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Nice update soon and PM me also
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it was nice one...that sounds original...
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I really liked it! Plz plz plz continue! :D
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well jiji i think ur story is kamaal and it is super duper hit so update soon lots of love from shayal
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Sure Im writing it abt now shayal !! :) Love you tooo !! :)
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To Shayal !! luv u !! J

Mr.Amar Singh Raizada returned to the Gupta Mansion . He was walking in with probably a guilty feeling . He had missed his son alot . Alot would be an understatement he had realized what he had lost it had dawned to him that more than the business , relations mattered and he had only one : His son. He wanted him back he wanted to spend the remaining years of his life with his son and his family.

When he walked into the mansion he saw a very confusing view his son Arnav was a matured young man from a boy as he had left him years ago and he was running around he presumed Khushi. He was laughing and was chasing her down the stairs . Until Arnav saw his father , He stopped immediately probably he sensed the future. Why had this man come back? Why ?

He went upto Arnav and hugged him and Arnav was surprised . He didn't expext that infact he expected nothing from his dad. He didn't want anything as well he had his life Khushi here with him he had his family in the Gupta mansion. Khushi saw Arnav she immediately understood who this man was . Arnav had told her about his dad but they both had assumed that he would never come back for Arnav but he did . And this time both their heart-beats were pacing .

Khushi called Shashi "Papa Amar Uncle aaye hain Jaldi aayiye "

Shashi came down and both Amar and Shashi greeted each other warmly "Amar look tumhara arnav is a grown up young man now "

"Haan Shashi My Beta " Arnav clenched his fist hearing that. "Shashi I have come to take my Arnav back"

"Papa " Arnav said "No papa mein yahan se nahi jaunga papa nahi jaa sakta"

Amar looked at arnav " Beta dekho I need you Mere paas waise bhi nohot din nahi bache hain beta "

Arnav was still admant " Mein yeh ghar chod ke nahi jaa sakta iss ghar ne mujhe woh sab kuch diya jo aap mujhe kabhi nahi de sake he gave me everything papa you are just there for name sake "

Amar was stunned . He was a very suspicious man and came to conclusions very fast and so did this time . He looked at Shashi "Toh you changed my son Shashi tumne mujhse mera beta cheena agar tumhein paise chahiye hota toh mujhe bata dete . You stole my son..? Tum itne gire hue the i didn't know warna Arnav ko yahn kabhi nahi chodta"

Arnav was enraged "Bas!! " Arnav screamed , Arnav instructed Khushi by his eyes to go inside he knew she could not bear this " Papa Shashi uncle ne mujhe aapse china nahi chaha tha aur unhone china bhi nahi meine is anjaan ghar mein apna ghar basaya hai I love this house Papa Ismein sab kuch hai jo aap shaayad mujhe de sakhe"

Amar looked at his son and then to Shashi " Toh you have totally brainwashed him how much money do you want you freak !! Mera beta mujhe dedo"

Shashi was insulted way beyond his point to handle " Bas!! Ab Amar tum apne bte ko lejau mujhe isse ya tumse koi rishta nahi rakhna .I thought ki hum dono dost the par tum to Dushman se bhi bure hai Amar !! Go to hell with you !! "

Amar " Arnav will never come here " He just dragged Arnav with him . Arnav pushed him and touched Shashi's feet " Plzz uncle don't do this " But Shashi didn't look down and he just left . Amar pulled Arnav along with him .

That's how they departed after years of their love ...but wthis was not the end it couldn't be..

Arnav called Khushi the day he left the house " Khushi mat ro plz mein tumheein rota dekh nahi sakta ..sorry sun nahi sakta " Arnav laughed trying to make her happy . " Woh tumhaare pichle PJ se bhi bura tha Arnav .." He could hear her tears . "Khushi sab kuch theek ho jayega , Dekho abhi tum ro mat mein Mein abhi aa raha hoon Khushi come to the Ganga tat " Khushi just nodded Arnav Knew Khushi too well e could hear her feel her ovr the phone .

Khushi came wearing Arnav's favourite colour. Arnav and Khushi came here every evening in their seven year relationship. He was twenty-three and she was twenty-two . Even the waves in the Ganga knew about their pure love . It seemed to be crying today the waves were furiously fast Arnav and Khushi were very silent unlike their usual nok-jhoks . Both knew what was coming ahead for them " Arnav Mein tumhare bina jee na" Arnav put his finger on her lip " Chup Khushi 1! Khabardar jo esi baatein ki toh !! Sab Kuch theek ho jayega dekhna agar tum nahi rahogi toh Arnav kaun hai Khushi?" "Khushi, I live for you " Khushi hugged him while sitin "Par Arnav papa toh kabhi nahi maanenge" "Nahi khushi Uncle maan jayenge aur mere papa unhein papa kehte hue bhi sharaam aati hai mein unke saath nahi reh sakta . Tumhein pata hai naa?" Khushi nodded and both of them held their hands tight with Khushi's shoulder on Arnav's they were watching the sunset but who knew that probably this sun-set was to cover upon their lives.

