O.S - One Day at at Time! - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
A very sad yet touchy OS!!
Very well written!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
oh so sad she died but he is getting through his life nonetheless

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fabulous hun!

It's been five whole minutes since I read the last line and I'm still crying... It was so beautiful and so painful - mixed just perfect!

Loved it - doesn't look like your first attempt! Keep writing more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
i have tears while reading the ending
plz write a romantic one to balance plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG i've tears in my eyes 😭 it ws really very emotional n i've read walk 2 remember also...kudoos 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it is beautiful..i have tears in my eyes..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is specisal..same like the story of "a walk to remember : :)
- Jamie saved my life :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arnav placed the bouquet of flowers at it's place and looked up sheepishly at his wife. "I am sorry I am late again. I….." he began but was cut out by a cheeky grin from his wife. "You never run out of excuses, do you?" she asked enjoying his apparent discomfort. "It's okay, I wasn't really waiting for you anyways" she shrugged. "Is that so?" came the amused reply. "Honestly, I was rather enjoying myself." "Doing what?" asked Arnav warily. "I was wondering why Lakshmi ji does not like my Jalebis, she isn't a diabetic by any chance, is she? I doubt that though, she isn't as hot as you, so I guess she isn't a diabetic. Oh, I didn't mean that 'hot', it's not like you aren't hot hot, you know you obviously are , that is why you smirk so much. Honestly if you ask me your smirk is sexy but your scowl is sexier. But anyways what I meant was Lakshmi ji isn't as 'hot' as in short tempered as you , so I guess she is not a diabetic" she concluded with a straight face. Arnav looked at her almost expressionless for a moment before he burst out into a full fledged laughter.

😔 i was waiting for a heartmelting...story...with happy ending..and lots of romance...but u made my eyes fill with tears...and its really heartfelt...becoz..this wat my mom felt whn we lost our daddy...even nw she cries...and it has been morethan 20yrs...its really sad..and UR OS is wonderful...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is a jack-in-the-box story, whose innocent and expectant romance draws you in, lulls you into a comfort zone and then pops a raw and agonizing 'surprise' in your face. Leaves you completely numb.

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