OS: The Raizada Heaven

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Fari

@SmileyStar

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

I unres'd my comment on pg 2 :)

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

hiii
awesome update

loved it

sooo cute

adorable

the perfect family

thanks 4 da pm

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

awesome os loved it the bonding of a perfect family so loved it arnav and khushi and jrs loved how the fought but no one picks on his sister awesome thanks for the pm

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

aww this was cute.. nicely written :)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

hai dono os birhtday gift aur the raizada heaven are simply superb man
kya baat hai dono bhai behn apne maata pita per gaye hain
arhi have such cute kids

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

a cute and fun-filled os... loved the sibling banter and support! well-written

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Awesome update swthrt and must tell aap mere line pe aa gaye apne bhi lamba sa update kiya and must it was very cute Asmi and Ashar are very cute and I hope you keep updating this and make this OS a ss as am missing ur writing on IF and somewhere I felt it was a mix of episodes from our lives like dat of cooking like uncle does for you and the fight scene I expirenced in Mumbai I fell dat that, that's why you wanted me to read it...so keep writing

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: SmileyStar
Reserved!

OMG! You're on a roll, girl! :)

*EDITED*

OMG!! That was sooo Good!! So brilliantly written! The perfect Raizada house!

I loved how you included Sarah and all! And NK's naughty naughty babua cracked me up :)

It seems like where I'd left, you took it from there and wrote ahead! It was sooo nice!! I loved it totally! How Asmara still gives Arnav a hug when he returns, how Khushi still makes Ashar wear multi coloured shirts! It was all so beautiful! You're a genius for writing this :) I LOVED LOVED LOVED It!! And write more more more :)

Aww! Thank you sooo much Fari! 😃 n yeah I just continued from where you left it😃 It can become one of the entries of ASR jr's diary...😃

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Sweet_Ashum

@Sweet_Ashum

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi
Awesome update swthrt and must tell aap mere line pe aa gaye apne bhi lamba sa update kiya and must it was very cute Asmi and Ashar are very cute and I hope you keep updating this and make this OS a ss as am missing ur writing on IF and somewhere I felt it was a mix of episodes from our lives like dat of cooking like uncle does for you and the fight scene I expirenced in Mumbai I fell dat that, that's why you wanted me to read it...so keep writing

Thank you so much madame! And yeah It does have a mix of our lives😃..It fit in just perfectly...