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Kookiemonster

@Kookiemonster

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Something is wrong with the like button.

Anyways Nicely written Hiru.

Hope CV 's develop some brain cells and see this.

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Damn "Like" button is not working .. .
But i loved this one.. yeah pretty random like a normal day in RM where Dadi will not stop from her taunt and Arnav will stood for his wife and Khusi as always never complain.
I loved how Khusi was able to sooth him and the song really a sweet memory for them..

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809768

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Beautiful! :D
I loved the way you described his rage! :D
And i so loved the way she reassured him!

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Beautiful OS. If Arnav was so disturbed with what his Dadi said to Khushi, why did he not tell her the truth?

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a4aarsh

@a4aarsh

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Good one as always.plz do continue hp i'm dying 4 it and pm me.once again loved it

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Wow Hiruni... Now this is more of a redemption I'd prefer watching

My like button isn't working but I love you 🤗

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Rishita

@RickyBahl

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: CDlove
Aww ricky thanks 😉

welcome dear, i wish if u cud have telepathy with nissar parvez and send ur these idea through blue tooth.😆

Even many dont wanna see a crying ASR but i wud certainly want a scene to see fear in his eyes and his expressions of losing khushi forever.

That Kidnap one was not upto mark like the one he cried after ambulance.

If they wud hv seprated due to contract marriage, we cud hv seen repentance plus deewangi not devdas.There is difference in being devdas and being deewana.

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aminta13

@aminta13

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

SO... CUTE I WENT AWE.. When Kushi said "I love you and I have nothing, absolutely nothing other than love for you. No grudges, no hidden desires to punish you"