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Posted: 13 years ago
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smitar, for you as you made me feel better 🤗

Khushi seated in car as Nani asked to take car to go back to GH .

Arnav i will drive he ,he took key from driver, he with eyes ask her to come at front

Buaji: we will take auto then

Arnav: step out of car and gave the key to driver and in anger walk in

Khushi : "Arnav ji"she was about to get down buaji hold her hand

Buaji: "bus ab aur nahi"


Khushi was lost she was thinking of last 6months she was smiling and crying at the same time

They reached GH

Buaji:"Khushi"

Khushi: buaji

Buaji: new landlord repair it

Khushi Arnav ji

Buaji where?

Khushi: nothing she walk in as her cell was ring"hello"

Arnav pick my call at one bell suna tum na

Khushi buaji thi

Arnav: did you like my surprise ?

Khushi walk on the carpeted floor ,she look up the ceiling was painted " hmmm"

Arnav why are you crying?

Khushi how you know ?

Arnav" i think i dont need eyes to see you "

Buaji: khushi. she hide the cell

Khushi ji buaji

Buaji: " if he call you ask him to send his Nani and Dadi as soon as possible i dont want to face everything again"

Khushi: kya buaji hum samjhe nahi

Buaji: when you got married everyone pointed us that you had and affair with him , how much i and Garmia had to face you dont know , if this time they all come to know that you were staying with him without taking pheres they will point at us again"

Khushi held her breath " i will say to him"

Arnav could hear her clearly he closed his fist

Buaji: " khushi tell me one thing "

Khushi: ji buaji

Buaji: " tum kahin maa"

Arnav "shit i have to be with her" he walk out of his room

Khushi buaji

Buaji: ab yeh maat bolna ka tumara iss ka saath aise rasta nahi hain, hum na khud dekha hai , she walk and slam the door



Dadi: Deviyani you have spoiled him, he does not know how to talk to elders .even she had dont a Paap you are making her your bahu , why so? .why you are not giving Anjali husband a second chance

Nani: suwi

Dadi: ask her sis whether she has relation with him or not, the kid will be ,

she paused as the door open with a bang


Arnav walk in " why don't you ask me Dadi?"

Nani: choteey

Arnav: " she is as pure as a, but wait why i clarify to you ?" he walk out he could hear her sob " you dont cry khushi i am coming"

Khushi why are you fighting?

Arnav: if anyone will point at you i will

Khushi: what you will do ? you will break face , but it is fact Arnav ji it is reality , they all will point at us , may be one day our children too ask us was i born before marriage or after , only we know that "

Aranv was about to say some thing when Anjali stopped him"where are you going?"

Arnav :"khushi ka paas"

Dadi: aap nahi ja sakta

Arnav: but why

Dadi: hum na boldiya

Arnav i see who will stop me , he walk out of the door and bang it



Khushi " why you are doing all this?"

Arnav i want to talk to buaji and everyone first Khushi i want to clear everyone that i am your husband and you are my wife ..

Khushi: "you will never listen to me, you cannot put tape on their mouth " she bang the phone



Arnav reach GH saw buaji talking to aunties "Buaji khushi "he walk in the home

Lady one" he is doing everything under your nose and you are not stopping him"

Buaji: had no answer

Arnav: walk back " kya huwa buaji"

Lady besharam log

Arnav:" problem kya hain" he shouted

Khushi ran out " aap undar chala "she pull his arm

Arnav no khushi let me talk to them

Khushi:" someone told them about our marriage "

Arnav what who?

Khushi pata nahi

Arnav: but how?

Khushi nahi pata na

Arnav:" you listen to me " cupped her face

Khushi: is there anything left to listen , tamasha ban diya hain aap na

Arnav" i will fix it"

Khushi: "you use anything but the daag will always stay on me, stayed 6 month with," she paused" i use to say to Lavanya ji but i myself did it"she cried , holding his arm ,he hold her close she hug him as she was losing her strength ,she need support and he was her only support thou he was the one who had given her this daag

Arnav: "you stayed with your husband do you get that and your Devi maiyan knows it" hug her tight

Khushi "do it quickly before they all kill me with their taunt?" he hold her more tight


dont take me wrong but it is the fact in our countries people do talk like that they will point at you but forget that their 4 fingers are pointing at them self . if a girl came back to her parents they ask question we cannot close eyes and say it does not happen.Dadi had put the worst label on her character. we cannot let it go like that . it is harsh reality

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it!!!!!!!!!!
ur Dadi said a lot more n i too actually wanted today for Dadi do question a lil further so that Arnav cud have done more "Wat the's".


So someone told the Laxmi Nagar inhabitants about their supposed marriage..
this is a nice inclusion...
wat if Shyam does it on the show too...!!!!!!!!! Snakeji is scarier this time.


Arnav surely needs to do more on the show too...
the "Daag" has been put n Snakey will use it to most.

Edited by 18shabbo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Poor Khushi! Dard & Dava from same source, Arnav!
Edited by smitar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very emotional one.. that mark gone stay always😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great one...

the pain was visible
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice 😭 i was waiting 4 ur os 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG shyam will flash the news...Now I am restless after watching episode and this OS.Really scaring me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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emotional one api plz part 2 also plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi naddiya dear as i awlyz told u,,,ur such amzing writter,,
and if app ka os dakha jaye tu dear,,its really happen in life larki k daman mi jo dag lag jaye wo kabhi nahi jata or yaa duniya kabhi app ka saath nahi dati,,yes dear ya serif serials mi ji nahi hota,,,os is superb dear,,,,,greattt naddiya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg I hadn't thought of this, I hope cvs haven't also cos this will kill khushi and I think if it happens my heart will break. Very well written ,

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