times myself 😳 So I can't say anything but if you kill them off then do it with beauty and grace and you have! 😊

I would love to read more works from you! Certainly do write more! 😊

Please PM me if you do write more!

By the way, if you haven't please check out my index(The link is given in my signature) 😊

Once again beautiful job! 😊

Edited by Arina_R - 13 years ago

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Awww that was beautiful!! I love the song Afterglow and this OS based on it was just perfect ❤️

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insanelycrazy

@insanelycrazy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

you broke my heart with the way you beautifully portrayed arnav's emotions!! amazingly written and i loved it!!

initially i thought it was arnav following khushi, and how he left her at the alter, and was following her after seeing her after such a long time but no, it had its own twists!!

amazing display of emotions on arnav's side, and how he could live the rest of his life just with the mere thought of seeing her that final time, saying good bye to her and finally moving on :)

i loved it and you wrote it really well!! though it was sad, but beautiful none the less! :')