Amar had gone on a daily walk when he saw Arnav and Khushi together he had immediately called Shashi and they went close to them and both of them stood up "Papa hum aapko batane hi wale the " Khushi said "Bas Khushi" Shashi said . Amar could not handle this "Dekho isne mere bte ko phasaya aur Shashi tumhein mere bte jaisa raeez daaamad chahiye tha toh isliye tume mere bte ko is ladki se phasa liya " "Amar bas meri beti ne esakuch nahi kiya hoga tumhaara beta tha humaare ghar mein usne kuch kiya hoga . Meri beti ke liye toh lakhon Arnav khaade ho sakte hai dekhna mein iski shaadi Saath din ke andar Arnav se bhi acche ladke se karwaaunga "

Amar to in his ego said "Mein bhi apni bte ke liye tumhaari beti se behtar ladki dhoondh kar shaadi karwaaunga"

This was the challenge of their of their ego's but both their eyes failed to see the love that binded both Arnav and Khushi's heart.

Soon , All the preparations for the marriage started Khushi told Payal to convince her dad not too. Khushi was not allowed to go out of the house nor keep a mobile and the same followed for Arnav. Both Amar and Shashi were very egoistic that Shashi for the first time didn''t think about Khushi's happiness.

Khushi was supposed to be tying the knot with Akash Malhotra one of the leading businessman's son and Arnav with the Kashyap's daughter Lavanya Kashyap. The marriage Preparations were going on full speed soon the seven days were over the marriage of Arnav and Khushi were on opposite sides . They both could see each other it yearned for each other but their dads bound them to that place there was strict security making sure that there was no obastruction from the raizaadas and Guptas respectively.

The marriage rituals were about to begin when Khushi's heart failed to bear more stress and pain she fainted Arnav saw his Khushi fain and at that moment He forgot everything else his Khushi needed him and he had to go no matter even if the world was coming to an end...He ran out of the mandap to where his Khushi was ...

To be Continued

The next part will be the finale !! Hope you liked it Thank you soo much for all the appreciation !! Hope you like this one as well* fingers crossed *

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Looking forward to your opinions !! :)
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Originally posted by: Sarunforeva

To Shayal !! luv u !! J

wa wa wa this fantabulous jiji i love it alot ethna acha writer hain aap and i loveee u to more than infinity

Mr.Amar Singh Raizada returned to the Gupta Mansion . He was
walking in with probably a guilty feeling .
He had missed his son alot . Alot would be an understatement he had
realized what he had lost it had dawned to him that more than the business ,
relations mattered and he had only one : His son. He wanted him back he wanted
to spend the remaining years of his life
with his son and his family.


When he walked into the
mansion he saw a very confusing view his son Arnav was a matured young man from
a boy as he had left him years ago and he was running around he presumed Khushi.
He was laughing and was chasing her down
the stairs . Until Arnav saw his father , He stopped immediately probably he
sensed the future. Why had this man come back? Why ?


He went upto Arnav and
hugged him and Arnav was surprised . He didn't expext that infact he expected
nothing from his dad. He didn't want anything as well he had his life Khushi
here with him he had his family in
the Gupta mansion. Khushi saw Arnav she immediately understood who this man was
. Arnav had told her about his dad but they both had assumed that he would
never come back for Arnav but he did . And this time both their heart-beats
were pacing .


Khushi called Shashi "Papa
Amar Uncle aaye hain Jaldi aayiye "


Shashi came down and both
Amar and Shashi greeted each other warmly "Amar look tumhara arnav is a grown
up young man now "


"Haan Shashi My Beta " Arnav
clenched his fist hearing that. "Shashi I have come to take my Arnav back"


"Papa " Arnav said "No papa
mein yahan se nahi jaunga papa nahi jaa sakta"


Amar looked at arnav " Beta
dekho I need you Mere paas waise bhi nohot din nahi bache hain beta "


Arnav was still admant "
Mein yeh ghar chod ke nahi jaa sakta iss ghar ne mujhe woh sab kuch diya jo aap
mujhe kabhi nahi de sake he gave me everything papa you are just there for name
sake "


Amar was stunned . He was a
very suspicious man and came to conclusions very fast and so did this time . He
looked at Shashi "Toh you changed my son Shashi tumne mujhse mera beta cheena
agar tumhein paise chahiye hota toh mujhe bata dete . You stole my son..? Tum
itne gire hue the i didn't know warna Arnav ko yahn kabhi nahi chodta"


