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Posted: 13 years ago
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really loved it continue please
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I love it simply because both Arnav and Khushi have parents and hopefully their would be no past will come into play. Please continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ur story is really good I m exited to know what will happen

please continue ur writing skills are also really good...

Please pm me if u update this post...


please continue this one dont stop...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shillu.arshi

ur story is really good I m exited to know what will happen


please continue ur writing skills are also really good...

Please pm me if u update this post...


please continue this one dont stop...

thanks again for ur support dear and yes i will update it by tomorrow...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tokyo

I love it simply because both Arnav and Khushi have parents and hopefully their would be no past will come into play. Please continue.

thanks yaa...there is not much past, a simple one but not so dreadful...can't disclose anything more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow.. d stryline is smply nce.. gud wrk..keep it up.! pm me wen u post da nxt part.. i wld lve to read dat
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting. 👏 👏 👏 Waiting to read more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh!!! I am sooo sorry dear...
I was busy with my studies and din't check yuor pm...

read the first chapter...
and wow!!! thats amazingg!!!!
simply loved it...

Arnav in THEATRE, watching BODYGUARD???

*rubbing my eyes*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshistar

Part 2:
Arnav thereby controlled himself so as to avoid Anjali and Akash's teasing regarding Khushi. Finally, the movie completed and they left for home. Although Anjali and Akash never leave a chance to tease Arnav about Khushi, along with Arnav they also don't think that Arnav's attraction towards Khushi is love. They just love to tease him because this is the only matter on which they get a chance of teasing their loving brother. In all other matters, he is just beyond perfect. He never give a chance for them to tease or trick him. But in this case, he can't help it. After the theatre incident, Arnav never got any chance to see Khushi nor did he remember her as he is too much busy working on some new projects.

Some days passed and it is a random normal day in RM, Anjali is sitting in the hall reading some newspapers. She actually is so bored that day as she doesn't really has any work to be completed and she is terribly waiting for the completion of her two brothers' projects so that she can spend some quality time with them. Her mumma, nani and mami are also busy in making arrangements for the havan that is gonna be take place in RM in the near future. She sat lazily on the couch and not finding anything interesting. She then received a call from one of her closest friends rather say closest family friend Lavanya.

Lavanya: Hello Dolly! Wazz up? (La calls Anjali as Dolly)

Anjali: Nothing La, it is boring hell in home. Chottey and Akash are busy in their work. You know what, I am about to call you actually.

La: Why bore when La is here? Now cut the call and turn your head towards the main door.

A big smile appeared on Anjali's face seeing Lavanya there'Hugging her, wow La, you here'when have you come back from home?

La: Umm'yesterday night. I want to surprise you, that's why didn't inform you.

Anjali: Well I'm impressed'(winks and grins)'

Just then, Anjali's mumma came there and she is happy to see La there in their house.

Anuradha(Anji's mom): Hey Lavanya, long time no see, how are you beta?

La: (touching her feet) yeah, been to home aunty'returned last night. How are you and everyone in the house?

Anuradha: Everyone fine beta'how are everyone at home?

La: fine aunty.

Anuradha: Fine, you both sit and talk. I will tell the maid to bring you both some juice.

La: No aunty, me and dolly will go out for shopping. We will eat something out.

Anuradha: Ok'with that, both Anjali and La left to anjali's room to get ready.

La: Dolly, I forgot to tell you something, Chamkili is joining us for shopping.

Anjali: Oh wow, is that about her you always use to tell me'

La: Yeah, she only'actually I wanted to introduce her to u from many days. Afterall, you two are my bestest buddies.

Anjali: Smiles, even I am too excited to meet her after listening so much about her.

Little did she know that Chamkili is none other than Khushi about whom she and Akash used to tease Arnav.

La: Let's go'

With that, they both left for some shopping mall. After getting into the car, La called Khushi to know whether she has started or not.

La: Chamkili, we have started. Where are you?

Khushi: Me too started la, will reach there within 15 mins.

La: Oh good, we too will reach there by then. Okay chamkili, let's meet there, bye.

Khushi: Bye La.

After some minutes, they both reach the shopping mall at the same time. Lavanya and Khushi saw each other and smiled.

La: dolly, there she is (pointing at khushi)'

Anjali got the biggest shock of her life'.by then, khushi came near them.

La: Chamkili, I told u na my best friend Dolly other than you, She is'Anjali'Anjali Singh Raizada and dolly, she is Chamkili'sorry Khushi'Khushi Kumari Gupta'

Khushi on hearing the tag 'Singh Raizada' jerked out of her thoughts. She now understood why was she feeling that she has seen Anjali somewhere else. She quickly came out of her thoughts and with a smile, she greeted anji a warm hello. On the other side, Anji is also hell-shocked realizing that Chamkili is none other than Khushi. However, she quickly came out of the shock and greeted Khushi with a big hiii along with his signature smile. With that, the three headed into the mall. Soon, Anjali and Khushi became good friends. Anjali actually loved Khushi and her childish behavior. The three are enjoying each and every moment of their shopping and then Anjali received a call from Arnav. Anjali smirked and began talking to his brother.

Arnav: Di, where are you? Mom told me that La came and you both were out for shopping.

Anjali: Actually, not two'we three came for shopping'

Arnav: Three'.who else? Anyway where exactly are you Di? I have completed my work and am about to leave to home'tell me where are you and I will pick you and La from there.

Anjali (thought of playing a game with her chottey): yeah chottey, we are at XYZ mall'

Arnav: Okay Di, I will come there within half-hour.

Anjali: Ok bye chottey..

Arnav: Bye di'

That's it for Part 2 guys, tell me howz it? I will update the next part asap which consists of the most wanted Arshi's first meet...please give ur feedback by commenting...one single comment doesn't take much time...Thank you...






amazingg!!!! waiting to read more yaar!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ii..Shilpa..ii

Oh!!! I am sooo sorry dear...

I was busy with my studies and din't check yuor pm...

read the first chapter...
and wow!!! thats amazingg!!!!
simply loved it...

Arnav in THEATRE, watching BODYGUARD???

*rubbing my eyes*


Thanks for the feedback shilpa😊 and ya no sorries dear...afterall u responded atleast now...i thought no body is interested in my FF...so didn't feel like updating these days...

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