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melanie

@Black_kittykat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

nice OS, crying after reading it 😭 😭

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

sad one but a good one - luved it

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@Carabelli5

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Can I use this line as m siggie please. I will give u credit. Thanks

Life has been pretty much lonely since she left. He knew it was for the best but he just couldn't cope with the loss of happiness in his life. His Khushi.

And i have not commented on you me believing in you part because. THAT IS ALL JAZZ. YOU MY LOVE ARE ONE HELL OF A TALENTED WRITER. One that came make me go awww and mushy, one that makes me laugh till i die, and now finally cry myself to sleep. By the way when u win you Pulitzer prize Do remember me!

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Saba

@n091505

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Such a very written OS. Heart wrenching yet beautifully portrayed feelings of Arnav & K.

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arhilover55

@arhilover55

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

aww very emotional.

beautifully written.

thanks for the pm.

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Mrs. Sidharth Malhotra

@..Shweta..

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Carabelli5
RES

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originally i was going to complain about not being first. B ut seriously I need a moment.

Ok! I swear on my life this comment in coming straight from my heart. Shweta Shah YOU ONE HECK OF BRILLLIANT WRITER. You need to stand up and take a bow. I have NEVER READ a more painful piece of fiction on Arshi. Every line, every twist sent goosebumpbs down my entire body. The end, the kuch kuch hota, all of it.I rejoiced when they meet again. I cried when i discovered she had cancer. And i DIED with them.

You have absolutely no idea how beautifully written this is and that is a shame. I wish i can make u realize my love for this OS but words have failed me. I am disappointed in myself that i dont have it in me to PRAISE THIS STORY ENOUGH! They way you have written it has made me want to beleive in love, you know that cheesy line about love, I even want the bad parts just so i can have the good ones.

I dont know what makes me more sad the fact that i can never in a million years write like this, the fact that this OS ended or the fact that Arshi died, two poor souls laying dead in a pool of blood for eternity filled with love.

If I you need me let everyone on the CC know i crying in my room all night!

Shweta I LOVE YOU! and I hope u know that.

PS i dont know what has motivated this story but WHATEVER IT IS ITS VERY PAINFUL and baby i hope u know i feel for you ALWAYS.

Aww! Your words are very humbling! I really don't know how to respond to this.

Thank you for every word you've ever said to me. Belli, in the short time I have known you, you are now one the people who make me who I am today. I love you a lot. 🤗

I'm sorry I'm just not in a state to say anything anymore. You are way too fudging sweet and one of the best things that ever happened to me.

And as to what motivated me to write this, let's forget about that and focus on the fact that I want a mustache! 😃

Originally posted by: Carabelli5
Can I use this line as m siggie please. I will give u credit. Thanks

Life has been pretty much lonely since she left. He knew it was for the best but he just couldn't cope with the loss of happiness in his life. His Khushi.

And i have not commented on you me believing in you part because. THAT IS ALL JAZZ. YOU MY LOVE ARE ONE HELL OF A TALENTED WRITER. One that came make me go awww and mushy, one that makes me laugh till i die, and now finally cry myself to sleep. By the way when u win you Pulitzer prize Do remember me!

Sure! I would be honored! Again, I don't know what to say, you are way to sweet and generous with your praises. And writing is just a hobby but if I ever do, you know who I'm gonna dedicate it to! ❤️

Edited by ShwetaSunshine - 13 years ago

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MsDramaQueen

@MsDramaQueen

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Wow.

I need a moment.

This was brilliant Shweta! See?! You can write any style!

But this was your first time writing something as intense as this so I understand if that after-state depression time kicks in.

Wonderful writing it definitely sent goosebumps all over my body!

Arnav suiciding? Woa.. that was intense!

Your an amazing writer Shweta keep it up!

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Very well written..Made me cry.. 😭I remember the lines from "Tere Liye's"(One of my favorite shows) title songs.. "Iss duniya mein jaan gawa tujhe uss duniya mein haasil kar loon" Some other universe they are together FOREVER..