Arnav was enraged "Bas!! "
Arnav screamed , Arnav instructed Khushi by his eyes to go inside he knew she
could not bear this " Papa Shashi uncle ne mujhe aapse china nahi chaha tha aur

unhone china bhi nahi meine is anjaan ghar mein apna ghar basaya hai I love
this house Papa Ismein sab kuch hai jo aap shaayad mujhe de sakhe"


Amar looked at his son and
then to Shashi " Toh you have totally
brainwashed him how much money do
you want you freak !! Mera beta mujhe dedo"


Shashi was insulted way
beyond his point to handle " Bas!! Ab Amar tum apne bte ko lejau mujhe isse ya tumse koi rishta
nahi rakhna .I thought ki hum dono dost the par tum to Dushman se bhi bure hai
Amar !! Go to hell with you !! "


Amar " Arnav will never come
here " He just dragged Arnav with him . Arnav pushed him and touched Shashi's
feet " Plzz uncle don't do this " But Shashi didn't look down and he just left
. Amar pulled Arnav along with him .


That's how they departed
after years of their love ...but wthis was not the end it couldn't be..


Arnav called Khushi the day
he left the house " Khushi mat ro plz mein tumheein rota dekh nahi sakta
..sorry sun nahi sakta " Arnav laughed trying to make her happy . " Woh tumhaare pichle PJ se bhi bura
tha Arnav .." He could hear her tears . "Khushi sab kuch theek ho jayega , Dekho abhi tum ro mat mein Mein abhi aa raha hoon Khushi come to the
Ganga tat " Khushi just nodded Arnav Knew Khushi too well e could hear her feel
her ovr the phone .


Khushi came wearing Arnav's
favourite colour. Arnav and Khushi came here every evening in their seven year
relationship. He was twenty-three and she was twenty-two . Even the waves in the Ganga knew about their pure love
. It seemed to be crying today the waves were furiously fast Arnav and Khushi
were very silent unlike their usual nok-jhoks . Both knew what was coming ahead
for them " Arnav Mein tumhare bina jee na" Arnav put his finger on her lip "
Chup Khushi 1! Khabardar jo esi baatein ki toh !! Sab Kuch theek ho jayega
dekhna agar tum nahi rahogi toh Arnav kaun hai Khushi?" "Khushi, I live for you
" Khushi hugged him while sitin "Par Arnav papa toh kabhi nahi maanenge" "Nahi
khushi Uncle maan jayenge aur mere papa
unhein papa kehte hue bhi sharaam aati hai mein unke saath nahi reh
sakta . Tumhein pata hai naa?" Khushi nodded and both of them held their hands
tight with Khushi's shoulder on Arnav's they
were watching the sunset but who knew that probably this sun-set was to
cover upon their lives.


Amar had gone on a daily
walk when he saw Arnav and Khushi together
he had immediately called Shashi and
they went close to them and both of them stood up "Papa hum aapko batane
hi wale the " Khushi said "Bas Khushi"
Shashi said . Amar could not handle this "Dekho isne mere bte ko phasaya aur
Shashi tumhein mere bte jaisa
raeez daaamad chahiye tha toh isliye
tume mere bte ko is ladki se phasa liya " "Amar bas meri beti ne esakuch nahi kiya hoga tumhaara beta tha
humaare ghar mein usne kuch kiya hoga . Meri beti ke liye toh lakhon Arnav
khaade ho sakte hai dekhna mein iski shaadi Saath din ke andar Arnav se bhi
acche ladke se karwaaunga "


Amar to in his ego said "Mein bhi apni bte ke liye
tumhaari beti se behtar ladki dhoondh kar shaadi karwaaunga"


This was the challenge of
their of their ego's but both their eyes failed to see the love that binded
both Arnav and Khushi's heart.


Soon , All the preparations
for the marriage started Khushi told Payal to convince her dad not too. Khushi
was not allowed to go out of the house nor keep a mobile and the same followed
for Arnav. Both Amar and Shashi were very egoistic that Shashi for the first time didn''t think about Khushi's
happiness.


Khushi was supposed to be
tying the knot with Akash Malhotra one of the leading businessman's son and
Arnav with the Kashyap's daughter Lavanya Kashyap. The marriage Preparations
were going on full speed soon the seven days were over the marriage of Arnav
and Khushi were on opposite sides . They both could see each other it yearned
for each other but their dads bound them to that place there was strict
security making sure that there was no obastruction from the raizaadas and Guptas respectively.


The marriage rituals were
about to begin when Khushi's heart failed to bear more stress and pain she
fainted Arnav saw his Khushi fain and at that moment He forgot everything else
his Khushi needed him and he had to go no matter even if the world was coming
to an end...He ran out of the mandap to where his Khushi was ...



To be Continued


The next part will be the
finale !! Hope you liked it Thank you soo much for all the appreciation !! Hope
you like this one as well* fingers crossed *



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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it !! I like ur OS very much !! :) ITs refreshing dear !! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey dear nice Os !! Aww I love arshi !! :)

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