IP REDUX; Tranquil Sea !! - Page 114

Originally posted by: iritz

Is this an OS ritzy ?

Yeah... this is the title for the OS... like it so far? But tu to rehne hi de Ruby... u didn't even read my first one !!!😡

Megha... for now, a long OS... will decide later, eve want to convert it into a SS / FF ! Depends on feedback !!!

So u like the title??

Originally posted by: iritz

Is this an OS ritzy ?

Yeah... this is the title for the OS... like it so far? But tu to rehne hi de Ruby... u didn't even read my first one !!!😡

Megha... for now, a long OS... will decide later, eve want to convert it into a SS / FF ! Depends on feedback !!!

So u like the title??


oh yes very much! 😃

Gals I hv msg DB on Fb for a new thread hopefully she opens it soon, nahi to alternative doondhna

Originally posted by: sonshine

ahh! u didn't like twilight either!

wait! the kids recommended it?

Originally posted by: redwine1

Yeah... this is the title for the OS... like it so far? But tu to rehne hi de Ruby... u didn't even read my first one !!!😡

Megha... for now, a long OS... will decide later, eve want to convert it into a SS / FF ! Depends on feedback !!!

So u like the title??

😃

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3082529/arhi-os-their-first-night

Ye le link !

Originally posted by: iritz

Oye unn dino internet ka panga tha na shifting kar rahi thi .. chal abhi jaa ke padh ti hoon .. i love reading all this yaar .. BRB

😃

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3082529/arhi-os-their-first-night

Ye le link !



Ritzy .. 350 likes & 27 pages of comments.. shdn't we party??? proud of u girl...🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

That dialogue of Payal was one that i loved wen it aired and thou it wud come into play in the future because there love was never tested, however Akash knew her nature before they got married, she cud never seem to 2 string many sentences together and Akash was shown as bein reasonable not jumping to conclusions and that is where I think he changed before this track started.

Originally posted by: Aeryn

<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">c the difference in the 2 couples is very basic ..</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Payash .. got married on a fleeting likeness & attraction .. which they hoped to get developed into love .. they had no clue about the other .. hence Payal's dialogue ... aap humare baare main jaante hi kitna hai jo aap humse shaadi karna chahte hai ..</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">The fleeting feeling that were developing . got staunched first because of all the problems mami was creating .. then Babli fiasco .. & now this HUGE blunder</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">These two will take time to bridge gap .. & both the sisters have to learn to open up to their husbands ... yesterday payal cud've told akash about Khushi's bday & told him she dint want ne 1 wishing her .. but yet again when there is already an issue of not sharing .. she compounds it ..</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">The other couple ASR & Khushi .. they have an innate understanding of the other ... hence even when they r fighting they r one ..</font>

Originally posted by: namedx

Exactly!!

if i am guessing correctly what it is about, that can prove harmful

Originally posted by: meghavn

😃

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3082529/arhi-os-their-first-night

Ye le link !

Ritzy .. 350 likes & 27 pages of comments.. shdn't we party??? proud of u girl...🥳

I know... I was shocked to see 350 likes !!! 😆

And that's coz of you all... specially u Megha for inspiring me to go on !!!🤗