New Arhi FF- To Live Another Day-PG 4!Rest of PT 2

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

This is a great story! I think you will get more readers here, eventually when this thread reaches 15 pages or so, it will get moved to the FF page. Please continue soon!! 😊

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CanadianAddict

@CanadianAddict

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Rhysenn
This is a great story! I think you will get more readers here, eventually when this thread reaches 15 pages or so, it will get moved to the FF page. Please continue soon!! 😊

Ok thanks! I will just keep it here then :). Glad to know you are enjoying the tale, I am working on the second segment of this part two as I type this. Thank you very much for your lovely comment!😊

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Sadaf

@butterfly06

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

very nice do con't please. :)

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Very interesting. Is this a mystery thriller?

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CanadianAddict

@CanadianAddict

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

@Butterfly06: thank you very much! :D I am continuing it as we speak, after a little break though

@thebubblespop12: yup! A crime drama thriller, combining my love of acton movies (Bourne series, Minority Report, Take etc etc.) Thanks for your comment :D

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Hello,

You are a good writer.I really liked the 1st chapter. I never felt the need of character sketch as it was quite evident that Arnav is working for the govt for exposing criminals.i am going to religiously follow your updates. Please PM when you update

Good Luck👏

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CanadianAddict

@CanadianAddict

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: bhadraprasad
Hello,

You are a good writer.I really liked the 1st chapter. I never felt the need of character sketch as it was quite evident that Arnav is working for the govt for exposing criminals.i am going to religiously follow your updates. Please PM when you update

Good Luck👏

Thank you very much!! :) That is such a sweet comment 😃 brought a smile to my face. Yea, a secret government agency, one that doesn't almost exist actually. I will obviously bring out those details as the story goes along. I want to take the characters of the story everywhere, fighting in Bermuda, car chase in London 😆...but I am glad you enjoyed it :)

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94pranjali

@94pranjali

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Wow...Amazing...Total different concept!!

Please do continue...anxious to know how this story progress...😊

Update soon!! 😊

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CanadianAddict

@CanadianAddict

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: 94pranjali
Wow...Amazing...Total different concept!!
Please do continue...anxious to know how this story progress...😊
Update soon!! 😊

Thank you dear!! Glad to know you find it refreshing, hoping to get the other part up soon as well :)

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CanadianAddict

@CanadianAddict

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Thanks Anita!

Note: I will not PM about segment 2 of part 2 as I do not want to flood peoples inboxes again when I just sent it out for part 1 segment one, I will just put it up here.